Chasing Dreams 4 27B Pg119 NewSS & THd5 link Pg139 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my...the wait was worth it.
Flowers all the way...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the mega update!!! I'm sure that took a lot of effort...so flowers for that!!

There was just so much going on in this update, I feel like I will have to read again so I didn't miss anything.

Poor Khushi is such a confused person...I'm sure this is all very new for her, and that she is scared. However, I hate to say it again, but Arnav has been open and honest about his stance on marriage before, and it really shouldn't come as a shock to her. And the fact that she thinks she can still persuade him on their weekend getaway seems kind of foolish to me.

What is with the Avinaash story? Does her father already suspect her of having a boyfriend in Delhi that he is so adamant about pushing this relationship through. She really has to be adamant about not wanting it, as if she consents, that will lead to three unhappy people, as there is no way she would be able to fully give herself to her new husband, as her thoughts would be occupied by Arnav.

Office gossip spreads fast, and Arnav should realize what it does to a girl like Khushi. I'm glad that he made amends and she was able to forgive him. However, I don't see how long his patience can last with his relationship with Khushi. He is used to flaunting his relationships, and being with a woman in all senses. There is only so much he can take in terms of waiting.

Sorry I'm just rambling about all the points that I remember from the top of my head, but you had me captivated reading this update. But with the cliffhanger, I can't wait for the next part (I'm just being greedy now)!
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Posted: 12 years ago
9000 words !!But not at one moment did I feel as to why this update is not ending...
Coming to the update...
Arnav's answer was not surprising because we knew how is parents died...his answer was just what many adults in this century think...
I truly understand Khushi's insecurity/worries..If I was in her place I'm sure I would have been worse..But I must say that Arnav is doing a good job of not being too pushy..
The weekend trip was so well written..I just fell love with this Arnav ...His surprises,their banter ,Khushi making Rabdi and addressing his mother as Ma shows how much they have progressed in their relationship...
Then the dinner ...the dress was classy and beautiful...and their small make out ..ahem..ahem..what would have happened if the call had not interrupted them??
Arnav - your signs and symptoms lead to only one diagnosis ..LOVE ...but when will he realize it??
And lastly ...a cliff hanger again...now what did babuji say that led Khushi to utter the last line..





Edited by meera06 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome udpate loved it. khushi and arnav emotions were portrayed so beautifully, can understand her contemplation, the love she cannot hold back for the man who does not believe in commitments and she believes only in that, here slowly arnav is fighting his emotions because you rightly she is not his want, but need, so when the feeling of need has taken place, obviously it will lead to passion, obsession, possessiveness and sense of belonging towards each other. And of course he needs to face withdrawal symptoms like khushi said in the end " I cannot do this anymore arnav." waiting for arnav's reaction to that.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb NB...!!
i luvv this story becaue it's pretty realistic...😃
but a deadly cliffhanger at the end...😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was your best updates. It is sad to see a girl like Khushi with strong morals and believes to give in... But she knows that she really lo Ed Arnav and it will be worth to take a chance.
I hope Arnav also realizes the depth of his feelings.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Why do you always leave us hanging? :P what could her father have said to change her mind in a couple of seconds!! but both arnav and khushi have sizzling chemistry between them to make khushi forget about all her values. But
I'm happy to see her come out of her comfort zone. It must have taken a great deal of courage for her to come alone with him to the farmhouse. And thanks a lot for the long update! loved it as always !! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update..but the cliffhanger is too much!...i dont think I can ever get enough of this story
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...that was some update.
lots of flowers...no chappals...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Showering my love to you darling...only lovvveee...so Khushi id gng to end this whatever they are dng n Arnav id coming close to the realisation that he is falling for her...waiting for to know more...

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