You and Me........ FOREVER! Part 9 updated-pg 98 (24/04/2014) - Page 53

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu3003

wat s dis😲😲

i wanna read d nxt part soon
update t soon


Dii ...
The next part is on it's way.. Thanks for commenting😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks a lot dear--
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishu88

wat d hell...


rey committed suicide?? *angry face*

kria y r u doing this..

listen i don't want any sad ending... ur title suggests a happy ending wala title.. so remember i want happy ending..

n don't end it in 3 chaps continue na..:(((

waiting for next chapter...


Thanks 4 the comment dear.. Don't worry you would surely be happy by the ending😉 Hopefully...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Devil

res

unres...
sorry for the dalay 😳
amazing updateee...
kria has suffered alot 😭
arghhh usss gang ko tohhh 😡
how can they stoop sooo low..
they are sooo gonna dead...
abb jaldi rey aapne baatcutter ko manale...
loved it...
thnx fr d pm...


Thanks a lot dear--
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

wht d hell 😡

yeh kya tha😳

yr me 1st part padjke khush ho gyi bt lst me😔
me cmt nhi dene bali sohu i dnt lyk dis update😳


Awww my Kuhu-- You will surely love the next update..😉 Comment diya tou sahi.. Thanks😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life

Nice update :)

W*F Rey jumped down from the top of a building
I know he's in love with Kriya but is he crazy
I hope things get better soon


Thanks dear-- Hmmm pyaar mai paghal hai woh..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chand91

kya hai yea??

m i dreaming
plz cnt soon


Tum nahi per koi aur dream kar raha ho sakta hai😉 Thanks 4 d cmnt..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aanchal_Kreya

really sorry for late comment
all the updates were awesome
but what the hell was it at the last
i m going to kill u for this soha
update soon


Thanks for liking it Aanchal-- Hmm everybody is ready 2 kill me 4 dat update but maybe I will be saved from the nxt update..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --resh_kr--

heyya! i'm here again!🤗
well, update was awesome!!!
di, ur such an amazing writer!
every sentence and every word has its own essence when U write it...👏
i wish i wud get a trainee like u to make my writing skills better...😳
romance nd all..hayeee!☺️
u described the romance scene beautifully...
and...SERIOUSLY???
REY JUMPED OFF????
i was like "O"!!!!😲
i wanna know ki wat wud be kria's expression after seeing this!
nice update...and sorry for the late comment
-love,
ur sweety


Thanks my sweety-- That is really a compliment for me, Thanks a lot!!
Romamnce-- I'm nt so gud in writing it but I'm glad u liked it😳
Hmmm update is on it's way...
Love,
Ur Soha di!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello peeps... What's happening?
I know you guys are upset with me for the last update, some were ready to kill me and some almost did. Hmmm you guys have all the rights😉... Well I will not say anything else, read the update and I will meet you at the end of it..😊

Part 8

"The lessons you get from life are not always to bring something good but in some cases they can bring a glow to someone's life and maybe it's gonna be in my life too."

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"No, Rey, nooo..." She ran towards him, cutting through the crowd. She was going to touch his face but then a paper near his hand diverted her attention. She took the paper in her hand and opened it slowly. Something was weird that she couldn't understand herself. Why the hell she was so calm?? Yes there was her LOVE's body lying in front of her without a single sight of life in it but she was relaxed, relaxed as if everything was alright.

"I know everything is alright, my love!"

-Main tumhare bina kese jeeta- She smiled on reading the words written on the note.

"Ab aapko mere bina jeena nahi parega."

She got up with a jerk as if on a bumpy road, smiling. Hell yes she was smiling. What an idiot, smiling on such a horror dream. No, not an idiot! It's Kriya- Kriya Ghai, the fighter, who is never convinced by something normal. Her life has always been a rush-ride in which she faced everything so smoothly and uniquely, surprising the world around her but there had been only one point where she broke down. The fighter, the Diva Kriya was lost somewhere and maybe this time it was destiny's turn to show her something unique which can make her life smooth again.

Yes it was just a dream she saw. It was dawn by now. She was relaxed and knew what to do but she wouldn't go to sleep anymore, she was restless. She had to go out for some fresh air and so she came out to the street.

It was cold outside and she was only wearing her night gown so she decided to go inside to get a jersey but then she saw a manly figure at a distance. There was not much sunlight spread at that time but she could easily tell who that person was. She slowly started walking towards him. His back was facing her so he couldn't see her coming. She stood at two step distance from him, reluctant whether to do what she was going to do or not.

He sensed someone's presence there so he turned around to see who it is but as he faced her she quickly wrapped her arms around him. He was astound by the sudden movement but relaxed to see Kriya in his arms. Why wouldn't he not be relaxed to have the Love of his Life in his arms after such a long time. No sorry, to have his "LIFE" in his arms. All he could say was "Kriya" but there was no reply.

"Kriya" he said again but then felt his shirt wet and find out that Kriya was crying. He broke the hug and cupped her face. "Kriya, baby don't cry", he said with concern. "Rey.. Rey I'm sorry, mujhe maaf kardo.. I know k sorry word buhut chota hai kiun k maine aapko buhut hurt kiya haina", she replied still crying.

Rey: Kriya no, you don't have to say sorry because ghalat tou humesha main tha jo tumhe samajh nahi paya.

Kriya: Nahi ghalat tou main thi jo aapke pyaar ko samajh nahi paayi.

"Nahi tum dono mai se koi ghalat nahi tha", a voice said from behing startling them. They quickly got apart as they saw Payal coming. She just smiled on seeing the two lovers' gesture.

Rey: Mom aap...

Payal: Haan main, ghalat time per aayi kia? She said raising her eyebrow.

Rey: No, nahi..

Payal: So main keh rahi thi tum dono mai se koi ghalat nahi tha sirf samajhne mai dair ki aur phir zamaana ghalat tha tum log nahi.

Rey and Kriya just nodded and gave an understanding look to eachother.

Payal walked towards Kriya and kissed her on the forehead. "Tum meri beti jesi nahi, beti ho."

Kriya: Aunty... I don't know what to say but maybe I can atleast say Thanks.

Payal: Hmm ye thanks tou tub except karoon gi jub mujhe mom bulao gi aunty nahi.

Kriya smiled and nodded a yes... "Jee Maa".

Payal: Bahar buhut sardi hai, tum dono andar aajao.

Rey: Yes mom, just give us two minutes.

Payal smiled and went inside. Rey looked deeply into Kriya's eyes. The spark was back but not fully and he knew what to do for that. He held her by waist and drew her closer to him, they were so close that his hot breath was hitting her face and he could hear her rising heartbeat. They looked deeply into each other's eyes. Oh, It felt heavenly to look in those eyes again with such proximity.

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan


"Kriya"...

"Haan Rey"...

"Kuch bolo"...

Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan


"Kia"?

"Jo mann mai hai"

"Mann mai tou buhut kuch hai"

"Tou aaj bol do"

"Aap mere ache dost se ziada nahi ho"

"What"?? (Mouth dropped)

"Aap mere liye sub kuch ho"

"Jese k"? (Smile crept on face)

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan


Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan


"I... Love... You"!

At that time he had no power to reply because she had got all the power of emotions to say those words, those three words which were so common to the world but everything to him.

He just held her more closer, so close that there forheads were touching and breaths were mixing. He unintentionally was rubbing his hand on her waist. He could feel her smooth skin from the silk gown she was wearing. She was trying so hard to control her desires because his touch was having such a huge effect on her. She was craving for more and so was him but before anything they had to clear all the matters.

A big blow of cold wind came almost moving them from their spot. She instantly hugged him, scared from the sudden blow. He put his arms protectively around her. They were surely lost in the moment.

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

They were in the same position when they heard a car beep and that's when they realised, they were on the street and in the way of that car. Kriya and Rey moved from there a bit embarrased. The man in the car just muttered "The morning Love Birds"!!. KriYaansh couldn't hear what he said but they could see the naughty smile playing on his face which made them even more uncomfortable.

Rey: Kriya come, let's go inside.

Kriya: Aapke ghar per?

Rey: Nahi... Humare ghar per...!

He said giving one of his most killer playful smiles that Kriya couldn't even help herself but smile. She so knew one of his those smiles. He was surely upto something and maybe she knew what was that.

They walked in Rey's house where Payal was setting the table for breakfast. "Aagaye, chalo jaldi se fresh ho jao aur nashte (breakfast) k liye aajao". Rey nodded in yes but Kriya's face gave a puzzled impression.

Payal: Kia hua Kriya beta?

Kriya: Aunty.. mera mutlab Maa woh mujhe change karna hai, kia main apne ghar jaa kar change kar loon?

As Kriya said that, Rey turned his eyes upon Kriya. She was still in her black night gown and she surely looked so appealing to him. Kriya felt uncomfortable by his intense gaze but didn't show. Payal sensed her uncomfort and and said "Sure beta as you want"

Rey called her from behind "Kriya ruko"..

Kriya: Kia hua??

"Oh kuch nahi jao"

"Hmmm"

Rey felt stupid at that time for stopping her for no reason but there was actually a reason which he didn't even wanted to realise himself. He was 'afraid'. Afraid of letting her go as if he would loose her again if she go away from him even for a short time. He shook his thoughts away and went to his room for getting fresh.

"Youngsters"... Payal said to herself and smiled.

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Kriya came back wearing a simple pink frock. Rey was already on the table and when he looked at him, he couldn't take his eyes off. "Arrgghh why the hell she could manage to look HOT and CUTE in every dress", he thought to himself. This feeling was killing him that he just can't have her right now.

Kriya settled on a dining chair and Payal served the food. It was parathaas, Rey and Kriya's favourite. They both screamed like kids "Wow Parathas". Kriya took a mouthful of paratha which made it hard for her to chew. Payal and Rey loved that sight of Kriya struggling with the food in her mouth. Rey was REY but even Payal found Kriya really cute. She felt her wish of many years coming true, her wish of having a daughter. Kriya noticed the two staring at her when she stopped struggling. "Maa you know you cook same like my maa, same taste, same smell and same Feeling".. Kriya said stressing on the last word.

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"I was not wrong by stating my life as a roller coaster. It surely takes such sudden turns that I myself remain startled but this time I know this turn is for a Fresh New Start".

"Nothing much to say today.. Just to say it was the most satisfying day for me after this whole year and I know my life would be much more relaxed from now on"

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Hello again buddies..

So how was the twist?? Am I saved now??😃

Please hit the like button and comment fast.

Darls, iss baar jaldi comment karna.😛

Love ya all,

Take Care.

-Soha-

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