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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#911

Aw!! it was absolutely brilliant!

Getting too riskier day by day... the dawdling of the news i mean! and what happens after she gets to know that Anjali is to marry the same murderer who Khushi saw killing her husband!

I shudder to think!

Alright! so Akash ready to tie the knot as well!! ?thats naaice! :)

Aha!! the moment ! :) The Shikaa and Shiaad meet again! and what a way that was!! muaah! :)Loved it!

Now now! who was the one to witness the lovebirds? I am putting my bets on Shyam Manohar Jha!!:)

Well lets see whats in the next! :)

Thanks Madhu! this was surely a good one!

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#912

Loved the whole story
Spent 5 hours straight reading this
Awesome
Was it shyam who had see ...???
Gosh when will you update

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#913

Wow...caught up with this story...awesome!

Loving this story...what a mix...fantastic...

Arnav and Khushi...loving their relationship...very well put...

Get this feeling that Khushi going be in grave danger...hope she tells Arnav everything soon...the family should know this ..ASAP...

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#914

Wonderful update.
They have decided to delay the information regarding the killer and this delay is going to cost..in what way we will have to wait and see.
Loved the banter between the two sisters and Khushi teasing Payal about Akash.
Arnav is surprised to know the interest Akash has for Payal and he can't wait for his own lady love to arrive so that he can ask her few questions and he gets the chance and the sensual haze he creates around her and gets to kiss her again looks like our boy can't keep his hands off her.
I wonder who has caught them kissing.
Awesome update..loved it.
Please continue soon.

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#915

The whole lasso tug and pull was fabulous !

What a twist to the original take !😆

Finally Arnav and Khushi met but who has caught this little rendezvous ? Is it a friend or foe ?😕

Again she missed out on seeing that Shyam is the man to whom Anjali has been betrothed but i guess the party isnt yet over ...i wonder how Khushi and Shashi will now disclose their secret.

Akash on the other hand is moving fast !

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#916

Unresed here :)

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#917

nice dear😊

plz update soon😃

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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#918

Thanks for the update. I like how you focus on all characters rather than just the main leads. It gives the story a more realistic touch. Poor Khushi is unable to tell the Raizada's about the murder when they are in celebration mode. It's sweet to know that Akash wants to marry Payal. Aww, Arshi has finally reunited after a long time and they shared a sweet moment together. I wonder whether it was Shyam that walked into Arshi's embrace.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#919

I loved this slow and long wait before they were finally alone. Simply loved the lasso scene and yes very similar to the dupatta/kiss scene in IPK but what I loved the most was your description of him, with his hat and hooded eyes. Nothing sexier than a cowboy ASR! But who saw them? My guess is Anjali. It did feel like you were giving us something sweet before something bad happens though. I hope she gets to tell him about Danny before she sees Shyam as I don't think she will spill the beans then. Really hope there is no MU please.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#920

awesome update...so cant tell Anjali today...hope they can tell her soon...loved Khushi-Payal and Arnav-Akash convo...and Arnav & Khushi encounter...their kiss...who saw them...cant wait for next part...