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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPER UPDATE
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awesome story dying for next chapter plz plz update fast love ariya they r awesome couple
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nice update dear... waiting for next update...
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aisha sam convo was lovely... aww he considers her as his sis...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry sorry sorry!!
I am extremely late in commenting! But what can I do, school has started and its very hectic!!
I hardly get any time to go through my inbox!

Now coming to the story:
It is really really good!!I loved the hole childish behavior between shree and riya!!

It is so nice to see the concern arjun and she have for riya!!!
Really good part and the raisha scenes were very refreshing!!

Continue soon please and sorry again for the extremely late reply!
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you so much for liking my update.
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The following 35 member(s) liked the above post:

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This part is dedicated to my devil aka devildiva and my riyu aka riyasarkar because they forceing me to update this ff.

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Posted: 11 years ago
NOTE

1. guyes i am giving this ff two parts continuously first is today and second is tomorrow so I want separate comment.

2. those who want pm please mention in your comment. i will pm them and please give atleast 5 line comment to get to know you liked update or not.

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PART-7A

Riya: sir isska naam Mrs. Shanaya Banerjee hain(victim name)

Rathore: iska address hai hame vahi pata lagana hoga.

Arjun: hmm tum theek keh rahe ho

Rathore: rawte tum shree or riya isske ghar jaake pata karo.

Riya: jee sir.

IN SHANAYA HOUSE

Arjun: Mr. karan Malhotra?

Karan: jee aap kaun

Arjun: ETF

Karan: please ander aaye.

Ariya and shree come inside and arjun sit while shree and riya standing.

Karan: aap log yaha sab theek to hain na?

Riya: sir hame aapki wife Mrs. Shanaya ki laash mili hain.

Karan: shocked what???

Riya: jee sir

Karan: magar kaise?

Arjun: hame aapki wife ki laash hame madh island main mili hain.

Karan: magar vaha kaise vo to apne office gaye thi na jo meeriline road pe hain(fake name).

Shree: vo apne office gaye thi? Aap sure to hain na?

Karan: jee haan lekin aap aisa kyun puch rahe hain?

Arjun: kahi aapko galat phemi bhi ho sakti hain.

Karan: matlab??

Arjun: matlab vo madh island kisi se milne gaye hoon or vahi par unka murder?

Karan: dekhiye jaisa aap soch rahe hain vaisa kuch nahi hai vo office hi gaye thi or usne mujhe apne office ke number se call bhi kiya tha.

Arjun: hmm vaise aapko kisi pe shaq?

Karan: jee nahi.

Suddenly his house door open and two children are runningly come to karan. One is girl whose age is 10 and other is boy whose age is 14. Boy ask to karan

Boy: papa mumma office se kab aaye ghi.

Girl: haan papa mumma ko kitna late ho gaya hain aaj unhone hamse kaha tha ki vo ghar aaj office se jaldi aayenge fir vo hain kaha.

Karan: baccho tumhari mumma abh kabhi nahi aayenge.

Girl: par papa kyun?

Karan: because tumhari mumma abh iss duniya main nahi rahe. She is dead.

Girl and boy shocked and both started crying hysterically. And karan also crying and riya use yeh sabh nahi dekha jaa raha tha to vo

Riya: Mr. Malhotra if you don't mind kya main baccho ko apne saath ander le jaa sakti hoon?

Karan: jee...

Riya: baccha chalo mere saath. Sir main abhi aye.

Arjun: hmm..

IN KIDS ROOM

Riya: tum dono yaha baitho.

Both kids sit and riya also sit with them.

Girl: aap kaun hain?

Riya: ETF officer hoon.

Boy: ETF??

Riya: main ek police officer hoon or vaha jo mere saath two log or the vo bhi police officer hain.

Both boy and girl: ohh

Girl: kya main aako didi bula sakti hoon?

Riya: haan par ek shart pe.

Girl: shart??

Riya: hmm shart.

Girl: kya?

Riya: pehle rona band karo tum dono or apne naam batao.

Girl and boy little smile.

Boy: mera naam Abhay hain or iska naam aliya.

Riya: abhay or aliya nice name bilkool tum dono ki tarah.

Abhay: aapka naam

Riya: Riya Mukherjee


Abhay: abh to hum aapko didi bula sakte hain na?

Riya: haan..

Aliya: didi she started crying and hug her tightly.

Riya: shh... rote nahi.

Aliya (sobbing): didi hamarer saath aisa kyun hua:

Abhay: haan didi koi hamari mumma ko kyun mara?

Riya: baccho yeh to main nahi jaanti magar main tum logo se vada zaroor karti hoon ki main tumhare mom ke kaatil ko nahi chodungi. Main unhe pakkad ke hi rahungi.

Both kids hug again riya and riya also hug them. Both kids hug again riya and riya also hug them. After sometime they parted and riya wiped tears of both the kid.

Abhay didi kya aap hame apna mobile number de sakti hain.

Aliya: haan didi hame jab bhi aapse baat karni hongi to hum dono aap se kar sakte hain.

Riya: sure bas meri ek baat yaad rakhna don't be cry agar tum dono royo ghe to tumhare father ko kaun sambhalega.

Abhay: jee didi abh hum nahi royenge.

Riya: good...

All the three were talking but they don't know that Six pair of eyes watching them. Yes arjun, shree and karan are watching them and listening there talks.

FEW MINUTES BEFORE

Karan: sir mere saath aisa kyun hua ? Mere bacche unka kya hoga?

Arjun: dekhiye aap apne aapko sambhaliye.

Shree: jee sir agar aap apne aapko nahi sambhalenge to in baccho ka kya hoga?

Karan: aap theek keh rahe hain.

Arjun: hame abh chalna chahiye or hame kaatil ke bare main jaise hi kuch pata chalta hain hum aako khabar karenge.

Karan: jee vo main apne baccho ke pass jaa sakta hoon.

Arjun: yaa sure infact hum bhi saath chalet hain.

NOW BACK TO PRESENT

All sees this silent and feels happy. And arjun also feel proud for riya.

Karan: abhay, aliya.

Both kids and riya turned the direction and founds all re standing there.

Karan: thanx mam mere baccho ko sambhalne ke liye.


Riya: please thanx kehne ki zaroot nahi.

Arjun: abh hame chalna chahiye.

Shree and riya nodded and riya bid byee to the kids and go from there.

Meanwhile in Madh island

Sasha and Chotu are searching for the clue and Liza took the body in forensic lab.

Chotu: sir... rathore sir.

Rathore and Ayesha walked towards chotu direction

Rathore: haan chotu.

Chotu: sir yeh dekhiye mujhe yeh watch mili hain or ispe khoon(blood) bhi laga hua hain.

Rathore and Ayesha sees this.

Ayesha: sir yeh to lady watch hain.

Rathore: haan Ayesha yaa to yeh watch Shanaya ki hain yaa fir kaatil ki.

Ayesha; hame or dekhna chahiye ki hame or koi clue mil jaye.

Rathore: Ayesha tum udhar jao or chotu tum daye taraf or main yaha dekhta hoon.

Both nodded and goes from there.

Rathore was searching when he find a hankerchief which has blood stain.

Rathore: Ayesha, chotu.

Ayesha: jee sir.

Rathore: yeh dekho rumaal.

Chotu: rumaal?

Rathore: yes.

Ayesha: sir ispe o blood laga hua hain.

Rathore: hame in dono ko forensic lab leke jana hoga vaise tum logo ko or kuch mila?

Both nodded negative.

Rathore: chalo vapas ETF chalet hain.

Chotu: jee sir.

Sasha and chotu reached ETF office.

Rathore: Chotu inn dono evidence ko Liza ko lab main deke ayo or riya please mere liye ek coffee bana do.

Both nodded.


BACK TO PRESENT

All are present in ETF office and discussing about the findings.

Arjun: jaha tak hame pata chala hain shanaya ka koi dushman nahi hain or vo apne ghar se sidha office gaye thi jo ki uska merriline road pe hain.

Riya: or sir unke bacche bata rahe the ki aaj unki mom jaldi aane wali thi.

Rathore: or hame vaha se ek hankerchief or watch mili hain jispe blood ke traces the.

Arjun: kya?

Rathore: haan or maine use liza ko de diya hain abh uski report hi hame aage kuch bata sakti hain.

Arjun: hmm. Vaise rathore ham eek baar shanaya ke office jake bhi puchna chaiye.

Rathore: tum theek keh rahe ho rawte magar office to abhi band ho gaya hoga. Kal jake pata karte hain.

LIZA ENTER IN CONFERENCE ROOM

Arjun: liza kuch pata chala un evidence ke bare main?

Liza: nahi sir kal jab report aaye ghi tabhi pata chalega.

Arjun: hmm...

Rathore: aaj ke liye itna hi tum sabh apne ghar jayo case ki aage nvestigation kal karte hain.

All nodded and goes from there.

Sasha on one SUV and arjun, chotu or liza in one where as shree and riya goes together in one bike.

Shree droped riya and also cvome with her in house and riya gives him coffee. But she was quite and looking sad and shree notice this. Riya goes kitchen to prepare dinner and shree was doing something in his lappy. After dinner make both ate and shree sees that riya is disturbed and she is not eating much.

Shree: riii...

Riya: haan

Shree: tu khana kyun nahi kha rahi?

Riya: khaa to rahi hon dekhna. She was eating now as she see shree was looking her and she don't want to bother him.

Both ate dinner and they were sitting in drawing room. Shree sees this riya is lost in somewhere and she was sad after meeting with kids and maybe this case so shree asked

Shree: riya tu theek to hain na?

Riya: haan shree tu aise kyun puch raha hain?

Shree: sach sach bata riya main dekhk raha hoon jabse yeh case aaya hain or tu unn baccho se mili hain tu tab se bahut udas(sad) hain. Please bata na kya baat hain?

Riya: shree and started crying.. Shree comes closed to her and hug her and pathes her back.


Riya: shree aaj un baccho ko dekhke mujhe maa or papa ki yaad aa rahi hain. Main unlogo ka dukh samajh sakti hoon. Apno ke khone ka dard kya hota hain yeh mujhse behtar kaun jaan sakta hain.

Shree: janta hoon riya but tujhe strong banna hoga. Tune bhaiya or bhaabi se vada jo kiya hain.

Riya; jaanti hoon shree isliye to strong bani hui ghoom rahi hoon varna to abh tak main mar (dead) gaye hoti.

Shree: riya tune aaj to aise keh diya doobara aise mat kahiyo.

Riya; hmm..

Shree: riyu tujhe strong banna hoga apne liye hi nahi un baccho ke liye bhi vo tujhe apni didi mante hain na or unki tujhse ummed hain.

Riya: haan shree tu sahi keh raha hain. Mujhe strong banna hoga or un baccho ki maa ke kaatil ko dhoondna hoga.

Shree: that's like my riya chal abh main chalta hoon.

Riya: ok byee..

Shree: byee..

NEXT MORNING

All are present in ETF office and discussing about the case.

Arjun: hame shanaya ke office jana chahiye.

Rathore: rawte, chotu, shree and riya tum log shanaya ke office jao. Main or Ayesha commissioner sir ke office jaa rahe hain. Unhe kuch kaam hain koi drugs se related case aaya hain to vo chahate hain main or Ayesha thodi help kare so hum dono vaha jaa rahe hain maybe 1ya 2 hrs tak hum aa jayenge.

Arjun: theek hain.

IN CAR

Arjun and chotu sit front side as chotu was driving SUV and shree and riya sit back side. Suddenly riya phone started ringing.

Riya: hello kaun?

Caller: riya didi main abhay bol raha hoon.

Riya: abhay kaise ho tum?

Abhay: main theek hon didi or aap kaise ho.

Riya: main bhi theek hoon or aliya vo kaise hain?

Abhay: didi vo mumma ko bahut miss kar rahi hain isliye vo aap se baat karna chahati hain.

Riya: lao meri baat karao usse.

Aliya: hello didi kaise ho?

Riya: main theek hoon.

Aliya: didi mujhe mumma ki bahut yaad aa rahi hain.


Riya: beta main samaj sakti hoon but please ro mat main janti hoon ki koi bhi tumhari maa ki jagah nahi le sakta but tumhe strong baana hoga agar tum aise udas rahi to tumhari maa ko kitna bura lagega. You have to strong. Or main apno ke khone ka dard samajh sakti hoon beta please mat royo.

Aliya: ok didi byeee...

Riya: byee beta.

Hearing this arjun was lost in roshni thought but soon come with chotu voice.

Chotu: riya yeh shanayaji ke bacche hain na?

Riya: haan chotu. Vo bahut dhukhi hain iss hadse ki vajah se but unhe in sabh se aage badhna hoga bhoolna hoga yeh sab.

Listen chotu riya convo arjun becomes angry. He feels that indirectly riya saying to him that he should forgot roshni that's why he was yhell angry and was driving very fast and this make all of them shocked.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Now my fingers are crying I stopped this.

But please give me atlest 5 line comment.

Precap remain same.

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey!dr i hv rd ur ff its suprb .lvd al the part.ad eagerly watng to rd mr .i hv snt u buddy req plz pm me fr ur nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Superb update dr.

The case seems vry interesting n heart touching.

Loved the way Riya comforted those cute kids. Feel so bad for thm.

Awww she create such a sweet bonding with thm in the nick of time n coz of that thy easily shared their pain with her.

Wow Riya broke down but Shree pacified her. He is such a good friend.

OMG Arjun misunderstood Riya n got angry with her.

I hope he will not vent out his anger on her.

Let's see wht happens nxt.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago

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