Okay so instead of editting my comment on the previous page, im posting a new comment alogether. Im really sorry, im writing this in a haste, m in a hurry š³
Yesterday night, i started with this wonderful wonderful FF. and, just so you know, and i hope you appreciate, im going to be really really... Absolutely honest about my views on the fic.
Being a seldom writer myself (cz i really cant be as regular and maybe as creative as all you wonderful writers) so yeah, i know how as a writer, one waits and looks forward to honest, longish comments... On the content, the piece pf writing and story and what the readers want, instead of just the usual one-liners that ask the writer to update soon. LOL.
So... Here i amš
I started with the FF, the first prologue in an article form. OH I LOVED THE IDEA. Absolutely amazing, really.
Then, the second prologue that showed us arnav khushi's POVs and their thinking... Which was THE SAME! :made for each other š³
The chapters went through with great flow, and to be brutally honest, i was really taken aback by the fact, as i kept reading, other people's comments too, the relationship status of arnav khushi. I mean yes, they were engaged, but they hadnt fallen in love, and yet no tensions... They were happy... And i mean it was so hard to understand... And they suddenly fell in love, still no tension... It was like reading a fairytale. I kept wondering WHAT is in your mind, LOL how is nothing happening... (Not that im complaining š) and then, i read the last chapter and BOOM! The bomb explodes. FINALLY! Lol. Ab im sad :(
Im so so angry at Khushi. Why is she preferring Payal -.- over arnav!? Arnav has ALWAYS been there, but PAYAL? Shes such a bitch here! :@ i think this will also make them realize their true feelings of love for each other but please, dont drag this phase for too long :( hate payal here! I hooe Arnav gets proofs and proves to Khushi and then Khushi will woo arnav āŗļø hehehe
Anyways, i said i was in a hurry remember? Lol and im not even on my laptop. Still such a long reply :P sorry, hah. I cant wait for the next update. Please dont make us wait for too long š³
I had a lot more to say, but again, i need to rush abhi. Love youu :)
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