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dikshita

@dikshitamehta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

when will u update dear ??😡

it's been a long time

update sooon

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Great story I really liked and would love to read more...I hope khushi comes to know the truth soon...and would love to see how she realizes her love for Arnav..

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ranogill

@ranogill

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

I read your story in one go just today ...you got wonderful way to tell the story...loved it.

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

IMPORTANT NOTE

... So um... Hey guys!

Well this note is to tell you that basically... P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N has taken a route that I had not planned on. I mean, I had never planned to take it this way with Khushi, Arnav, Gaurav, and even Payal...

And this note is to ask you all... What you truly think about P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N as of now as well as I want to ask what you guys would think if I went back to Chapter 11, the chapter where Payal tries it with Arnav and Khushi and Gaurav misunderstand him, and if I began rewriting from there because that is where a major twist in my plot happened... becoming a plot I hadn't originally planned.

I request you to please leave your thoughts and be completely honest with me, trust me I can take it. I respect you all a lot and hope you return the favor to me by being honest.

I don't want to take P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N down the wrong road because I love it too much to ruin it like that. I don't want my PERF to become the next IPK and end in a crash.

Please and Thank You.

Love,

Anjani.

P.S - Some suggested using different pics besides the SaRun SPA pictures for the P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N banner. I'm not that great with banners, but I would most definitely be open to receiving such banners from the rest of you! But please try to keep the image of perfection that I have created for Arnav and Khushi here! :)

If you do create a banner, my only requirements are that the title be included as it has been (in all caps with the periods between each letter) and my name (Titaliya_AP) somewhere on the banner. :)

Any other questions just scrap or PM me :)

--edited--

I have decided to rewrite the last few chapters meaning from chapter 11-13 and then go from there. I have already started as well and will be posting them all at once.

When I do post them I request that you reread Chapter 10 before reading the new version of chapter 11.

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Hey Anju!

It makes sense if you choose to re-write any chapter if the alternative is a different storyline, altogether. PERF has always been about two perfect strangers coming together to create a perfect couple. If you feel that your story has lost that and/or you wish to re-write, feel free. As long as it is logical (which I am sure it is) and follows the plot you have in mind, its okay with me!

I read your work because of the beauty and simplicity in it. So, yup. Go ahead, scrap that other chapter and start from the misunderstanding!

I'm always there by your side!

Edited by hmtxyz - 12 years ago

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Hey although I am a very new reader but I would just like to say that its a really good story and you should chose how you want it to write from heart because if you dont go on with plot YOU WANT TO WRITE FROM YOUR HEART TO CONTINUE...but decide to continue with it otherwise..its bound to get destroyed and crashed. SO THE DECISION IS SOLELY YOURS BECAUSE NO ONE UNDERSTAND YOUR STORY BETTER THAN YOU. Take care. 😃

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

even if you were to revert back i don't think these chapters would change much. the fact remains that both these guys care for khushi and there was a MU. Unless you were planning to expose payal in a different manner...

honestly, if someone were to tell me that someone was perfect on paper and hence they got married, it would be enough for me to doubt their sanity. but i think the process of gradual discovery you have sketched is good.

MU's will happen and part of growing up is learning to deal with them. my opinion is that everyone has always listened to khushi and arnav and hence neither has really learnt the skill of listening. arnav has a slight advantage because he is more taciturn by nature. but khushi as a character tasted early sorrow and then early success and has never been challenged to listen in her entire life. this might be a good developmental lesson for her. you can't go thru life and not listen. every coin has two sides and she should be a better judge of character, both payal's and arnav's.

Edited by segad - 12 years ago

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

Hey..i m completely new to the fan fiction world..as of nw reading a few..
bt i still feel i m little new to tell u anything..
i think u should do wht u hav in ur mind..wht u had visualised frm the very begining
if u feel this track is nt going accordng to u n hw u wanted it to b
den u cn go back to chp11...otherwise jst continue..on hw two perfect ppl make their life perfect..
jst follow the idea in which u r going to njoy the writing.
coz if u r going to njoy..den the readers r definately going njoy..:)
hope this helps.. 😊

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kriti_angel1819

@kriti_angel1819

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Posted: 12 years ago

#629

Well I know you will write amazing so we are happy with how you want to take it
I can haut re read chapter 11 and go on from there
But please update very soon