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lujainshaikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

Nic update...looking forward for more gr8 updates!!!! :)

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

If this story is going the Ekta Kapoor way, then by all means scrap the twist!.If you can find a way to use this episode as a means for Arnav and Khushi to build a better understanding between themselves, then it should be left in! It all depends on what Payal's reaction to this is going to be like and whether she would take revenge onGaurav, Khushi and Arnav. Another point to ponder: without this track, how would you show the better understanding and closeness that's developed between Gaurav and Arnav?

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Manika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

after dat twist PERFECTION actually got messed up...dere love story hadn't even started...bt i ws fine d way it was goin...as i thot u might hv thot hw arnav wud make her realize hw strong is his love 4 her n help her to overcome the fact about her sis...bt nw when u right this note...i wud say it got messed up after the twist...

before it the story was goin very very good...

i m nt bashing or criticizing the story... m no one to do so...m jus giving a suggestion...so plz take it in a positive way...:)

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

you this story is itself perfect
its your story u better know what is best for it.
for me perfection is story of two perfect people successful.an honest
for outer world they and their lives are perfect but for arnav khushi want to be simple person and love from their love one's.
solace, love, understanding which get from each other
this perfection for me

do write what u want to
we always with u

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roshaan

@roshaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

rewrite frm cht 11 like u originally plan plz

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IPK..Jenny

@IPK.Jenny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Hey Anjani

I love this FF and you are an amazing writer, if you feel you that the story has thaken a turn in a direction you don't like or havenT planned then by all means change it because its your story and no one understands it better than you. I love the way you. Have written it its unique. If you want to scrap the last chapter and start afresh from the misunderstanding bit then go ahead I'm with you

Jenny x

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Tithi

@Tirtharupa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Hey Dear,
Its awesome storyline...Keep continue...
Love your FF so much.

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MamiaRehman

@MamiaRehman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#638

i think u should follow ur heart... u should white the way u wanted to...

and we really love the way u r writing ... no issues on that...

best wishes for u...

and of course waiting for the updates...

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#639

i think you should follow your heart...there is no one pure perfect except god...even payal did try to come between them khushi did not believe him that is imperfection but she did not accuse him that is near perfection ...if they can realised that were both wrong and try to talk to each other clear the air then it is perfection..any way you take your story we are right behind you