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divya

@diyadivya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

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lets c hw it goes acc 2 Dr Malvika

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

So glad to know that you are well :D

As usual,an interesting and an awesome update.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

happy to hear that u are ok now

coming to the update, enjoyed reading it dear - Why is Dr.Malaika so interested in resolving this murder case - need to know more about the punisher

will wait to know the answers to the list of questions dancing around in my head - thx RB for the update inspite of ur ill health

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Hello!

So with this story, you have released the dark, twisted, inner psychopath in me. I am reminded of the days I used to lock myself in a room and pretend I am a psychopath man who also happens to suffer from the Oedipus complex, as research for a story I had been writing.

But that is another story for another time.

anyway, so when I was stalking you for possible new stories and then WAM!

My Wednesday is made.

Anyway so coming on to the story ...

Chapter One - So when I heard shackles, my mind started screaming "prison" and then in the next minute I was proven wrong, and I was so very happy because honest to god, crackpots are always my cuppa of tea or coffee, as you like it. Unless you like coke or beer or wine. In that case change cuppa to something else ...

moving on

It is interesting to note how you have taken the character traits from the original show and plopped them into Arnav and Khushi. Reminds me of this line I heard while I was surfing movie channels - "Just a little push..."

Because Arnav always had been a little antisocial. Charming when it suited him, yes. But antisocial.

And Khushi always had been a compulsive liar. Many people called it her "little leap of faith" but I always thought she was a liar. She didn't have any close friends, and so Devi Maiyya was created. She didn't want to admit that her childhood was lost, and hence she lied to herself with the little childish whatevers, etc ... etc.

So very interested to see where you are taking this, my love!

do you PM peeps for updates? How am I to wiggle my way into the grid?

-Vee

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Is Khushi sick, I mean mental? I dont understand the malika character. Will wait.
Good know that you are fine 😉

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Someone has another agenda up her sleeves. What an appropriate name - Dr. Malvika. I think Kushi is a smart cookie and will be a step ahead of her but if she is being forced to take the ECT, she will need help. So Kushi was attacked by a serial killer who let her live unlike his other victims. Something fishy in here. Will be very interested to see if Dr. Jha will take well to Malvika's treatments.

Glad to hear you are well. TC.

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appy

@appy_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Ooh! I like this Dr. Malvika.. But I can't yet decide if she's good. She was attacked by a serial killer who kills those who are acquitted by the judiciary? And wait, he goes free? Oh, we can come back to that later. We have a Dexter here! :D

That part about her vanity. Really liked it. She didn't know it existed before. I found it almost similar to kids discovering the mirror. :)

So, they're not actually going to study Khushi? They're trying to get through to the killer through her? And who is he? Is he already here? Is it your favorite again? ;) But wait, they're going to use Khushi? Oh, yeah. Dr. Malvika is good, just not in every sense of the word! :D Will do anything for the due recognition she deserved and the blemishes of the past to be permanently erased. ?

Interesting, RB. Glad you're fine. Just finished Gravity. Will comment.

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hot.cakes

@hot.cakes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Hmmm... playing their cards, are they?

Doctors can be sneaky 😉

Interested to know how it goes on... Very thick plot! 😃

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katunkka

@katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Interesting khushi has escaped a serial killer too? I'm glad I'm reading this such unique story you tell!

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Chapter Two - Akash interests me.

But before I tell you why interests me, I want an answer to a question. I am a huge superhero fan, unfortunately, my fandom is restricted to Batman, superman and Iron Man. Therefore, we can safely conclude I am an amateur.

So here is my question - Why does a superhero become a superhero?

Moving on to the next part.

It takes prodigious skill and a high amount of talent to play chess without a board. I tried that once, as a psychology experiment. I failed, though I like to believe I play decently enough when I see the board in front of me.

I don't want to call these people "mad" anymore. They're just different from us, and we are barbarian enough to see "different" as a threat, and hence chuck them into a ward, if you get what I mean?

I have a feeling I'm stepping into hell along with them. I can feel the spit slowly glide down my oesophagus as I gulp along with Khushi

-Vee