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akaps

@akaps

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

The mystery is that why the serial killer didn't/couldn't complete the task he wanted to? He punishes criminals who are not punished by the law in accordance with their crime by killing them. Only survivor is Khushi.

Using a person to forward your own motive even if it involves putting the other person's life in danger, is Dr.Malvika.

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

with each passing update its turning out to be more interesting and thrilling

it has much more than what meets the eye

we even have a serial killer

may be he is someone who is among the characters we know

PS: happy to hear that you are fine.Hope you get a speedy recovery

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Good to see you ... 😃

Hope your shoulder is not giving you much trouble ...

Dr.Malviika is a mystery ... seems like she is only after a goal ...

Her goal to finding the killer who killed all his victims but left Khushi alive ...

Each one seems to have their own motive and agenda ...

Leaves a creepy feeling ...

Thanks ... take care of that shoulder ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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underdsky

@underdsky

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Glad to know that you are doing well and nothing major..rest well and take care

Coming to the update, only time will tell.. who plays out who..

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Anamika Kumari

@Anamikarocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Awesome as always!!!👏👏

Hey but today there has some secret revealed!!!

I mean...so it was some psycho punisher who wanted to kill her thinking she did injustice to her sister!!!!...it's ridiculus to think that the person can be sane!!!

And the doctors...what are they playing at...????😕

They want her to help them to catch the psychopath ...unbelievable!!!

What Dr. Malvika has done in the past...is she the one that had led to psycho's fleeing!!!

It's just my curosities!!!😃

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Great to know that you are ok !!!! The chapter was as usual creepily fantastic !!!!! The doctor Malavika is such a cold hearted person ... Using Khushi as bait to clear whatever misdeeds the doctor has done in the past !!!! Just to get famous people like her can go to any ends and means . They lack conscience ...

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Good to know you are well! Would have hated to hear otherwise

Now to the story...Can't say I dislike Dr. Malvika though I am not sure I approve of using anyone as a guinea pig or a bait! But then can't say I dislike Khushi either when I am fairly sure that her works will make me shudder!

Waiting for more...as always!

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Ooh! New facts unveiled.

So there is this someone called the Punisher? who slays people who go against the judiciary system. Hmm... I don't know what to make of it. But why was he after Khushi? what was she responsible for?

Now, I'm confused. So Khushi kills her sister and this Punisher guy attacks her later? Nothing makes sense right now, but I'm sure you will join the pieces later.

So Khushi is declared insane and she's described as a manipulator who minces words effectively. we are getting to know more about her personality. At some later part of the story, could we please have her past history as to why she turned out to be like this?

And this Doctor seems to be good for nothing, who just wants to use this case for her own personal benefits.

Nice update and hope you recover soon.

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Turkiye

@Turkiye

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Glad to hear it's nothing major. Hope you get well soon.

Really interesting story

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

I cannot but help feel sorry for Khushi for being used as a means to an end...I feel detached from her, but the blatant manipulation that she is undergoing without her tacit knowledge is just...horrific.

Yet she's insane: has she truly waived her right to be treated as an individual in her own right? She is also a master manipulator...

Vidya is a serial killer?