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Posted: 12 years ago
ya ya ya...😃😃

not 1st but 2nd be chalega...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
this is getting interesting with each upate...😃 looking forward to next chappy...😊
P.S - get well soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good to hear your accident did not result in something major , take care!

The updates are getting more intense.
So khushi was attacked for not being punished in the way this serial killer deemed fit for her crime !!
This is like a story within a story.


Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
She was stabbed and then she sat in a pool of blood with the murder weapon... hmmm. seems about right where she is now. And by that I mean the lies and the riddle like conversations.

Her and Arnav's relationship makes me curious.

But your Aakash- why do you have a special place for Aakash? In every story of yours, he gets a special part- the one with the "misplaced" bearings. Makes me smile every time. Smile, cringe and sigh. Why so troubled Akash? :)

I am a little slow in catching up with IF these days. But will always read and leave a comment.

I will find your stories :) Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
That just gave me creepy shivers thank you very much!
So Dr. Malvika doesn't give two hoots about Khushi and wants to use her, there is an unknown serial killer out there who could still be after Khushi (but I'm guessing not if he left her alive the first time-- maybe he thinks that she may not have done it), Dr. Jha may or may not be a do-gooder-- Dr. Malvika seems to think that he isn't.
And Khushi would rather read books than watch tv (because there's nothing on tv that could POSSIBLY induce psychotic meltdowns).

I actually hope Khushi puts Dr. Malvika in her place. Not because I believe she's innocent but because I despise people like Dr. Malvika.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Reading this reminds me a simple thing I have noticed about the way humans behave, everything is done with an ulterior motive. Now that need not be labelled good or bad; be it Khushi or the doctor they both need something and not spelling it out clearly. Khushi does seem to be aware of a few things she is not letting on for reasons best known to her and if those reasons were know it would mean many things and I am waiting to know those many things.

PS – I really liked Khushi's take on vanity, few can be detached and those who are, are vain about the fact they are not vain.

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Posted: 12 years ago
R.
Edited.

I don't know why I perceive this almost always, that, Khushi might not be the insane patient, needing proffessional help from a rehab.. She is just labelled as mentally unstable.

Dr. Malvika is morally Ambivalent.. and rather shrewd while dealing with her patients.. And she is expert enough to keep Doctors like Dr. Jha at bay..

Vidya is obviously her sidekick but she probably has a mind of her own.. This is strongly indicated in the line where she correctly perceives the real motive of Dr. Malvika.

I'm highly intrigrued to know that who this mysterious serial killer is, who happens to have taken it upon himself to judge the morality of people.

Thanks for the PM.
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
A complicated state of affairs.
Is Khushi really insane?
Dr. Malavika gives me the creeps. Using her patients for nam and fame is creepy.

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Posted: 12 years ago
ect.?not good for khushi..no arnav here.missed him.how are u now?
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Posted: 12 years ago
This ia so damn interesting. So we have arnav, who plays mental chess, khushi who is disfigured and this serial killer.
Awesome. Looking forward to it

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