Smitar's:Finding Khushi #6 Part 21 Pg 116 (26/4) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
wow lovely update smita,
loved the way you have brought in some verses from Ramayana in this story
excellent one dear
will wait for the next update (u promised to give 2 updates right) - will wait for it
thx for this one dear
super excited for the next one - iam happy khushi thought of clearing all this arnav - good job Khushi
rashmi, 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Res
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It happened as i thought!! two bitches sim and pam!!
Hope the truth of These leeches come in front of arnav soon!!
I know he will peel them of skin by skin for making kushi to cry!!
Please continue soon!!
Cant wait for the next update!!!
Thanks for the pm rulama!!
Edited by deepa.e - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
loved it.. finally she will conquer her fear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
great update smita di.

rashmi di see now both of them have thrown their blinkers off

now waiting for ur interpretation.

continue soon

love.

Edited by sphobic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Smitaji as usual awesome update...😊

Loved it...and loved your idea of The Ramayan...

It's very impressive work of yours Smitaji...

The thoughts of Khushi and the Pravarchan by Sant...👏

and last but not least...loved that Khushi took the step to meet Arnav...

Rashmi dear thank you so much for the pm dear...

and now I am thinking which name you'll give for this update?

waiting for your interpretation too.😊
Edited by hetaldave - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Good that Khushi wants to clear things out.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
arey! yeh kya hui gawa!! I need another update today!!! I want to know how arhi are gonna clear this issue!!! please update next part also soon, smita! This one was amazing as usual!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Awesome !!! hope they can meet aur koi kebab mein haddi na aa jaye.. felt bad for both arnav and khushi.. poor arnav don't even have slightest idea for why khushi is behaving so and other hand khushi is so sweet she is listens and accepts that everyone around her are like her always speaking true.. poor khushi.. hope arnav doesn't get angry and listens to her patiently.. loved the update dear.. love you for such a beautiful story... 😃

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Updated comments on 19 (5) on Page 7 -> Click Here!

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omments on 19 (6)

Update soon!

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Loved the update Smita... But i hate that Pam and Sim.. I will knock them off so hard... 😡

Finally Arnav is here to meet Khushi! This has to be cleared off!

Highlight:

Arnavji appeared in her doorway.

"Khushi…. Aman told me you waited for me today evening…"

Khushi drank in Arnavji's form. He looked exhausted, slight grooves of weariness bracketing his lips, a frown on his forehead….

He strode into the room, unable to stay away from her a moment longer. He pulled her off the bed and into his arms.

"Khushi…Khushi… Don't stay away from me, Khushi… I can't… I can't take it…", he whispered into her ear.

Her self talk proved worthless. Tears filled her eyes and gushed down her cheeks. She pulled him harder into her arms and sobbed her heart out.

"Arnavji…. Arnavji….", she whispered in between sobs.

"Khushi… don't cry, Khushi… Khushi…", he murmured as he rubbed her back to soothe her.

Khushi sobbed harder, burying her face in the crook of his neck.

"Khushi, you will fall sick… Khushi, don't cry….. Khushi, why are you crying?", Arnav asked, feeling his heart ache along with hers.

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The para above ^^^.. Finally they're gonna talk it out.. It's high time...

Smitaaa... WHY THIS CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! 😲 😭


@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... 🤗



@Rashmi: Gotchya before the PM! 😉 Love you! 🤗


Continue soon! Desperately waiting for Next Chapter!

Loads of love, ❤️

Mrina 😊
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
😛loved it
thanks for pm

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