VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64 - Page 12

hey nisha, u almost gave me a heart attack wen virat's dad said dat virat is dead.

Hey Nisha...
Awsum update...but it really hurts to c Manvi in such a condition...their flashbacks r really a treat to read...their cute moments...the wedding day...😳
But wen jeevs n viratz dad mentiond abt his death...wz shokd a bit though it wz quite expectd
U r an amazing writer hun...cud actually feel manviz state of mind...
Thanku so much ...the note towards the end wz indeed a relief..."Happy Ending"...well...nw diz z getting more interesting...dunno hw...but al i wish to c z Virman happily togthr forevr ...i knw it sounds lik a fairytale but Virman r incomplete widout each othr...
Cont soon ...n plz do pm me wen ya update!! 😊

Both the updates were so awesome. Manvi's emotions are very highly well
Expressed. You are a superb writer ur way of expressing manvi's seperation
Pain, her family and friends helping her to cope the situation were fantastic. Waiting eagerly for next update. Pm me

Gosh this update really left me speechless it was amazing
All the emotions were portrayed so well the flashbacks were
All so lovely specially how she keeps on remembering him was
So cute OMG he's a pilot fighter hope he's not dead bring
Virat back ASAP beautiful update continue soon

Nishaaa!!!! Superb update! It was so emotional...I thought virat left for some other reason but no he was a air force officer or shall say he is was so mad at u when I read virat is dead! Goddd too painful n u r aweful enough to write that! How could u.. Lol jk! Mini attack agaya tha.. However,u said happy ending which means virat is coming back or manvi will get someone else! U know this kind of a happens in real.. So it was awesome to read this OS! Felt the pain anger frustration of manvi! Virman true love <3 ! N ya thank u for making it longer but again I will say make it a SS or FF cuz its a really good one ! Best one among all of ur stories! Do pm me will be waiting

super update👏i'm realy feeling sad for manvi

OMG nisha!!! i got a mini heart attack when i read the word DEAD!!! now that u have said that the OS will have a happy ending.. i sooo cannot wait to read it..

Amazing story!
Plz make virAat come back otherwise i will spend the whole week crying.
I totally loved the concept, the story, the dialogues, everything
Do pm me and update soon 😭

Awesome is a word for u..the way you portrayed manvi's feelings is damn good nd thank u for telling dat it will be a hpy ending odrwise i wld have cried a buckets..nd thanku so much for the pm..cntinue asap nd do pm me..

It ws such a touchin part...
Rlly feel bad for maaanvi...
Hope virat v'l return