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Posted: 12 years ago
wow i can see something interesting is coming
haaye i am excited thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update !! 👏 👏 Taani seems to be judging Rey a little too quickly after listening to Aashi's hearsay. And Rey is more cold towards her than others. LOVED Taarey's fight and poor Taani , goodest girl.🤣 🤣

Amazing Promo, so who's drunk. Or are they both drunk.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice promo a drunk rey will be fun to watch...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooah!!! loved it!!!!
please do continue soon!!
i just did nt expect such a superb promo!!
u made me so excited!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice promo waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thats a real awesome promo!! Hope Taani's getting drunk! 😛
Please update soon di and do pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read the 3rd chap and loved it!!

Taani, according to Sahron, is the 'goodest' girl!! 😆 I soo loved this chap di! You have done an amazing job again!! Do update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i read all the three chapters in one go...
nd nw i am short of words to express hw i feel

wow wow amazing...
rey a casanova!!!!!!!!!!!
taani a good girl!!!!!!!

continue soon
👏👏👏
Edited by sree689 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
whuz drunk .. ??? rey or taani .. ?? 😕 😲
vry mch ecytd 4 d nxt epi ... 😃
plz update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊
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Part 4: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Taani's P.O.V.

By the time the evening rolled around, Rey had somehow managed to convince bhai to throw a party. UGH he's so irritating. I walk downstairs to be greeted by loud music and way too many people. I shove my way through the sea of sweaty, drunk people. I don't even recognize my house anymore.

"Rey!" I shout fiercely, but the music is too loud for anyone farther than a couple centimeters away to hear me. I tumble through the living room, then into the kitchen where a boy and girl are making out obnoxiously. I wrinkle my nose in disgust and walk into the dining room.

"Enjoying the show?" Suddenly someone places their hands on my hips and tugs me backward into their chest

"Rey, you're dead. Bhai agreed to a party, not to turn the house into a club. Just wait until bhai sees this." I saw calmly, immediately recognizing his voice. He chuckles and gives my hips a squeeze. His breath reeks of alcohol.

"Guess what? You're brothers over there, with your friends having fun."

I turn around to face him, removing his hands from my hips. I glare up at him and he simply smirks down at me. I hate being shorter than him.

"I want every single of yours nasty, disgusting, drunk, delinquent friends out of my house. Now." I cross my arms across my chest.

"No can do, my chipkali."

"Don't call me that."

"Call you what?" he smirks

"Chipkali" I say and I can already feel the tip of my nose turning red in anger. "Get them out of here." I continue.

"Like I said, I can't"

"Why not?"

"First of all, I barely know most of these people. Second of all, since they are in fact all mostly drunk, that would mean they would have to drive home and we don't want drunk drivers on the road, now do we?" He tilts his head sideways slightly, challenging me. The mischievous glint in his hazel eyes brighter than ever.

"I don't care how they leave, but they're leaving."

"Good Luck with that." He says with an eye roll and then walks away. Probably, to attend some s**tty bimbo. I turn around and quickly walk to bhai.

"Bhai, how are you okay with this?"

"Come on Taani, loosen up a bit. You're in college now, this is how parties are." I look at my brother unbelievably. Then, I move to Sharon hoping she has a little bit more sense than my brother.

"Sharon, what are you drinking?" She looks down at her cup, then back at me.

"Uhh' water." I narrow my eyes at her and yank the cup from her hand to look inside. Whatever is inside, it's a gold-colored liquid, so I put it up to my nose to sniff it.

"Beer? Really?" I hiss, thrusting the cup away from my face the moment I catch its scent. She gives me a guilty smile as she takes the cup from my hand.

"Whatever, it's a party and the beer is good." She turns away slightly, her eyes following my brother.

"We're stopping this right now Sharon" She spins back around to face me

"What?"

"Do you know how much trouble I would get in if papa finds out about this?"

"God Taani, this is exactly what I meant by you are the goodest girl I know!" She yells, throwing her hands up, exasperated. I glare at her and cross my arms. "Loosen up a bit, at least try to have fun."

She turns back around and starts dancing, slowly drowning into the crowd.

'You've never done anything bad'

'You're the goodest girl I know'

Their voices echo loudly in my head, drowning out the thunderous music. Anger burns through me as I try to think about some bad things I've done. Sad thing is, I can come up with none.

Taking a deep breath, I walk into the kitchen and grab the bottle of vodka sitting on the counter. I unscrew the cap and put the rim of the bottle to my lips

Good girl my ass.

An hour later

I'm sure by now; I've basically drowned myself in vodka. Pushing back my chair, I get up and walk toward my living room where everyone was dancing.

Stumbling, I make my way through the crowd, right into the middle. Dragging a table to the middle, I step on it.

"Are you guys ready to have some fun?"

"YEAAAH" I hear everyone shout.

"Then turn it up." The music is turned up louder by some random stranger. I start swaying my hips to the music and before I know it, I'm completely lost in the music. I take off my sweater, leaving me in only a tank top and throw it into the crowd somewhere.

I can feel guys touching me, but I think the alcohol has done its affect because by now I'm almost numb.

"Taani, what are you doing?" I turn to my side to see Rey, Bhai and the rest of the gang standing there. I giggle. "Just having fun and loosening up like you guys wanted me too."

I spin around and trip over my own feet causing me to stumble. I feel someone support my hips just as I was about to fall off. I turn to see an attractive young boy, I really don't know who he is but I grab his hand and pull him onto the table. Wrapping my arms around his neck, I start to dance again.

After a few minutes, I feel someone harshly pull me back and I fall straight into that person's arms. I look up and see an angry looking Rey. I giggle again like an annoying 4 year old girl and poke his cheeks

"Hi"

"Why are you drunk Taani?"

"I'm not drunkkk Rey, I'm just very very happy." I reply with a big smile on my face.

"You're drunk. Swayam I'll take her upstairs." Rey walks towards the stairs with me still in his hands.

"Noo I don't want to go upstairs. I want to have fun. I want to stay here. Put me down, put me down right now." I kick my feet up and down but Rey just tightens his grip on me.

I pull his cheeks and smile. "Chuha, c'mon please leave me. Don't you want me to have fun? You know, I used to have these dreams where I would get super drunk and dance and now I am, but you're ruining it. Let me go please, please."

"Shuttup Taani." I pout and turn the other way, throwing my hair into his face. He reaches my bedroom and opening my door, he walks into my room and lays me down on the bed. "Go to sleep." I close my eyes, pretending to go to sleep.

After about 20 minutes, I open my eyes and sneak towards the door. I come out, quietly closing the door behind me.

"Where are you going?" I jump up at the unexpected voice. Biting my tongue, I turn around to face Rey. "Nowhere, Sorry"

I go back into my room and close the door. After another 20 minutes, I walk out again being quieter than before.

"Why are you out again?" I turn around again, and pout. "I don't want to sleep. I want to party. Please, please, please, please, please Rey, please." Rey grabs my wrist and pulls me back into my room.

"No, you're way too drunk to handle yourself, so go to sleep." Rey says strictly.

"You sound like papa. HAW what if you are papa, dressed up like Rey, secretly observing everything? That would be so embarrassing." I gasp at the sudden news. Rey has an irritated look on his face now.

"I'm not your papa. Remember your papa is in Mumbai."

"Oh yeah, oopsie. Anyways, please let me go out. I want to have fun, dance, drink and live the college life. And that's what you wanted me to do to right? Loosen up? And omg what did you call me? Chipkali right? Well, you're a chuha, because you sneak everywhere. I can't believe you ruined my first party. I'm never going to forgive yo-"

Before I can finish, I feel someone push their lips against mine. For a second I'm lost, but I quickly regain myself. I go to push him off but I feel my eyes close and my arms wrap around Rey's neck on their own accord. I deepen the kiss, as I walk backward until I hit a wall. I feel Rey's arms wrap around my waist and puller me closer.

I tighten my grip on his hair when I feel myself loose breath. He pulls away and before I can say anything, he walks out of the room, mumbling a quiet sorry. I turn around in confusion and go lay on my bed, suddenly not having the energy to go out to the party anymore. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I know what you're thinking. Itni jaldi kiss bhi karadi, but please please trust me guys. They are no where near their happy ending. Don't forget, abhi Udayvir ki entry baki hai. and mujhe pata hai, I said Rey would be drunk, but Taani being drunk just went better with the story.

Anyways comment/like !

and thank you so much for all the comment and likes guys. It really motivates me to write more. Remember the more comments, the faster the promo and update !

Chapter 5

Edited by TaareyFan23 - 12 years ago

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