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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.gr8.when will u update?plzzz zz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: a.anu

wow.gr8.when will u update?plzzz zz update soon

will update tomorrow dear😊 bt dont know what will post
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Posted: 12 years ago

oh god its too ong...😕 DAMMIT !!!!😡


ok, here is the next part...sorry for late posting😭



Nothing can break ACP Arjun Rawte…. except for one woman !

Its none other than, Riya Mukherjee, or should we say EX Mrs. Riya Rawte.

Days passed…the local police were trying very hard to find that ran away brother of MLA, but unsuccessful. Roshni continued to live with Riya, and Riya continued to fume with anger as she can smell the thing cooking between local police and that powerful MLA. Someday she will burst for sure and who knows who will pay?she tried to find that man with the help of chotu and his gang of informers, but no luck there too.she promised she will bring justice and she was unsuccessful.she hated it all.

On the other hand, Arjun was trying very hard to control his emotions and Riya. Riya was too hard to handle now, after that extra security thing. She continued to test his patience, and he continued very hard to control !

Another normal day were going in the conference hall.the two were again glaring at each other and tried to proof their pov about a case with yelling and gritted voice.it was normal indeed! Ever since Rathore was away, the team was used to this all.

ChoReeIza were rubbing their temple as they helplessly watched them.Saakshi was looking at them intently, like she can see through all this.

She remembered that day when arjun dragged her into his cabin and scolded her as she unknowingly disclosed that one of the members of this office had made a FIR against a very powerful figure's brother.she can never forget the anger of his eyes, rather fear to lose someone.she could not help but to link these two with each other.its really strange that these two can stand each other but they only met in this office for first time.its impossible….the way they quarrel, like there is something more deep.she don't know what…but she can feel something in Arjun's eyes whenever Roya snapped at him or rudely talk with him. Like someone has stabbed his heart. Saakshi's heart sank everytime Arjun gets hurt by Riya's talk, but she could not even console him…he always shut himself up.

May be god had pitied the members, as Ariya were on the edge of losing their not so famous patience, receptionist Neha informed them they had to encounter a group of mafia, as per DIG's permission.

The team went settled themselves in the SUV, except Saakshi and Liza.Arjun was driving, or rather watching her through mirror, where she was looking outside, face hard with determination.

Zara sa zara sa
Lagey tu khafa sa
Zara sa zara sa
Gilaah bewajaah sa
Tere hi liye tujhse hoon judaa
Jannatein kahan bin huye fanaa

They reached at the old deserted factory side, what was the ultimate hide out place for anyone. But too bad for the criminals, as team ETF was there.

They spread out, pointed the criminals out and shoot them.the team was not sparing any one…they were as ruthless in the work as them.

Arjun's heart sank as he saw Riya was running behind a criminal….bullets were flying over here and she was not careful about that! Or rather careless about that.his mind was blank.what if something happen to her? Whats wrong with her?

He sprinted behind her, not thinking about the bullets flying or may be his team need him. His mind was only thinking about her.

He was now far from the actual encounter location…he looked at every direction, hoping to see a glimpse of her. But no luck.then he heard a gunshot.

His heart sank with fear. What if she….. no no no.

He ran like a maniac in that direction, only to find her pointing a gun toward the criminal who was dead by now.

He was now angry as hell at her careless attitude and indifferent behavior. She started to walk away, like she had not even noticed him . It added fuel to the fire.

When she was leaving, he grabbed her arm tightly. She was not so surprised, but irritated with this.

''leave my hand.'' She threatened.

He glared at her , and said in a dangerously calm manner, ''next time, do something like this and I will fire you. You hear me? You will be fired.''

They both continued to shoot daggers, none in a mood to back out. Suddenly Arjun released her wrist and moved away.

He was now in front of the ETF SUV. He closed his eyes and the memories of the things just happened flashed in front of him.

''how can she do this? She even didn't think of me!'' his heart told.

''she has become exactly like you….reckless and indifferent.'' His mind told.

He knew his mind was right. He banged his fist in anger on the bonnet, releasing his frustration.


Zara sa zara sa
Mujhe hai gumaan sa
Zara sa zara sa
Abhi hai nasha sa
Tere hi liye tujhse hoon judaa
Jannatein kahan bin huye fanaa

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They had successfully killed all the bad guys, and now its time for celebrate.they all entered the cafe , and Riya grabbed a chair, and stood up on it, with the help of shree's hand.

''thank you shree.'' She said and shree nodded, with a slight blush on his cheek and Chotu grinned at him. Then Riya shouted at everyone…actually just saying in a normal voice, as everyone had already looking at her as she was standing on a chair!

''guys….today is a very great day for us. We all..'' she looked at Choree, and at the same time SakIza entered and witness her standing on a chair in the middle of the caf, '' executed the encounter pretty well…so its now time to celebrate.'' She happily announced and everyone clapped and cheered.

''so, today, I will give you all a treat on behalf of my team. Cheers guys and enjoy.'' She concluded and a round of applause again with cheers, clappings and whistles.

ETF headquarter was never so lively. Everyone enjoyed the treat…of course, when someone else had to pay for your meal, who wont be happy?

SakIza joined ChoReeIy, and started chatting . Saakshi was observing her closely, like riya is a mystery book someone can never solve.one moment she is so cold and now she is so lively…just like another normal girl! Actually, she is like this with all people, except Arjun.very mysterious, she thought.

Suddenly, Riya got a call, and all her good mood flew out of window. She furiously got up, and merged towards the exit.

''isse kya huwa?'' Chotu managed to blurt out with a mouth full of sandwich, while Liza giggled at him.

''main abhi aati hoon.'' Saakshi also excused herself.


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''how dare you Rawte?'' Riya burst into Arjun's cabin, and he calmly get up from the sit.

''tumhari himmat kaisi huyi aisa karne ki? Isska haq kisne diya tumhe?'' she continued to scream at him, while getting close to the place he is standing.

Arjun called to the commissioner as soon as he came back. He requested him that Riya wont be allow in encounters , shoot outs, or any of field job.she will only help in investigation and paperwork, nothing else.Commisioner was shocked, as she was a very good officer,but again lost with his arguments and agreed.

''you are crossing limits.'' She said in a gritted voice, as she stood in front of him, looking at him with hatred and anger. They were so close that air had a hard time to pass through them.

''it is final.'' He said in a calm voice.

''really? Why the hell did you…'' she was short of words, thanks to her infamous temper.

''it good for both of us.'' He answered.

'' You have no right to think or take decisions for my good.'' She mocked him.

''of course I have. As a boss, and as a husband.'' He answered.

''husband? Please…you are insulting the word.'' She looked away in disgust, and Arjun's face left all color.

''I am not in a mood for this nonsense. Take back your order.'' She threatened him, while he looked at her with hurt face.

''I wont.'' He said in a concluded tone.

Riya was out of the limit of anger. If there was a gazette to test her temper now, it would have blasted.

''who do you think you are? You are nothing in my life, got that? Stop interfering in everything.its my life, my job. Whats your problem with it?'' she yelled at him with the top pitch.

''you are getting yourself in danger.'' He also raised his voice.

''so what? That's part of our job !'' she yelled back.

''not like you did it. You purposely put your life in danger.'' He answered.

''so what? Why on earth do you care? You wanted me out of your life. And I am out now. Let me live my life I want to.''

He was hurt beyond anything. He was close to break down.

''I just want you to be safe.'' He only managed to say.

''you don't have to . just get out of my life.'' She spit the venom.

That was it! The words break all the barriers. Arjun heart broke in pieces, literally! He really wanted to cry and scream, but he just stood there, freeze in his position, and stared at her.

She turned to leave, when she felt strong and warm fingers clutching her arm.

''what the hell? Leave me.'' She turned and hissed.

He was not doing anything, only clutched her arm tightly, as if he was clutching on his life. She continued to try to release it from his tight grip, but no success.he gazed at her intently, watching her reactions.

The hatred in those eyes killed him. And the words totally broke his soul. He could not hold any longer.he pulled her close and hugged her tightly.

She was shocked at this hug, and forget everything.he continued to hold her tightly, and Riya can swear on her life that she heard the sound of his sobbing.she was again shocked, he was hugging her!

Unknowingly, her arms also moved to hug him back, when she heard his words.

''please, leave. I beg you.'' His voice choked at place.

The words bring back the reality.the anger had left her, and full of queries took its place.why he keep saying this? Why don't he tell her everything?

He slowly broke the hug, and looked at her.there were tears running down his cheek.and it hurt Riya beyond anything. He was in deep pain.

He left her arm, and wiped his tears . then he sprinted out of the cabin.

Riya's knees gave away, and she slowly slumped on the floor, her back supporting the table.

What did just happened?

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Arjun sprinted out of the cabin and went towards the men's loo. He banged the door and stood infront of a mirror.

He looked at his image, tears running on cheeks, eyes red, face blank.he closed his eyes.

Why things had to be this way? Why why why?

He angrily opened his eyes, and punched in the mirror, smashing the mirror in pieces!

Blood slowly came out of his fist, but he was not sensing anything. His whole mind was blank due to rage. He was angry at himself.

"Arjun!!!!'' a female voice bring him back in reality.

Saakshi went outside the caf and looked for Riya, but could not find her. After sometime, she watched arjun leaving his cabin, and went towards the men's loo, banging the door. She followed him and heard a sound of smashing glasses.

''oh my god! Arjun ! yeh apne kya kiya? Kitna khoon nikal raha hain…'' Saakshi was panicking to see his palm hurt.

He was not in a mood for all this.''leave saakshi.''

''I am not. You need to bandage it first.'' Saakshi was too worried.

She didn't back out after much his shoutings and took him to the medical room. She was cleaning the wound and scolding him.

''koi aisa karta hain kya? Gusse mein khud ko takleef dena konsi samajhdari ki baat hain? Aapko jarasa bhi khayal hain ki kitni chot lagi hain? Ekbaar socha bhi nahi mere baare…'' her voice trailed off as she realized what she is saying.

Arjun was staring outside the room, as he noticed Riya staring at him from outside. She heard that he punched mirror, and rushed to see him. But there was already someone for him.

She so wished she was there.the time passed as Saakshi cleaned his wounds, and Ariya staring at each other with pain and longing.

Ab ik dhuaan sa dikhta hai
Jo bhi likhun main, mitata hai do pal me hi
Woh batein, woh ratein, woh yadein kisi ki
Chootati hi jaa rahi hai
Tootati hi jaa rahi hai woh har kadi
Inn saason ko, aahon ko
Mere gunaaho ki mill rahi hai koi saza
Jannatein kahan bin huye fanaa



uff...ended😕


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Posted: 12 years ago
sooo niceee

i'm waiting for the big secret to unfold

waiting waiting waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh BB this is the bestest ever u did..
Awesome..
Jo words acche hain sab tere liye..
Yumne toh scah mai rula diya yaar..
Arjun's care, his emotion. His anger and the passion of his love..just touched my heart..

They way he go to save her in the encounter and then the order. ..

Oh my heart..
I really can't see them like this ..
They both love each other and apart frm each other..

Well i liked the comedy part..
About the treat..
But you rocked today..

Till now arjun wants only and only her safety..
And he told comm to refain her from field work..
How much care..

Then riya 's outburst.. Awesome..
She must have gone thorough a lot..so was he..

And both are stubborn..
They are here together..so ab kya prob hai..

And arjun broken down.. It hurts a lot ..i can't express bb..
Just awesome..

Lastly she is concerned for him..
Why she didn't run to to him and hugged him like he did..

He still needs her..her love..her care..
But what is stoppping him damn it..

Hey damn it se yaad aaya sam kahan hai..
Ayesha bhaga k toh nahi le gayi..

Ok ok..
Ye sakshi ko arjun se pyaar ho gaya hai..
Pls koi triangle mat banana bb..

Love this from the bottom of my heart ..


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome.
Amazing.
I am lost of words.
You are such a good writer.
Plsss make ariya together.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part... why s Arjun behaving lik this? wats he hiding from Riya??? Feeling bad for both... u potrayed both of their feelings really well... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Best update
lov it
beautiful
heart touchin
awesum sng
thank u so much dear..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
IT WAS AN AMAZING UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved it😆

it made me cry😭

I'd really like to knock some sense into both Arjun and Riya's heads!!
sERIOUSLY!!! Why are they hurting each other like this?

I hope they get together soon!!!!

Nice update!! 😊

Update the next part soon!!!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing
whay yhe hell is reason behind all oc this
continue soon

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