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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Awesome update...life is about choices and Actions...loved the way Khushi and Payal...stood out and gave Arnav a good dose...I love this Khushi, I think Arnav is going to fall fully flat for her...

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Congrats on the new thread...

That was a fab update...
The starting conversation between Khushi and Payal was very nice...
Arnav's reaction was all bsed on his concern...

Akash on his flirty high... beautiful, sweetheart, darling... hope he decided on something...

Khushi's outburst to make her husband see sense was very effective...

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

I'm glad Arnav finally has someone to tell him to the bitter truth he doesn't want to accept. Hopefully he doesn't make true on his plan to make her regret marrying him!

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Sadaf Rizwan

@saduf

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

fantastic update

good going Khushi...Arnav needed that reality check...

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

🤗 This one is for Arnav!!

☺️ This one is for both Aakash and Payal!

⭐️ This one is for Khushi ... as she a star!

This one for the 1st hug of MD!

👏 and this for meri Alsi Patti! muaahh!!

yes that was summary of pretty much what i felt for each of the chars during the read! :)

The entire update was so beautiful that you cannot take your eyes off without tending to it by re- reading it...

Zehra ... one of the thing i like abt ur updates is them being longish... it always fills my heart with contentment... like a hearty meal! :) but whatever the case they always manage to grab more attention with its parting line(s)!

like the one in this... gawd knows what went on after the glass shattering incident that finally leaves us with 'The embrace'..

Seriously Zehra ... like i said it was a hearty meal ... yet you left us hungry for more! :)

Thanks a lot for the update darling! :)

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tanvia

@tanvia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

wow

it was aweosme

i loved it

that was so great ...

khushi 's persuasion always works for him and his reactions are so touching

great update

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

First of all Congrats on the new thread. Loved this chapter. But I have few suggestions if you may consider. Actually I liked the way Khushi talked to ASR in his own language and his own tone. But I would have loved one dialogue from Khushi in the speech when she was blasting Arnav - Like I thought I was marrying a ruthless, arrogant, devil incarnate but after marriage I really am feeling bad for thinking about you in those terms. I was falling for you but now I came to know that you are nothing but a coward who can't accept the reality. This would have given Arnav the chance to know that Khushi is looking forward to live her life with him and he needs to put his past where it belongs in past. That would have given a good closure in my opinion. Right now I don't know why or what forced Arnav to come out of the guilt trip and then at the poolside to thank khushi. I would love it if you explore this angle a little more in your next update.

Loved the way you have introduced the Payash angle here and now with the cliffhanger, I can't wait for the next update. And congrats on being the IF writer in the spotlight. You are a damn good writer and I am absolutely in love with all your stories. Good Job and wish you many more such laurels for you.

Edited by psarada - 12 years ago

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Congrats for the new thread
Awww that was such sweet, cute, naughty, romantic and emotional update
Pls continue soon
Thanx

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

loved payash in this update... naughty naughty akash... n im confused with Arnav... he said she will regret marrying him n then at the end he said Thank you... was it a sarcastic one or a genuine one??

lovely update... waiting to read more...