Raesha FF: Pehla Pehla pyar hai. Pg143 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Awww.. You finally posted it.. 😳

It's darn cute and exactly what must've transpired between the two back then.. 😃

And yes, Behna.. This spark will not be missed or forgotten anytime soon.. Or so, we hope! 😉😳

Loved it.. And please continue.. 😳

Lovely piece of work! 👏 Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
awww that was such a cute sweet and superbly awsum os...
loved it to core...
omg raisha aree to cutee... aur sam's dialogue ki tumko dekh ke sare dialogues bhul gya was too good...
plz continue if you can... 😳
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome i love raesha plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
good one chechi...
the story line was a perfect match to the pics
welcome on board bhabhiji,,,
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
neki aur pooch pooch
continue dear
jab maine "jaan" suna show me muje yeah laga ki show ki writers definitly hamari forum visit kar rahi hai😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Hello...back with a new part...hope u like it...translations included below hindi dialogs...

Part2:

They didn't get much of a clue from the jewelers…..it seemed that the owner of the store wasn't involved with the betting…..

They had been walking back to the spot where they had left the vehicle, a little far away to avoid suspicions…..Sameer noted that Aisha was very silent and her face showed some kind of disappointment too!

He thought for a while and then decided to enquire……

Rathod: pareshan lag rahe ho? kya hua?

[you look worried…what happ?]

Aisha: aur nahi toh kya? Maine toh apne shaadi ke jewellery bhi pasand karli thi…par koyi faydha nahi hua!

[what do I do?? I had almost selected the jewels for my wedding..but of no use]

Rathod: [a bit confused at her words] kya matlab??

[meaning??]

Aisha: matlab case ko koyi faydha nahi hua na???

[I mean we didn't get any clue for the case]


Rathod: [smacks himself for thinking way beyond the case..in fact he wasn't even thinking about it for the last few moments] ohh…tum case ke baare mein baat kar rahi thi??? Maine toh….[munches back his words]

[oh, it was about the case….i felt..]

Aisha: [rolling her eyes] of course, case ke baare mein soch rahi thi….aap ne kya socha??

[of course, I was thinking about the case…what were you thinking?]

Rathod: [just letting out what he felt but after cutting out some] maine socha ke tum waaqayi mein shaadi kar rahi ho!

[I thought that you are really going to marry]

Aisha looks at him a bit embarrassed and blushing "pehle koyi ladka miley…phir karungi na shaadi!"

[let me get a guy first…then will surely marry]


Rathod: [almost the next instant] kya ab tak aisa koyi nahi milaa??

[so you haven't got someone yet?]

Aisha: nahi….[thinking for a second] on second thoughts, shaayad mila ho par ab tak patha nahi chala ke wahi hai….[smiles casually]

[not yet….on second thoughts, maybe I have met him but haven't felt anything special yet]

Her words and smile did stir him again….he had his cooling glasses on and those sure hid what he felt for her in those few moments…..

He had to thank them for that favor else, his eyes would have let out his true feelings…..and she would have caught him off guard like she did at the shop!

But adding to his turmoil, she looked at him and enquired "kya aapko abi tak koyi nahi mili?"

[haven't you got someone special yet??]



Rathod didn't reply for a few seconds….sensing her silence, she added, "agar maine kuch zyaadha pooch liya toh..I am sorry"

[I am sorry…I guess I asked something very personal]

Well what did she know about what his heart was saying out now…..She had created enough storms in his heart already……If only she knew what she had done to his stony heart…he couldn't help thinking on those lines….She had already kick started the melting process and he could feel it happening as well!

But he managed to speak up "no no Aisha….aisa kuch nahi hai….baat simple hai….aaj tak aise kisi ke saat ki zaroorat mehsoos nahi hua….[looking at her fondly].ya phir jaise tumne kahaa, kisi ko dekh kar ab tak aisa ehsaas nahi hua…"

[its not that Aisha…its just that I haven't felt the need for a partner in my life or as u said haven't felt that way for anyone yet!]

[His heart gave him a quick smack….wasn't that a lie???...he tried to calm down his heart and looked away from her trying to hide his state!

While she was in no better state, her heart did do an extra beat when he said that and often skipped a beat when he looked at her like that! Kuch kuch toh ho raha tha par dono anjaan!….]

Arre re arre ye kya hua maine na ye jaana

Arre re arre ban jaaye na kahin koi afsaana

Arre re arre kuchh ho gaya koi na pehchaana

Arre re arre banta hai to ban jaaye afsaana

Aisha snapped out of her wandering thoughts and added "hmmm…..jaisa Arjun sir humesha kehthe hai na? humaare saamne hokhar bhi kahi baar dikhtha nahi…."

[Arjun sir is right in saying that often we fail to see things which are right before us]

Sameer had to agree on this…..Arjun had said it right….maybe bang on for them….

************************

The case was solved and all are back at ETF…..

Chotu, Shree and Liza are on their chat mode again…..Free time in ETF was a rare phenomenon and whenever that happened, they never left the chance go waste…..

And today was extra special…..they had their target fixed in advance…..Aisha….

After all, their daredevil lady cop had adorned the form of a would-be bride and that too pairing up with whom…their chief, Sameer Rathod himself!

Well they weren't gonna let her go so easily!...

Aisha was sitting across the table and busy reading something……

Shree coughed to grab attention….and started off naughtily "Chotu, tumhe patha hai kisi ne apne shaadi ke planning start kiya hai!"

[Chotu, do u know that someone is planning their wedding]

Chotu: accha??? Kaisi planning??

[what planning??]

Liza pitched in "most important planning Chotu…..jewelery ki shopping!"

[most important…shopping for jewellery]

Aisha was listening to all and had long realized that it was all heading towards her….

Chotu: [pretending not to get whom they were referring to] tum log paheliyaan bandh karo aur saaf saaf bolo kiske baare mein baat kar rahe ho??? Aakhir mujhe bhi toh patha chale kaun kisse shaadi kar rahi hai??

[don't confuse me now…tell me clearly who is marrying whom]

Shree: [grinning] offo Chotu…tumhe ab tak nahi samajh aaya…….accha main samjhaatha hoom…..aur kaun humaare team ki shaan…..ETF ki jungili billi….humaare apni Aisha Kapoor….aur dulhaa hai…[stops abruptly]

[Chotu, u didn't understand still, huh??ok let me explain…Aisha kapoor..and the bridegroom is…]

Aisha looks up and snaps him "shut up Shree….mazaag ki baat nahi hai!"

[shut up Shree..its not a joke]

Shree: [winking] arre, kisne mazaag kiya…maine toh…..

[who said it is….i only…]

Another sharp voice spoke up forcing Shree to stop "maine toh kya Shree?"

[I only what Shree…]

All turned around and saw the chief himself just behind them…..

[To be continued]

so how was it??? pls do reply!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
yippee me first😆😉
lovely Vidya, you portrayed the confusion,shyness of these two very well😳
the seeds of love have just been planted, soon we'd get the fruits 😆😉
and like always Shree had to say something n be heard😆
please continue😉
Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
realyyy
good
cont soon
thanx fr pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
An amazing update again! 😳
Loved it! 😉 Especially the first part.. Unki walk wali baatein! 😉

Lolz.. Shree, Chotu & Liza nikle the toh Aisha ko chidane.. Per humare chief saheb ne aake unki bolti bandh kardi! 😆

Continue soon. 😃

Thanks for the PM. 😊
Edited by ..Sneha.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Lovely..
Its really cute how she apologised, if she might have asked something, she shouldn't be asking. 😳
And let me complete her, Main toh bas aise hi kaha tha shree!! 😳
Continue soon..
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