#7 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Page 81 November 6

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Amazing Chapter ... !!!

The way you portrayed rey's and taani's thoughts ... loved it <3 <3

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Purple Feather

@Purple.feather

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#432

i was really happy to see u updated n the update was really nice... now both know especially taani that no matter what he will be with her as he cares for her... thats really sweet of her savior ... update soon pls n also consider my request to bring a new character opposite taani so that she can also be happy... n pm me when u update...

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Updt was good bt no kriyaansh
Cnt sn n pm me too

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Jab se i have seen ur pm,m just singing 1 song. .
'dekho chaand aaya,
chand nazar aaya. .'frm swariya,all didicated to ur update. . .🤣
gosh. .i had toh run to the last part to catch up with the story. . . .
Hmm. . .u zaalim writter,ek toh itna late update upper se itna chotu,not fair. . . .
Kitna tadpaati hai tu. .
Waise update was nice. . .acha justification diya,humara rey the savior and taani . , .umm leave it. . .
OMG. . .intense part start hone wala hai,m super excitd. .jaldi-jaldi update krna. .m waiting 4 it. . . .

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

khushi just tell me if u r going to make rey n tani as pair

so that i leave reading this ff

do pm me

i am also very much angry on u as we dont have kriyansh ff list in the forum too

sorry if i sounded rude but yeah this was something i want to pin point from long.. we have tani ff list in d3 forum ss list but not kriyansh why so?

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

khushi just tell me if u r going to make rey n tani as pair

so that i leave reading this ff

do pm me

Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

it was a nice part...
Lykd it..
Nd nw do update it soon
thankx 4 d pm

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#438

res

unres

tra pm dekh k i m shocked u updated...???? sumone pinch mee. ...:p

chota tha bt v adjusted only this tym...:p

nd yeh os ka tha nah/... muje pda hua lag ra tha...!!!!

leave it..!!
update is suprbb..!!
loved it...!!
shivam ka ach band bja...:p
nd t ko b akl aa gyi finally...!!
bechare swaron ki date ka satyanash thnx to rey... :p

uknw thats human nature not to listwn until they suffr..!!!

overall update is suprbb...!!!
beautifullywrtten..!!!

Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#439

tujhe guzarish update karna yaad aa gaya..???? 😛

wow wat a gr8 memory you have na...??? 😛

anywaz coming to the update..

it was nice...

i remember most of it is from that OS only... haina...?

but atleast u updated... 😆

sorry have to go somwhr.. so chote comment se he kaam chala le...

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#440

Nyce!!! 😊

Shivam is such a despo... itni jaldi apne true colors dikha diye...😡

Good for taani... atleast she was saved...😳

And rey n swayam... who proved to be right afterall.. 😛

Hope taani moves on for her own good now...😊

Rofl.. what??... rey caught swaron in old staircase...🤣

Matlab privacy nhi milti kisi ko bhi...😆

What abt kriyaansh's date??? Next chappy?? 😉