#7 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Page 81 November 6 - Page 10

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

congrats for the new thread and update next part soon

Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*

Congratulations Khush on the 7th thread. You are definitely rocking girl! Keep it up and may there be many more threads (: Waiting for an update now. 😳

Originally posted by: asmaju

this was a tremendously mind blowing update..
Pta nahii why did you tpe so long with hurt finger..
Swaron relationship was all good..
The confession tats unsaidly done seemed great..
Swayam way of understanding her looks superb.
I just love that forehead touch and cono that followed..
Kriyaansh the way Kriya did not dance for team was great cause she knows hy her mom stops her somewhere.
VP's meting them up seemed nice.
Rey acting trying to make her jealous and she trusting him beyond words.
I'll still say hope he keeps up her trust always,,
Fab update

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

aweee that was an awesome update

loved it very much

kriyansh are sooo cute

waiting eagerly for next update

Originally posted by: --RAINA--

awsome update...
Swaron was sweet
nd my kriyansh again together
i m soo happy
they r too cute...
Update soon

Originally posted by: -Marium-

That was such a lovely dovely update for me.. I just loved it to the core. Now i can see all the way Swaron and Kriyansh at same level so i am really happy.. 😆

The start with Swaron was fab.. their confession was the most needed one for me actually.. because their trial in show was a disaster which was meant to be a disaster because Palki had planned to be a disaster in end unlike you.. 😎 who are in angel here, my KSKS! Love you.. ❤️

Even the KR scene was so adorable and i can actually see kria making cute and weird faces and that crept and a huge grin on my face while in SS scene my heart was jumping like a monkey who gets enough of his favorite bananas! 🤣

Aww, the end in which Sharon learned that she has to build the trust was so lovely.. 🤗

Hey, if the finger isn't fell perfectly right then take some rest of a week or so because too much typing can turn your finger bad.. OK?

P - S : Of course do PM me ALWAYS as i am very much satisfied with the story now.. 😳


-Marium

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

firstly congras for the thread...👏

awesome part...

loved it ❤️

finally swaron are together... nicely written...

so simple yet so BEAUTIFUL...

still Kriya cnt dance... why????

really want to see kriyaansh romantic DANCE...😳

Kriyaansh scene... awww

so finally they are together... hope to see some cute scene between them...

update asap😊