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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 8

Oh wow!!

So afta d confession..she felt dejected..n Arnav was fytin wid himself..

Haddd h..!!!

Hw cud he c her cryin lyk dt..n stand still?

La helped Khushi..she askd Khushi 2 quest Arnav n nt let him go lyk dt..

Ofcourse..

She had 2..

N she ran in d rain..ol ridin n findin him..

Arnav..he was runnin away 4m her..

He shud hav questioned himself..k y possible h kya?

He new he has hurt her..n wntd 2 apologiz..asa he reaches back..bt Khushi z Khushi..

She found his car..n poochte poochte..she found him..

Bang!!1

Dts lov..

It alwz finds its way..<3

Sooo finally evn afta knowin ..Khushi dint mind bein wid him..

Dts wt lov z..:)

N dey r truly lucky 2 hav each othr..:)

<3

epilogue..sooonn!!!

Hope yu wud strt a new 1 sooon/...

Bta toh dena 1 baar aap ..!!

Warna pata kaise chalega? L

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Posted: 12 years ago
I can't believe this is the last chapter. I think I missed comenting on one of the previous chapters. Lovely story. And I loved what Khushi told him- I love all of you, including your deformity. Ah that dialogue from YJHD. I was wondering where I had heard it, and then read it in your credits. I'm so glad Saiyeda(Rasgulla) directed me here, I loved all your works that I read. Please don't feel disheartened by the lack of comments. Some people don't like commenting , others feel their comments aren't good enough. Some others like me are sometimes lazy and forget to comment. Do continue to write :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
A lovely story
And a lovely ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
I want to cry!!! Last chapter and I didn't get to post this anywhere near the chapter:-(
Anyway res... Will unres in a couple of hours.
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I said I wanted to cry because I res'd my spot so late, and now I actually have happy tears in my eyes because the chapter was just so perfect <3
Such a lovely ending to an equally lovely and honest story.
Loved, loved it! And I totally understand you. Somethings just need to end where it should. And glad you went with it..because this ending was just perfection and I would want to change nothing in it. The way he reacted, the way Lavanya (I love her!) soothed Khushi, the way Khushi went after him in the heavy rains, the way they looked at each other when he opened the door, and the following conversation...it literally got me sighing at the the cuteness of it all and the happiness that I felt for Arnav and Khushi. And the following conversation was just... I don't even have any words for it.

My favorite part was the little scene in cabin when she helps him open his cloths and the following dialogues..

'' How can you overlook it? ''


'' I am not. Why should I? Where would be the truth in it if I dont accept it? It is a part of you. And I want the whole of you. As you are.''

What wonderful words by Khushi. Wise chit.

So happy for them and yet I'm sad that this story got over. As I had said before I had formed a sort of connection with it and would dearly miss it. This story was a mixture of so many wonderful things which are part of life and explained so wonderfully - Tea, friendships, relationships, insecurities, and finally... love. And of course the visuals of the hills and the scenes were just...

I'd miss it...and I'm ordering you to start a new story soon.
Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i cant believe the story has come to an end!!!
but what a way to draw the curtain!!
Arnav's insecurities was shown in such a wonderful way!!
and honestly i wasnt expecting khushi to go after him after he walked away...
but when she did and eventually found him that touched my heart..
and the rest of the part just followed the suit...
the way khushi accepted the whole of him,with how he was and that was the ultimate undoing of Arnav's all insecurities and inhibitions- it couldnt have been shown any better way than this.
and there is the thing about your writing,i was supposed to say this earlier,but saying it now anyway..the way you described the rain,the mountains,the roads and overall the nature i could visualize them all...oh and not to forget- darjeeling oolong orbs too..
i will miss this story...
and i am really looking forward to your next venture.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god ...it was just justtt perfecttt !!!!!!! last chapter ... :( but i am sure as ana di said u would surely write another story !!!!!!! :) :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a wonderful heart warming story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res...
Haaw 😔I saw this so late...but phir bhi res nahi toh i will be pushed further away. Will come back to unres this in some time...

*Edited*

Hai Anupama i am going to miss this story so bad...
Darjeling ki thandi thandi hawaien, barsaat, khushi's scooty i am going to miss all that.😔

But i really like the pace of this story...Simple, cute, short and full of laughter and joy. No complication bas pyaar hi pyaar beshumar...😳
A arnav who is not self assured and scared to accept love from anyone and the way khushi just walks into the and completes him and accepts him for what he is.

Loved lavanya and khushi little exchange...and the ending sealed with a kiss was just perrfect...😳
Since you caught us unaware with the last chapter how about a epilogue to let us know how Sahib and his memsahib are doing in Darjeling...😛

Relieved that something in already brewing in your head...Looking forward to that anxiously..😊

Liza
Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
man thanx to la they got together
well what she said was so right naa
she had to take a lead there didnt she
as he never would not unless forced to man
ahhh and that was just what they both needed right
thank god she found him and made him confess through the kiss
wow good move la and khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH MY FREAKING GAWD!!!!!
i m officially in love with your work...nd still cursing myself for discovering this beautiful piece of art this late..
u can do wonders writer...trust me!!!!!
nd one of the proof,s is this beautiful creation...
perfectly perfect endI ng to perfectly perfect story <3
ALTHOUGH I M GOING TO MISS IT LIKE HELL..
PLEASE WRITE SOMETHING NEW ASAP...
PRETTY PLEASE WITH AN ARNAV ON THE TOP.


;)

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