--Raison De Vivre--- (A SwaRon SS) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
hey waiting for update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey do u both have any plans of updating this?? its been 10 days and i am already impatient to read this..(😆if this is my condition before the 1st update then what will happen by the tym u complete it..)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
interesting concept...
i loved kriyam so much n always wished to c krisha as friends...
would luv to read this 1...
thnx for pm n sorry for late comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all THANKS to evry1 who liked this concept and supported us with your beautiful comments..!!

The following 33 member(s) liked the above post:
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Cuming to the update part this is d last update of this month.. coz i am going to be away for my examz.. mayb il b away fr 2 months.. so no updates till then..!!

dont forget our work till then hmm..!!

I LOVE YOU All..!! 🤗
Edited by nj_swaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

Its vacation tym for Rajhanian' s as exams r over n d gals hostel which was once full of enthusiasm , celebration , chit chats , gossips , gatecrashing , cat fights has suddenly turned into a silent den..

Everyone have happily left for their respective homes , leaving behind d stress n hoping for a great vacation except for Kriya n Sharon.

Kriya' s brother who is d only member of d family has left for an urgent meeting to Hyderabad n has important projects lined up , n he would not be available in town till vacations get over n on d other hand Sharon' s parents who r separated r only there to fulfill their financial responsibility towards her..Dey r too busy in deir lives to provide her wid Emotional support n family lyk treatment ..In short she has nobody to return to..

Hence both the gals r left wid each oder to spend d vacation in guidance of warden , where there is no room for fun n enjoyment .

It's 10.00 pm according to warden' s routine its bed tym .

Kriya : Akelapan kitna katne Ko daudta hai na ??? Bhai k bina vacations Kitna khaali khaali lag raha hai !!!

Sharon : Akelepan ki chubhan mujhse behtar kaun samajh sakta hai !!! Bachpan se leke aaj tak akelapan hi toh mera best friend banke saath raha hai !!!

Kriya is touched by her words

Kriya : AAA.. acha chodh is baar main hun naa Tere saath , tu Jo bolegi , jaise bolegi hum waisa hi karenge n Haan Akelepan Ko Maar goli Teri bff main thi , main hun aur main hi rahungi .

Kriya : bhai k saath vacation kaha khatm hotey hai pata hi nahi chalta .

Sharon * Emotionaly high * : Tere pass sirf bhai hotey huye Sab kuch hai mere pass mummy papa dono hai fir bhi koi nahi .. Pata hai papa rAat main mummy Ko Mara karte the aur main akeli bagal k kamre main soti thi ... Isliye Mujhe rAat main akele rehnsese Darr lagta hai

Kriya :* pacifies her * Wada karti hun tera saaya banke Tere saath rahungi Kabhi haath nahi chodungi .

Sharon : Agley saal college khatm hojayega tab tu daga de jayegi .. Tere mere raastey alag hongey aur manzilein bhi ... Tab saath dega yeh purana bf akelapan, iski Aadat daal li hain Maine .

Kriya : Mujhe Ab Teri adat si hogayi hai , meri cheezen jagah pe rakhnewali tu , Mujhe sehnewali tu , Mujhe sambhalnewali tu , Maine toh hamesha Tere saath rehne ka plan kar liya hai ???

Sharon : Plan ??? Kya khichdi Pak rahi hai Tere is khurafati dimag main!!

Kriya : Agar tu .. tu ..tu

Sharon : aagey bol

Kriya : Agar tu meri bhabhi banjaye toh tu humesha mere pass rahegi * kisses her * aur tujhe Mujhse door koi karni sakta
* hugs her *

Sharon * blushes n den hits her *: tujhe yeh Sab aAsan lagta hai , Kaise mumkin hoga yeh Sab ???

Kriya : haay yeh bechaini .!!!.

Option 1
Dekh bhai to mere koi baat nahi taalta toh karlega shaadhi bina koi chu ... Cha kiye

Option 2
Bhai toh mera dashing dude hai toh agar koi gf Nikli toh kasam khilake ,emotional atyachar karke ,yeah misunderstanding create karwake break up karwadungi .

Sharon : Aur tu shaadhi karke chali jayegi tab alag nahi hongey hum

Kriya : Mere pass Iska bhi Tod hai , Ghar jamai leke aaungi

Sharon : yaani tu Mujhe Kabhi akela nahi chodegi

Kriya : Marne k baad bhi nahi


" Sharon tumhara haath jal jayega ", a voice shouts from back * sharon' s taken aback , ,pulls her hand back from burning candles *

At present day , present tym , sharon is sitting in front of A beautiful smiling picture of kriya with a garland n dozens of candles being lit in order to pay her tribute , The potrait seemed to have life , d eyes dat were twinkling d smile dat lit admist d lights of Candles in a Silent Candle March Organized by d students of Rajhan's college in d college ground .

Sharon to Deepti :. Use pata tha ki Mujhe rAat aur Akelepan se Darr lagta hai ,kal tak toh Woh Mujhe Kabhi akela chodhke nahi gayi , kitni Der hogayi ... kaha gayi hai kriya , kab wapas aayegi kriya ???

Deepti : Tum apne AAP Ko pehle hi bahut chot pahuncha chuki Ho Sharon chalo Ab yaha se , dekho tumhare per se bhi Kitna khoon behra hai

Deepti to oder gal : sharon Ko yahase leke jaana hi accha hoga , kal isne kamre ki kach Tod Di aur ussi pe chal rahi thi kriya Ko pure kamre main dhundti Huye

Oder gal : Uska haath.buri tarah se jal gaya hai Doctor ne use akele chodnese mana kiya hai , kaha ki usne kriya ki maut ka bahut vita sadma laga hai .

Deepti : Kriya k bhai kab aaraha hai , usse khabar kissne pahunchai ??

Oder gal : Wardan ne sach kehnese mana kiya hai ,isliye sirf serious hai Itna hi bataya hai ??

Sharon heard swayam' s coming

Sharon shouts in between : Main lene jaungi swayam Ko ??? Main lene jaungi fir hum dono kriya Ko dhundengey.

Deepti calms her down gives her bottle of water , sharon drinks in hurry n den throws it .

Sharon is dragged back to hostel considering her mental health she still shouting to be wid march .

It was a freezing cold winter night , calm as never before ... Wind Swaying to n fro , buh still pin drop silence ,As if showing its fierce anger in its own way of paying a tribute to kriya , the candles stood firmly against d mighty wind , as if dey symbolised kriya's Deeds .
Every Element of nature was paying tribute to Kriya' s Cause , It was a night dat was shouting in volumes for justice for kriya !!!
As d march went on streets towards , people from all stratas of society , different walks of life joined d march where d mothers,saw deir daughter in kriya , N d gals joined in order to protest against system for gal' s security.

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chota tha isnt it..!! 😳 but kya karu starting he toh chappy's aise hi honge na..!! well Sneha n me had a discussion and v arent very sure of continuing this seeing the response.. both over here and on luv shuv..!!

hope u people like this story.. 😳

kindly hit like and comment..

no updates till i come back..!! and no updates till v cross 50 likes here anymore.. n m serious abt the likes..!!

for pm's add nj_swaron to ur buddy list..!!
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Love Nj & Sneha..!! 😊
Edited by namratajadhav - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Guyz as usual add this ID for pm's..!! no pm vl be sent from any other ID okay..!!

!!..PM ID..!!
😉
Edited by nj_swaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

yeah updated.. chk..!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

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unres

amazing update..loved the first scene of krisha bond u showed..

Sharon ke liye- 😭..next time shar ko console karne ke liye swayam should be there..

waiting to read swayam's entry..this ss is going to be really interesting..

and dare not discontinue it..

next update after 2 months😕 not fair..

Still will be waiting to read so plz u both dont forget the ss..

Thanks for the pm

-Veronica

Edited by SwaRon_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
amazing yar...
krisha bond is just heart touching...
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
AWESOME

BEAUTIFUL FLASHBACK

SHARON-KRIA GREAT BONDING

LOVELY

UPDATE SOON :)

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