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Posted: 11 years ago

A Tale of Roads and Raindrops

this strenger love story was mindblowing

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A Tale of Roads and Raindrops

this strenger love story was just mindblowing

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Posted: 11 years ago
terrace - the highest point and a new beginning !!! really an amazing story indeed!!! u gave the hole new meaning to the terrace scene and the relationship of ARHI!!! well, in ARHILAND, everything becomes special and u being a phenomenal writer see to it!!! ⭐️


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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!! that's nice!!! kisses, ice,warmth, desire... and DATING all starts now... enjoyed it immensely 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
These tales are awesome! Enjoyed reading them so far.. will continue reading the rest soon too.

I have some doubt about A Tale of Roads and Raindrops though. Just posted a scrap to Juhi (right?). Hope you answer soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is first time i am reading ur work n i must say fantastic,fabulous,mindblowing...(adjectives bhi kam pad gaye) work dear...

i absolutely hooked...
and the best part is the way u have described the littile littile part,emotions tht makes this os more beautiful...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome tales... just loved.
Thrilling romance...
You are one brilliant writer.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tale 1 : A Terrace Tale
What would you call such a love? correction what would you call such a fab tale?
A Complete 180 change in TERRACE SCENE !!!! MY MIND = BLOWN Juhi ji tum likhna kabhi maat chodna atleast for our Sanity!
Shyam as Khushi's Bro , An Guilty,Flirty, Idiot Arnav what a Treasure to read! and the cherry on Cake Mrs Daring Raizada, The So Issmart Anjali👏👏👏👏
Bang ON Humein bahut achaa laga!❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh damn I read "The tale In Red" and this could easily be my favorite, because it made me so so nostalgic. Yes, because it is very similar to my story when I came to US to study for Masters. I did work in a cafeteria and did number of internships and crazy jobs in summer to make up for living expenses. My school also had a pretty famous ice hockey team, we would all go to watch the games, cheer them on, ofcourse on a beautiful beautiful ice rink. I had never tried hockey, so me and my boyfriend (my now husband) had tried it once, and though we didnt have quite this kind of romantic moment, as there were many others around us, but we did have some hilarious moments, of falling on each other, trying to save each other, failing miserably, to finally taking a step or two without support on the rink. LOL :P

Oh the story was just beautiful. Especially the kiss. Oh the kiss. You're right, the kiss did frustrate me too. There was so much electricity in the moments leading up to it, and after it, it just fell flat, with the rejection and all. I mean how can one neglect a moment as trademark as that. Anyway, so I am glad you recreated that kiss, and infinitely better than it had been. And I was pleasantly surprised that Khushi did not act shy, in fact she embraced the opportunity of getting back for the little bite on lips. :) Perfect.

Loved, loved it! Definitely one of my favorite tales!
Edited by inspiringstars - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Road and Raindrops - It was sizzling, their chemistry, the stolen glances, the kisses, all of it very well written, it made me imagine quite vividly. I was also always fascinated by the role reversal characteristics, while watching the serial, I would constantly think, what if Khushi had done the same with Arnav, etc. So when Max wrote If I were you, I was quite happy. And now this. I love how you made her anti-marriage, and quite ambitious. Love how she leaves Arnav impressed by all of it.
Awww and the rain hug - absolutely beautiful recreation of the actual scene.

I dont know if I have told you before - but you write conversations quite well, I mean just the right thing to say at the right time, like this

"Is that why you came back? Because you found out who I was?"

"No. That was why I left. Because you didn't trust me enough to tell me the truth."
Edited by inspiringstars - 11 years ago

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