ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One*

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amimus

@amimus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1051

Hey Semanti , that was a fantastic story. Arnav as a Ice Hockey player was so cool

And Khushi studying \computer Science , is simply cool. I enjoyed this story completely.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1052

A tale of Roads and Raindrops-Part Two---now that was an awesome story..Napa Valley is so beautiful..I wish my marriage gets held in such a place...well! the role reversal and play of fate (by ANjali and Aman) stole the show! good one!

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tabzz

@tabzz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1053

Amazing. Love the twist and complete new version of #IPKKND. But one thing made me literally laugh was #Shyam being as foster brother of #Khushi 😉
Good style loved it.
Thnx for PM.

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1054

Okay I don't know why I haven't read this yet.

I did get PMs for it, which I avoided thinking I better read it later for my own good. And now I feel terrible for avoiding PMs and more terrible for not having read this yet.

Bleh.

I shall read it soon and pour in my comments :-) (Must I say that the concept is brilliant?)

Ciao!

Ana.

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1055

A Terrace Tale!... totally lived upto its name 😃

The first update really confused me, and I couldn't make head or toe of the situation till the end.

And second update gave all the answers, stitched all the loopholes :D and left me having a lovely feelings.

What I liked about this was the different Arnav, the ever-strong Khushi and the surprising Anjali!

Cheers!

Ana

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1056

A Tale in Red...

As much as I enjoy the original characters, what I love to read the most is when Arnav and Khushi are put in an altogether different environment. And if it's this well written, it is a story tailor made for me to read.
I absolutely loved this one! An ice- hockey playing Arnav, a nerdy Khushi, a brilliant background for the tale and the detailed description. It was an absolute treat to read.
I loved their conversation and the whole skating scene. And the kiss...oh amazing!

Thanks for this lovely story.

Cheers!

:-)

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1057

million thanks to meera for forwarding the link to this thread

i just read the first story and am thunderstuck - oh what a story

iam happy i got the link to this thread - will continue reading the remaining ones

thx dear for this super awesome thread

i have sent a buddy request - kindly accept the same and pm me ur future updates

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Shruti

@ShrutiPandey

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1058

hey my Paisa Vasool writer and Semanti! hie! 😊

My appologies first! ive been so mean all these days! 😔 I did'nt even comment once on any of your updates! 😭 Sorry hons! But i was sooo worked up! these 3 weeks were like hell! shit! i dont even want to talk about all that! But now.. im all free! and Im gonna grab a beverage and read all your chapters!
..waise i'll surely have a b'ful ride now as I can see you guys have posted so many tales already!
Im gonna have a blast now

So, give me this night and I'll pakka se be back to you.. Love you two!
Ciao! 😃

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Shruti

@ShrutiPandey

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1059

Okay!

..This is going to be pretty looong! I need your patience but kya karu.. I have a lot to say.. eerrr.. write! 😉

A TERRACE TALE
Frankly, I never thought of anything even close to that! Shyaam's being Khushi's brother and that too a criminal.. not that I am complaining! 😃 Arnav Singh Raizada! he has a new profession here! an Intelligence Agent! *applauses* I mean.. yess! it matches his persona sooo well! Yayy!! 👍🏼

Anjali was way better here! I mean i really love this lady! but in the serial she was so dependent over everyone! good one girl! 😊

and the confessions! Khushiii.. you stole this tale for me! ❤️ yeah! I equally love Arnav but you were so determined about your marriage that I feel proud!
I really liked this tale dear! it was like a fresh air to me! and yeah! the best part was.. Shyaam was Khushi's brother.. haha! 😆 😆

A TALE IN RED
Semaaantiii.. yeah! that's how I'll call you 😛 😉 ! I mean.. seriously! Havard University for the couple! 😳 waaaooo yaar! I mean.. imagining Arnav there is like..normal! but Khushi too! great! 👏 and I really like the characterization of Khushi in this update dear! she's a lot more stronger, intelligent and because she's living in a foriegn land! she looks more prettier to me with all those over-coats and caps! 😉 😆 haha!

I loved the scene where Arnav's teaching her Skating! read it twice! 😉 he looks adorable to me there! 😊
and "Alright Khushi, let's see you run away now"
haha! 😆 😆 This line clearly defines our Arnav! 😉 all the conversation there was fun to read! and the KISS! aww! 😳 it was very well-written!
..you writers are amazing! Keep up the good work! 👏 ❤️

PS- i'll write more a li'l later! biiee! 😊

Edited by ShrutiPandey - 12 years ago