Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#4, Epilogue-p27 - Page 6

tanda tanda pani still not cooling down the garmi of his jism That line got me dying...i am crying from all the laughing after i read that line

i wonder who was that at the ends

cannot wait for the last chapter and then epilogue

"Sticks and stones may break my bones but chains and whips excite me."

Oh Arnavji, there is so much you don't know about your sweet sister in law.

"Kushi continued to dance and then she slowly approached Arnav like a tiger would approach its prey, like Anjali would approach a pooja ki thaal, like Mami would approach a box of cosmetics, like Akash would approach his glasses, like Payal would approach a box of detergent. "

🤣 🤣 🤣

Naach_Basanti, you really lived up to your name today by making these two naach as well! 👏

arnav's reasons for not marrying are pretty simple but sensible and his moment of realisation was nicely portrayed... also khushi's blend of confidence, innocence and vulnerability was beautifully brought out... even their proposal is unique... loved the way they challenge each other... their married life will never be boring... kudos to khushi for her successful 'seduction' and for not letting arnav off the hook before laying down a condition! never in my wildest dreams thought of such a simile: she felt like she was swimming in a pool of jalebis. 👏! arnav's proposal was touching in its simplicity... loved the manner in which you incorporated the scenes from the show, and the pleasant twist you gave to that horrid 'shoving cake down the birthday girl's throat' scene from the show... khushi's irritated 'I love you, dammit!' was the proverbial cherry on top!

this long wait for an update was well worth it!