Two Shot: 'Di I wronged Khushi for you' Part 2 Upd - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

106

Views

33.4k

Users

72

Likes

450

Frequent Posters

adithyan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#91
anjali and her misunderstanding...she is really unlucky,i must say...

Of course it is Khushi, because Damadji is a gem😡...loji aagaya...


Di I lied to you that I loved Khushi after marrying her. I loved her much before.-------👍🏼..this is it..i am the happiest one...

I want only one thing in my life: Love and I can find it only with one person: Khushi😵...he really said that??

😡
khushi forgave dadi?😡
rima thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: adithyan

anjali and her misunderstanding...she is really unlucky,i must say...


Of course it is Khushi, because Damadji is a gem😡...loji aagaya...


Di I lied to you that I loved Khushi after marrying her. I loved her much before.-------👍🏼..this is it..i am the happiest one...

I want only one thing in my life: Love and I can find it only with one person: Khushi😵...he really said that??

😡
khushi forgave dadi?😡

that's where creative imagination helps😆
rima thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: ipkknd-fan

Wow loved the story :)

Thanks a ton
arnanya thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Why could the actual story not have moved like this ??? 😕 beautiful though. Hoping for more redemptions Rima.

Yours expectantly ...😊
amandadsouza95 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#95
@rima: Nyc story!!!!😊
tinsel thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Heartfelt & Touching Two shot,well written👏
dumas thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#97
AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT LOVED HOW ASR CAME OUT AND TOLD THEM EVERY THING AND SHOWED ANJLAI WHAT TYPE OF PERSON SHE IS AND DADI LOVED IT THIS SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED IN ISPKND LOVED HOW HE LEFT THEM AND WENT TO STAY WITH KHUSHI AWESOME WELL DONE

golpokobita thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Loved the story!
It reminded me of so much of unnecessary drama that was made just to keep this matter hidden!
I loved Arnav's reaction. You portrayed the losses of Khushi so aptly!
..Divya.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Awesome... In the show they never gave the respect khushi deserve from others... Finally everyone understood khushi... M happy to read a os like this
vandana.sagar thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Rima, how did I miss this?
It was so brilliant and intelligent and all that should have been there in the show...every word you wrote brought out their characteristics and story in such a beautiful way...not only did Khushi suffer the ordeal but Arnav too...everyone except Anjali ..she manupliated and coerced everyone as she deemed fit...

For once I am glad Arnav spoke up and against Di in support of his wife, and spoke the truth, Shyam did let him know about Rani sahiba being the kanta in the middle...everyone knew Khushi' s fianc was also called Shyam...Arnav did love her before he married her , he was even going to tell her that night...I just wish he had trusted her feeling for him and his for her...there were so many signs...waiting to be read...

I loved the part about the will...I never looked at it like that...she leaves him the most precious thing she owns from amongst the few things she owns ..and he nothing even though he has so much to leave..
Her love for him had no conditions and his was always conditional ...

Loved that he walks out leaving everything and everyone, it must have been hard for him ...it must have been tough for him to realise how his Di, for,who he has sacrificed so much thinks its all a misunderstanding!,,,,

Loved the end, khushi getting the respect and appreciation ...

Just beautiful...I could go on and own...thank you for writing this...I wish the CVs had too!

A friend wrote this OS...very well written...it's from after Khushi getting to know why Arnav marries her ! If you get a chance do read it, I think you will enjoy it!




http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3598782
Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

6 months ago

SuVeer/RUhaani TS ~ Happily Ever After (Chapter 4 upd) SuVeer/RUhaani TS ~ Happily Ever After (Chapter 4 upd)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to ExoticDisaster C H A P T E R 1 After the completion of the final year exams, Mamta insisted Ranveer to come home from...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

More Than Enough ~ A Rumya Three-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @oh_nakhrewaali in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: Character A has body image...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

Deewaniyat ~ A Jeenat Five-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @Indulekha00 in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: A prompt for the mysterious lovers...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

Mere Brother Ki Dulhan ~ A Jeenat Five-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @heavenlybliss in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: Person A's gets alliance of...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

The Secret Poet ~ A Rumya Three-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @oh_nakhrewaali in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: A college romance where someone...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".