5days vid my luv in d city of joy KRss update pg12 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Read the 2 chapters...awesome yr...
Loved it...
Thanx for the pm
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

I am so sorry lekin i lost the idea of this story toh meine iss hi update mein khatam karne ka socha . Sorry again!

Part 3

The 2 days passed in a jiffy , kriyaansh went to different places and they both were more close than ever.

It was the last day of them in Kolkata and kria decided to take him to nalban .

"What is it kria?"

"It is a picnic spot , jaha boating bhi hoti hain."

"Hmm boating!"

They went . It was a beautiful place with tree and then there were many food stalls , kriyaansh were walking , kria was looking at the lake lost.

"Jaante ho rey bachpan mein ek baar mein apne family friend ke saath idhar aayi , yaha food festival chal raha tha . The theme was of Thailand , and waha ek Thai king baitha tha with a sword , toh mera family friend usske paas jaata hain aur usski sword lekar bhaag gaya!"

Rey laughed.

"Tere dost hi aisa kar sakte hain kria."

Kria pouts. Rey pulled her cheek.

"By the way yeh family spot se zyaada lover's point lag raha hain!"

Kria giggles and nods.

"Lekin hum toh lovers nahi na!"

Kria looked at him , a little hurt.

"Kria idhar rukogi?"

"Fine."

Rey went and called someone he spoke for awhile and smiled , then went to take a boat riding ticket . He took one and came back , he saw few guys looking at kria . He rolled his eyes and puts his hand around kria's waist . She looked up , rey saw tears in her eyes.

"Kya hua baat cutter?"

Kria nods in a no and smiled at rey . Rey sighed they were walking for awhile when kria saw a guy proposing his girl . She smiled . Rey looked at her and knew very well what was going in her mind .

"Gosh! I mean voh usski best friend hoti toh! Best friends and love is a bad combination you know!"

Kria looked at him and nods.

"Seriously , bahot bura combination hain. Rey mein aayi."

Kria ran to a place alone.

"Tu paagal hain kria! Kaise pyaar kar baithi rey se . But mujhe laga ki rey bhi mujhse pyaar karta hain! Mein paagal hun."

Rey heard that and sighed.

"Dear i love you . Bas wait for awhile."

Kria came back , rey was flirting with a group of girls , kria pouts and went to them .

"Rey! Chalo!"

"Ruko na kria."

"Kyun? Tum mere saath trip par aaye ho ya inn ladkiyon ke saath! Chalo!"

She dragged him away , rey smirked.

"Kria humari boat ride ka time hogaya!"

Kria nods , they sat . Kria was really angry , the boatman stopped the boat in between the lake.

"Yeh kya?"

Kria looked at the boatman. Rey held her hand and points above . Kria saw the sunset.

"Oh my gosh it's so beautiful."

"Not as beautiful as you kria."

Kria looked at him in shock , she was standing , rey kneeled down.

"You know kria , you are a girl who can make any guy go weak on his knees. And iss gorgeous face ke saath you have a pure heart . Tu paagal hain , hyper hain lekin selfless hain. In short your unique from every single girl out here in this world . And i fell because of your uniqueness?"

"Matlab?"

"Matlab i fell in love with you! Meine jo bhi bas yeh dekhne ke liye ki kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho ki nahi ! Look up."

"Huh?"

"Look up i said."

Kria looked up and a cracker bursted . It was written Will You Be My Girl Friend? , Kria looked at rey in awe , she pulled him up and hugged him tight .

"I love you too! I love you too."

And they heard few crackers . They looked up and saw crackers bursting in the amusement park beside nalban (nicco park) . Kriyaansh smiled.

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The next day , they sat inside the plane. Kria held his hand.

"I won't ever forget this trip rey."

"Even me kria. I will never."

Kria hugged him and she smiled . Indeed they had spent the most beautiful five days with each other in the beautiful "City Of Joy"

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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Ek dum mast update. .
Haiye. .u knw tu kitni kamini hai,
phle itni mast start kerke humara dil khush kerti hai1.
Fir achanak se story end ker deti h. . .
Bt,Update was superb. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
lovely update
kria being jealous was supab
n rey ne jis tarah usse perpose kiya
that was so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Amazing update.

Kriyas jealousy was hilarious.

Loved the confession :)

Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
lovely update..
Finally the became one in the city of joy..
N ishana congrats 4 bcoming a goldie
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
amazing update👏
loved d proposal😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Amazing update...
Loved Rey's way of proposing...
Rey apki harkato to se baaz hi nahi aayega...
Hamesha Kriya ko Jalapa hai!!:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Zabardast i luved it alooot
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
superb update
kria being jealous was suparb
awww...rey kitni cutely apni kriya ko propose karta h
loved it

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