5days vid my luv in d city of joy KRss update pg12 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Wen r u updating??????😕

Plz Plz do cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
update the next part please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

The next day . Kriyaansh came out of the hotel .

"Chal aaj hum jaayenge , adventure park!"

"Fine!"

"Lekin usse pehle tumhe Kolkata ke roll toh zarur khaane padenge!"

"Roll? What is that?"

"Frankie se kuch bahot zyaada better!"

"Fine! Chalo!"

An auto was passing , kria stopped it .

"Iss mein pehle se hi koi hain Kria!"

"Gadhe , Kolkata mein sirf shared autos hote hain!"

Rey nods , kria told him somewhere , rey saw the guy who was a passenger stairing at kria , so he sat between them. On the way they chit chatted , and finally reached . Kria ordered for two rolls , with extra spice . Rey took it and had a bite.

"It is delicious kria!"

"Thank you!"

"Tumhe compliement nahi dia!"

Kria laughed , rey was lost in her and did not realise he ate a green chilly .

"Rey!"

"Kya kria?"

He realised what he had eaten and drank a whole bottle , kria burst out laughing , after that they went to science city .

"Kria tumne toh adventure park bola tha! Yeh science kaha se aagaya?"

Kria laughed .

"Joke tha! Yaha mujhe ek jagha jaana bahot zyaada pasand hain , issliye i bought you here!"

"Fine chalo!"

They went inside , and reached a place .

"Dinosaur ka mouth?"

Kria bought the tickets , and they went inside . First came the reign of dinosaur .

"Jaante ho jab mein yaha pehli baar aayi thi na , i was really very scared to even go in . Dad mujhe leke gaye the! I just love coming here everytime . You know mujhe yeh issliye itna pasand hain kyunki mujhe toh dinosaur ke saath rehne ki aadat hogayi hain!"

"Actually tu khudh ke dinosaur hain! Creepy!"

Kria hits him playfully , they then went to the arctic area , There werepolar bears (not real of course :P ) .

"Rey mujhe yeh teri yaad dilata hain!"

"Tujhe toh sab kuch meri yaad dilati hain! Pyaar jo karti hain mujhse!"

Kria looked at him , rey looked back smiling . Their eye lock was broken by the people behind them , kria blushed a little .

"Haan haan! Mein toh tere liye apni jaan dene ko tayyar hun!"

"Wow! Chal shaadi karte hain phir!"

"Why not! Lekin aapko phir mere liye roz paani puri laana padega!"

They laugh , and reached the jungle area .

"Aagaya tera area! Dekh kria! Voh bhalu (bear) tujh jaisa dekhta hain!"

"Accha? Yeh bhalu tujhe khaa lega phir!"

"Why not! Hum toh khushi khushi usska meal banne ko ready hain!"

Kria hits him.

"Flirt kahi ka!"

Now they reached the old era , when the man had discovered fire.

"Arre rey , mein animal rights ko bulaungi! Dekh tu kaise uss bechaare animal ko khaa raha hain!"

"Haan aur tu dekh na , waha apne bacche ke saath aag jala rahi hain!"

"Haan ! Why not!"

They came out , laughing and giggling . Kria then took him to a small sa roller coaster . They sat . They enjoyed alot . After that they went to a paddling ride , where they had to paddle to go forward and if they did not they would probably be stuck till some other cart comes and pushes them .Kria was tensed about it.

"Rey mein paddle nahi kar paaungi!"

"Kuch nahi hoga kria!"

A couple was behind them.

"Don't worry agar aap log ruk gaye hum Dhaka de denge!"

"Uh , aap logon ko aage jaana hain?"

"Kria dar kyun rahi ho!"

"Please na rey!"

"Fine!"

They went behind . When their chance came , kria happily paddeled , when they saw that the same couple had stopped .

"Aapko Dhaka chahiye?"

Kriyaansh laugh and push them . After the day in science city , they went to a cafe , it was a chocolate cafe , where there were many chocolate fountains , There was a cd player where you could play your own songs and dedicate it to your friends or girlfriend / boyfriend .

"Rey dedicate me a song na!"

"Kaunsa? Oh haan , jaa chudail!"

Kria hits him playfully , rey laughed and went to play a song . It was little things by one direction .

Your hand fits in mine
Like it's made just for me
But bear this in mind
It was meant to be
And I'm joining up the dots
With the freckles on your cheeks
And it all makes sense to me

I know you've never loved
The crinkles by your eyes when you smile
You've never loved
Your stomach or your thighs
The dimples in your back at the bottom of your spine

But I'll love them endlessly

I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth
But if I do, it's you,
Oh it's you,
They add up to
I'm in love with you,
And all these little things

You can't go to bed,
Without a cup of tea,
And maybe that's the reason
That you talk, in your sleep
And all those conversations
Are the secrets that I keep
Though it makes no sense to me

I know you've never loved the sound of your voice on tape
You never want to know how much you weigh
You still have to squeeze into your jeans
But,

You're perfect to me


I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth
But if it's true,
It's you,
It's you,
They add up to
I'm in love with you,
And all these little things

You'll never love yourself
Half as much as I love you
You'll never treat yourself right, darlin'
But I want you to,
If I let you know, I'm here for you,
Maybe you'll love yourself,
Like I love you
Oh

And I've just let these little things
Slip, out of my mouth,
'Cause it's you, oh it's you,
It's you,
They add up to
And I'm in love with you,
And all these little things,

I won't let these little things
Slip, out of my mouth,
But if it's true,
It's you, it's you,
They add up to,
I'm in love with you,
And all your little things

"Oho! Aap mujhse pyaar karte ho?"

"More than myself!"

Kria laughed , hiding her blush . Rey smiled as his plan worked. They soon went back , as they were too tired , they immediately crashed to their respective beds.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
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Unres

Loved d update 👏

It was awesomeee ⭐️

Waiting for the next part 😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
wow!!..
vry cute update ishu
loved it
n the song...
4rm one direction
loved it
one direction ..my fav
n u too 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Aww nice update
loved the song!
update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
it was really nice!!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
the chapter was quite simple great... the song was awesome...
continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awsome update...
Lykd it
thankx 4 d pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome...song from one direction... one of my fav...thanks 4 the pm...😊

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