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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alexandrite91

Hi

I can't help ask where chapter 11 is? Page 87 has come and gone... please update soon. I'm assuming that you're under a lot of pressure and therefore are really busy. I hope things get sorted soon and you're more relaxed and get enough time and space to do the more creative things like writing. Take care and remember that your readers will understand if you need to take time out for yourself. We're all friends :)
See you soon


i am really sorry leah but was not well but am updating really sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
I know that i am not been able to give u all update for so long and i said that i will give update when the comments will reach 87 page but i was not well and i did not wanted to write any more wanted to leave IF but a friend o mine told me that she will never let me leave the IF i am really sorry to u all i know that couldn't update and took a lot of time i was not able to write every time i started write i could not get what to write anymore the girl u think with so much concept was literately blank at that time tried many time to write but could not
than one day i just visited a FB taarey fan page there the admin of the page asked the readers which story update they want and 90% reader were saying shinghania ridge than i thought have to write for the readers don't care how much days it takes to write a update but will write it and than on IF u buddies were pming me asking about the update scraping me


leah wrote me a note am really sorry leah i know that u were a silent reader and u joined IF when i said that i am stopping writing because i am not getting the comments i expected ur first post was the comment on my story i am really sorry but have wrote the update i hope u will like it







I did not meant to hurt any one of u

Edited by flicka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 11

Rey untuck the sheet which was covering taani body his hand touch taani bare body and a sensation run throw taani body taani closed her eyes with its effect and rey threw the sheet aside he looked toward taani closed eyes and than toward her lips his eyes showed a sudden desire to kiss her he moved to toward her lips and in no time his lips where on her kissing her like these lips were only meant for him to kiss on them taani responded to the kiss but took some time to respond she was not able to believe that it was all true not some dream the kiss last for a long time than rey moved toward her nose and kissed it the nose that was turning red my their closness than to her cheek that were red due to blushing than her eyes that were closed because of the effect of his touch he was kissing her like he will never let her go taani breath was coming quickly she was moaning with pleasure and was pulling rey near her like telling him that she is all his

Rey was not able to control the desire that was rising with in him with taani every moaning he pulled taani toward him and kissed her aggressively like only he have the right to do it and make love to her after some time rey was playing with taani hair while kissing her on her neck and shoulder and taani hands were on rey bare back diging her nails in his skin taani was enjoying every minute of it

Rey again kissed taani on her lips and taani heart beat kept on increasing by every touch of rey. Rey kept on making love to his wife the whole night this night they became one and both of them does not wanted more than they have but the love of each other

Taani does not know that love can be like this she only knew that this was the moment she had been waiting her whole life but she was wrong in choosing her life partner the one she choosed for herself betrayed her love and the one she hated and God choose for her was the one she was looking for her life the one who can make her feel like he wants to the one who can love her like the way she wanted to get loved al she knew was that she was made for this very moment and dthis was the happiest night of her life and she does not want this moment to end

Rey knew from the time he saw her that is the women he is looking for all his life he knew when he saw her standing with sawyam smiling in the party that he loves her and she is the one for himbut he does not wanted to admit that fact his heart told him many times but he ignored his heart when he kissed her for the first time just to teach her a lesson he knew that he wanted that kiss it was not a lesson but a way to show his love which he can't show otherwise he does not wanted to admit that he is in love because he knew that I he admitted ot he will put this woman life in danger he can't make love to his own wife because he knew that she will have to face the concequences of his love he tired to control his desire his emotions because he does not want to lose another person but know he can't control his emotions his desires anymore when he knows that she also loves him with her whole heart sould and body he knows that he had to fight to save his love but he is ready to fight to save his love his life and he will save her no matter what

He remembers that how he lost his brother and his going to be wife those two innocent people who just love him lost there life because they were a stone in for them who want Reyansh Shinghanaia money all they want is to get his money and the easy way they find to live on their money Rey's girl friend the one who enjoyes on his money no one knew who she is but rey remember how these people kidnaped Rahul and was about to kill him and in oder to leave Rahul life rey had to make that deal and in this deal came this woman his so called girl friend the woman he hate the most but have to give her what ever she does what ever she wants but now no more he can't tolerate this drama anymore he have to fight it for the women he loves and need to end all this

Rey remain awake the whole night looking taani like he never want to close his eyes he is afraid that he will lose her like he lost her brother taani was sleeping while her head was on rey's bare chest and her one hand was encircling him like she was also afraid of losing him they both knew in their heart that some thing is coming on it's way and after this night every thing will be changed their relationship their love for each other

Rey kept on looking at taani caring her hairs how innocent she looks while sleeping her life's angle she changed her life completely he had forgotten that there is something called happiness but since she had come in his life a his wife he started smiling again he started living his life again

Suddenly there was a knock on the door rey looked toward door direction and again at his sleeping angle he does not wanted her to get disturbed from her sleep so rey carefully put her head on the pillow and tried ti get up but taani hold his hand in sleep and pulled him toward her rey fell on the bed his lips were about to touch rey they were little apart with this fall taani got disturbed in her sleep she made and irriated face in sleep and moved toward the other side and loose her grip on rey hand rey was got busy in admiring his angle and was smiling but again some one knoked at the door rey came back to his senses but he wanted to kill the person who was outside knoking he moved toward the door and opened it he was about to shout on the person

Person: rey I want to talk with u its aurgent

Rey: u what r u doing here at this time u know

She woke up in the morning and find herself alone in the room she was too engross in her own thinking that she did not notice her surrounding she thought that may be it was a dream and she was dreaming what ever happened and a small smile creep on her face she thought that all this can only happen in a dream and if this was a dream it was the most wonderful dream
Than she looked around her she was shocked plus happy she looked and started rubbing her eyes what ever she was thinking was a dream or was the reality it all happened in the reality she was blushing badly now remembering what happened between her and her husband last night she thought how she will face him now knowing that she said that she loves him and he did not say that he loves her do he loves her or he did all this so that she will not feel bad but he action showed that he loves her and the way he was kissing her like he will never let her go or he was just doing his duty as a husband so many questions were in taani's mind but the question that was the root of all this question was where is rey ? And was this all meant something for him or he just did it emotions or to teach her the lesson again as she was not listening to him
Suddenly taani heard the door of that cabin open she closed her eyes at once so that who ever was there can think that she was sleeping rey came in the room and saw taani sleeping and smiled he moved toward her and kissed her on her forehead and
Rey: u look so innocent and beautiful while sleeping my cute wife he took taani's hand in her I promise u that I will always love u my angle and will do what ever I can to make u happy and I promise u that I will keep u safe no matter what he again kissed taani on her forehead and went from there
Taani now opened her eyes slowly she was smiling after knowing that rey also loves her the way she loves him but her smile vanished when she remembered his last line that he will protect her no matter what do many questions were in her mind like from whom he is protecting her and what is the danger to her was this the reason that rey never made love to her or this was the reason that he does not want a wife but
Taani want the answers to these question but she knew that rey will never give her the answer to these questions no matter what how much she tries it is useless because he never told her anything about him but she was happy to know that he loves her and cares for her she was feeling like she was the most happiest girl of the world
Taani warped the sheet around her and got up from the bed at the same time rey entered in the room and saw taani he smiled at her wife and moved toward her and catch her hand
Rey: where do u think are going
Taani started blushing with rey's this action: wo mein wo mein
Rey: wo wo kya he looked toward her and moved toward her taani's heart beat increased rey smiled looking at her wife he was really happy to see the effect he had on her wife he never imagined that a woman can be that much beautiful and innocent but now he can't believe the woman who does not leave a single chance to argue with him is standing here like a little innocent child does when the child does something wrong and tries to hid when that child knows that she have been caught than does not look in the eyes of the other person
Rey moved more close to her but she did not look toward him she was feeling shy she knows that right now her face show's too much emotions and she does not want rey to find out all her emotions her heart beat was increasing with every step that rey takes her heart was beating like it will pop out of her body any minutes she was afraid that rey will listen to her heart beat unaware of the fact that their closes have same effect on both if it was increasing her heart beat and breath it was also increasing his but he does not want to hid his emotions he wanted taani to know that he loves her


Hit like and comment next update will be updated when comments will reach page 111 i promise this time

Edited by flicka - 12 years ago
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OMG!! Aim... I have still the effect of your update...It was damn amazing..hot.. perfect..It was really an update..I enjoyed it... The intensity of their love...Goshhh..You described it in such a beautiful manner... na.. Really!! Love you for that... and the kiss...romance... everything was just perfect... and the description... Rey's feeling... goosshhh... I don't have words to say... Seriously!! I read your entire FF again in one go... and I again fall in love with it... Hmm.. He wants to protect her... I think.. In future..something ,major is going to happen kya?? No prob... I loved it..Aim! Muhhaazz to u...
Excited for further Updates...

It was an amazing update...Please...Update soon and actually..There is no need to pm.. as I have eye on your update..But, still..don't want to miss the update...so..PM me!! Love you...Take care. <3

Edited by Ish_taarey - 12 years ago
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unres ..

😳superb update ..😳
i love the way you write ..
you portray the characters feelings and their pov so beautifully .. its just amazing 👏
and in this update too.
taani and rey's pov were portrayed beautifully ..hats off 👏
update soon ..😊😊
Edited by arpita_wadhwa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
WORTH IT, AFTER SUCH A LONG GAP.

DO UPDATE NEXT PART SOOON

WAITING FOR ANOTHER ROMANTIC PART.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww superb update 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome and amazing update dear...
Its super hoott update...
Now want that Rey should confess soon...
And also want to know that what is it with which he want to protect Taani...
So plzz update soon and PM me...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
resss
UreSs..!!


I just loved it...!!

U rock..!!


Edited by Akanksha297 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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suparb updat
bt kuch kuch thoda cnfusing hai
Edited by chand91 - 12 years ago

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