-Never Too Late- A KriYansh one shot. (ch2: pg 9) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
amazing os...loved it...
plz try to continue...
thnx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
chapter and everything is good... continue soon and do p[m me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
tu hamesha aisa hanging in middle wala update kyun dtei hai???
mereko toh laga sad hai..

lekin chalo nhi tha...

loved the OS... it was sweet...


loved how u described the complications in their lives


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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Awesome os :-) loved how you expressed their problems
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awesome OS...
it was tooo emotional...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

superb par phir bhi kahli khali ssaaa

write one more part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesome OS...loved it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous concept ...😊

I must say--u've got amazing ideas...😃

love marriage... still a hard time 🤔

egos clash... n that takes out the hell in relations ...

ohhh... she still did'nt complained..😕

glad that he realized-- wat he've done...😳

plzz continue it na... wanna see them getting better...😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome update really loved it
bt next part milta n sab cheez sotted dikhati to aur maza ata

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Though the concept was nice but the OS felt incomplete.

It would have been better if u ended it on a happy node.

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