Taarey FF:love began unwantedly(Part 18 Pg 34 UPD)

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Ishani

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey dear..Sorry for late reply...I read in one go..It's really an amazing experience while reading...I really enjoyed ur story..U described deep emotions in simple but as well as beautiful way.. Loved it!! fab work...Update soon..PM me!!! 😊

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Prasanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey guyzzz I'm back with my update………first of all sorry for late update I know aap sab mere upar ghussa hai ki main hamesha late update karti hun…..aap sabko mujhe galiya bhi dene ka maan karta hoga……but no problem main sun lungi……waise dekha jaye toh mera late update karna galat nahi hai kyunki mere ko bhi utne response nahi mil rahe hai……anyways main hamesha yehi kehti hun par koi faida nahi so here you go with the update……

Part 11

Here they completed their dance and were caught in an eyelock but soon came back to their sense and composed each other…….But still they were unaware that someone had watched their dance and mainly recorded it….And the person was our diva "SHARON RAI PRAKASH"…….She was smiling throughout their dance and got an idea……When they both completed their dance she came inside clapping….When Taani and Rey heard some sound of clapping from the entrance they looked there and were shocked that there was Sharon…….She went to them and was really happy seeing their dance so she said….

Sh : Wow guyzz u both were amazing….

Taani and Rey (together) : Sharon when did u come…..????

Sh : When u were doing ur dance…..btw I should ask u both that what u both are doing here this early even college dint start yet..???

Taani : vo Sharon u know that I left dance for 6 months so meri practice chut gai so Rey said that he will help as he come here daily so…..

Sh : ohh!!!! Vaise I must say that u both were really awesome in couple dance….

Rey : thanxxx Sharon…….but tum itni early college kyun aa gai still college dint start right???

Sh : Rey I guess u forgot that we have decided to have practice for footloose in morning also……

Rey : oh ya it slipped of my mind……anyways were is gang???

Sh : they are on the way…….u both go and get fresh if u want to as when gang will come I want to have an important discussion with u all…..

TaaRey (together) : Ok we'll be back in 5 min…..

They went from there to the locker room to get fresh as it was more than one hour they practiced…….On the way they had talks….

Rey : Btw I have to say u were really awesome…..

Taani (smiled) : thanxx but I guess not that good than u……U were fantastic

Rey : No its not that u can actually match our levels……u dint needed any practice u know……and mainly u are an impromptu dancer……amazing I actually don't have any words to describe u…

Taani : wowowo……wait don't praise me that much cozz who knows if I cant get to that expectations further than…..

Rey(confused) : why are u saying that???

Taani : cozz I have heard many of them saying that if u praise a person more than he/she will get overconfident on themselves and will soon get low next time….

Rey : Hmmm……waise I guess its true but I trust u….u'll never get low then our expectations…..

Listening that Rey trusts her she soon felt something ticklish in her heart that an unknown person with whom she met just yesterday is trusting her so much but also felt sad at the same time coz like him her own brother(Abhimanyu) and father never trusted her to her whole life.…..She stood there still when Rey moved ahead and while walking Girls locker room came and he turned to his right side to see Taani but she was not there so he turned back and saw Taani standing there lost in her thoughts……so he went to her and called her….

Rey : Taani…..

Taani (coming out of her thoughts) : haa….kya hua…

Rey : nothing….kaha kho gai thi…

Taani : Umm….kahi nai

Rey : Ok I asked coz girls locker room aa gaya aur tum yaha khadi ho…

Taani : Hmmm…(looking towards locker room)Ok then meet u in 5…

Saying this she went inside locker room leaving behind a confused Rey…..before leaving only a word came from his mouth "weird"…..saying this he too left for his destination…..Here whole gang also came for rehersals and waiting for TR…..after 5 min they also entered the RH and saw gang already there….they wished each other……Taani tried to wish Vishaka but all in vain as she totally ignored her and gave her a tashan look….now Rey went to Sharon and asked..

Rey(to Sharon) : Ya Sharon ab toh gang bhi aa chuki hai can u tell us that what important matter is there for u to tell us..??

Sh : Hmm……(thinking)abhi nai Sharon….kyunki abhi baat karegi iss bare me toh rehersals pe effect kar sakta hai…so either after rehersals or after sometime or days…..ya it will be good….(to Rey) Ahh not now Rey pehle rehersals ho jaye aur phir dekhti hun….either in canteen what say…..

Rey : Okay……..(to gang)Ok guyzzz now lets start our rehersals …

Gang(except Vishaka) : Yaa sure….

Vishaka : wait a sec guyzz may I have a pleasure to know that is our song ready(totally in a mocking tone)…??

Sharon : No but it will be soon...in 2 days what say Swayam and Taani…

Taayam(together) : Ya ofcourse…

Vishaka(smirking) : U really think Sharon that this will work……cozz I don't think so anyways whats the use to talk to u all….

Taani : right Vishaka …..when u think its useless to talk to us then plzz let us concentrate on our rehersals as we have few days to practice and ya don't worry song will be ready by tomorrow evening and yesterday after u went we all have selected the songs and today we'll do practice on those beats so not to worry(said very calmly so that not sound that rude)

Vishaka : whatever(in a disgusting tone)…

Swayam (so as to make atmosphere calm) : Ok guyzz now let us start our rehersals….

Gang : Ya sure…

They all started with their warm ups and after 10 minutes of warm ups they first selected on which song and on which beats what steps they have to use……and according to that they started their practice…..style which they were using was street and also thought to add 2-3 steps of other form…..Discussing all this and making steps for each beat and practicing and of course Vishaka's rude behavior towards Taani, they all completed all of this after two hours of practice….As they completed all of them left leaving Swayam and Taani….She went and sat taking support of mirror and Swayam also went an sat beside her….

Sw : So my dear sister how was ur practice today and are u comfortable…

Taani (smiling) : Ya bhai and practice was awesome…..

She started drinking water but it gat stuck in her throat and she started coughing and her breathing got heavy as she practices for total 3 hours and it was her first day……Seeing her like this Swayam panicked and soon took out the pump he had with him gave it to her to have it……She took it and felt better……Swayam gave her water and asked her to drink slowly….She drank and gave her bhai an assuring look that she is fine…

Sw(worried) : how can u say that u r fine and comfortable dekho kya huva….

Taani : Bhai I'm fine vo toh aaj first day hai iss liye attack aa gaya but u don't worry I'm fine….

Sw : Taani are u sure u want to do this…..kyunki agar tumhare health ko kuch ho gaya toh??

Taani(taking his hand in hers) : ofho bhai mujhe kuch nahi huva hai aur nahi kuch hoga jab tak aap mere saath ho right(he just nodded)…..ok bhai let go…..are haa bhai aapne kaha than a that aap kisi se milvaoge vo song composing ke liye….

Sw : Ya hame abhi jana hoga….hum college toh attend nahi kar sakte….

Taani : its ok bhai proxy lagva lenge…

Sw : ok then and ya listen hume apne saath Sharon aur Rey ko bhi leke jaana hoga…

Taani : Ok why not…..chalo abhi yaha se chalet hai and hame ready bhi toh hona hai aur un dono ko bhi inform karna hai right so lets be fast….

Sw : ok lets go….

And they both left the Rh and went to freshen…After getting fresh they informed Sharon and Rey that they have to leave for their song composing….They both agreed and left for the place…..

So here part 11 gets over…

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