Taarey FF:love began unwantedly(Part 18 Pg 34 UPD)

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Hey ever1!!!!! I m new in this forum...
Read most of os ss & ff n they were awesum...
I thought to xpress my feelings through my first ff...anyways lemme start the ff...


CHARACTER SKETCH

Taani Aagarwal : Girl who want to live her life on her own thoughts but is restricted by many people in life but only 1 person understands her vry well anf after all those restrictions also she allows her to live her life and that person is her MOTHER. But Taani sometimes misunderstands her and have fights. But when she knew about her mother's life she wanted to support her by making her happy but she came to know at some unwanted time of situation(which would be told later). She hates her father a lot and her paternal grandmother who made her and her mother's life hell. Hve love-hate relationship with her own brother but loves her maternal side family a lot n her cousin brother. She mostly dont belive in love but after seeing her parents relationship she totally lost believe...

Durga Aagarwal : Taani's mother who had suffered a lot in her life but dint want her daughter to be. She lived a happy life before marriage but after she had suffered a lot. her husband and mother-in-law made her life like hell. She forgot to smile.She wanted to die but her daughter's and son's face made her to live.her husband had totally broke his relationship with her family and also wanted her to break it but she cant so she always used to face difficulty in going to her family. She wnted her daughter to be happy so mostly she supported her.She wanted Taani to be a successful person unlike her. At one point she has totally changed her daughter's life.

Abhimanyu Aagarwal : Taani's brother who almost hate his sister.He is three years younger than Taani but never respected her. He always fights with her unnecessarily.He never made her life to be easy. He always use to abuse her unnecessarily and taunt her. He was the one who restricted her in most besides her father. Taani hates him for that but loves him coz he is her brother.

Swayam Shekhawat : Taani's cousin brother whom she loves a lot. In all his family cousins he loves Taani a lot. She always share with him about her feelings, her life and all and he always support her.He is very possessive about her. He lives in mumbai alone(but his family lives in jodhpur). Studies in St. Louis college. Is a great dancer. He is best friend with Rey and loves Sharon. He loves his father but have some problem with him. ACS of college.

Reyansh Singhania : Also called as Rey by his friends. A great dancer. He is almost understanding person but sometimes loses his patience and say unwanted things to anyone. He is rich, Loved Kriya but after heart break with her he lost believe in love. Lives alone in mumbai. Studies in St. Louis college. Best friend with Sharon and Swayam and knows their feelings for each other. GS of college.

Sharon Rai Prakash : A great dancer. Studies in St. Louis college. Livesin mumbai but first lived in Delhi(where Taani lived sorry for not mentioning first). Best and childhood friend with Rey and Taani(but they both dint meet each other since Rey lived in Mumbai only).She dint met Taani after her school life but always use to talk to her in phone video calls etc. She dont know that Taani is Swayam's sister.She have feelings for Swayam but dint tell him. She knows everything about Taani and her mother. CS of college.

Sorry forgot to mention that Taani is a great dancer + singer...


So guyzzz here is CS of characters and ya ofcourse whole D3 team will be same...
1 thing want to tell 2-3 parts would be about Taani then St. Louis college and D3 team will be presented...

Read the CS and plss tell should I continue...

waise i think main aise bhi continue kar sakti hun without ur telling but plzzz guyss do cmnt how it is...
it will encourage me as its my 1st FF on Taarey...or can say 1st writing ever in my life...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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cs is vry interesting
hope f getting xciting updates
pm me wen u update
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eagerly w8ing fr updtes..do cntinue soon :-)
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Sounda intrestin plz update soon :)
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Thanqqq all for liking it...
I promise that u'll like my ff but i can say that it wont be that good like others but i'll try my best to make the ff intresting...
thanx once again...
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gr8 concept. Different. I Liked it.
plz pm me as well.
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Awesome CS, nice concept plz continue
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So guyzz...i'm back with my ff...hope u all like it
here are 3 parts...so enjoy guyzz...😊So as told 1st 3 parts will be about Taani...

PART 1

After giving her 12th class board xams her school life was over and she wanted to fulfil her dreams of becoming a singer and dancer by studying in St. Louis college in mumbai since it is best in both fields. But unfortunately she cant. Due to her father and brother Abhimanyu also. They dont want to send her somewhere far coz they dont believe har as they think that she will do something wrong and due to that their family name will be down. Taani's father never loved her and wanted to keep her with him till the day when she born but coz she was his daughter and also coz of his wife's begging to him he let her live with him but restricting all her thoughts by forcing his thoughts on her.Due to this Taani ever get frustated and she loses it on her brother or her mom even she loves her mom very much but cant help herself.

Unwantedly she joined a college in delhi only(where she lives) becoz of her father and her mother's beg. Taani's mother Durga never wanted that Taani should underestimate all her dreams but helplessly she asks her daughter to live in Delhi only and study.She loves Abhimanyu also but always shouts and scolds him when he unneccesarily abuses Taani or starts fighting with her but he never listens and starts shouting at both and abuses Taani a lot. They cant help but listen but Taani sometimes loses her patience and also shouts at him. Even Taani helps Abhimanyu a lot but he never says thanks instead he abuses badly.Ths is the relation which Taani and Abhimanyu share with each other. Taani is mostly upset due to her brother and father so she daily cries at night silently not letting her feelings to be known to anyone. But Swayam knows everything but cant help her only can console her.

Now it has been one n half month afer her join in the college. She was not happy coz she wanted to study in St. Louis and fulfil her dreams.Durga can feel it but cant help her.

One day morning Taani wakes up as usual upset and prays to her Krishnaji to make her and her mother's life beautiful and then goes to washroom and freshn up n get ready for college unwantedly. After that she comes down to dinning table for breakfast with low mood which dint kept unobserved by Durga. Watching her daughter like this she also feels bad for her but for cheering her mood she starts the conversation..

D : Good Morning Barbie Doll!!!!
T(low voice) :Good Morning mom...

Abhimanyu was also there and listening to her he cant stop but taunts her.

Abhi: Kyu re chudail roz subah ye billi jaisi awaz le ke lyu mom ko wish karti hai...dhang se wish nai kar sakti kya...Aur dekho to baki din sher ki tarah aur chudail ki tarah chilati rehti hai...chudail kahi ki...

Taani's mood was already low and after listening to him she gets furious so she shouts on him and like that fight starts and Durga can hear all so she goes there and stops them after a lot try.

T : Bye mom see u in evening...(with angry mood)

Saying this she starts to leave but was stop by her mother.

D : Wait Taani...Taani turns and askes
T : what happened mom...?
D : can u plz leave scooty home today???
(Everyday Taani go by scooty to her college and since they have one so Durga asked her to leave)
T : why mom u know na I go from it only so...
D : but Taani aaj mujhe bahut jaruri kaam se bahar jana hai...
T : mom aap richsha se bhi to ja sakti hai na vaise bhi aapko gadi chalani to aati nai hai...
D : beta aaj Abhi ghar me hi rahega so main uske saath jaungi bahut jaruri kaam hai...

like this she tried to convince Taani. After many try she gets convienced and go by bus.

Here at Taani's house...after two hours Durga also go with Abhimanyu for some work. After one hour when their work was done they were returning home from highway. Suddenly atruck's break gets failed which was coming in opposite direction of Durga and Abhimanyu. So truck got unbalenced and it went in front of them and a big accident took place. Immediately crowd formed there and when people saw Durga and Abhimanyu they soon took them to near by city hostipal. They were bleeding very badly.

As they were took to the hospital Durga was soon taken to ICU ward. In the way to hospital Abhimanyu died.While taking them hospital one person informed Taani and her father about the accident. When Taani heard about the accident she was totally shocked and was shattered and feel on her knees. She dint know how to react but tears were flowing from her eyes through her cheeks. She was not able to move also so her two classmates took her to the hostipal.She was in a great shock. Her father also came to hospital but he dint cared about his daughter or his wife, he was only cared about his son. But when he came to know that he was died he was totally shattered and after one hour completing his son's formalities he left from there without caring about the two forever.



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Part 2

After 1 day when Taani came out of her shock the first thing she did is called her brother(who now livivg in mumbai) and mamaji(who lived in jodhpur) and told them about the accident.every1 there was totally shocked and were crying badly. So both Swayam and his father went to airport so that to reach there till next day.Here in hospital doctors said that Durga needs to be done operation within 48 hours so se was taken to operation theatre next day(when Swayam and his father were to come) and it took 2 hours and when doctors came out Taani ran to him and started asking

T : Dr what happened to my mother? what is her condition?how is she?will she be fine?
she started asking ques while sobbing baddly.Then doctor told her
Dr : we cant say anything now coz she is in coma and till she dont come in concious we cant say anything or do anything

Listening to this Taani started crying badly and felt on her knees.She was not able to control herself.Just then Swayam and his father came and heard what doctor said and they were shocked and saw Taani on floor crying badly. Seeing her like that Swayam soon went to her and hugged her tightly and tried to console her. He to had tears in his eyes but he have to be strong for Taani.She was firstly shocked then soon she also hugged him tightlyand started crying very badly. Her mamaji also came to her and tried to control her.They were a lil bit normal after sometime.Taani's mamaji felt very bad that his sister was in ICU and her husband left her and Taani in this condition.He went to doctor and talked about Durga's condition.

Just then one nurse came and told doctor that Durga came out of coma so doctor and mamaji rush towards ICU ward but doctor asked him to stay outside.Seeing him Taani and Swayam also come there.They see Durga through the mirror and Taani starts crying

T : Bhai mom ko kya ho raha hai? Mom ko kuch hoga to nai na?(sobbing badly)
Sw : Taani plz contro; urself nothing will happen to bua...plzz control(tearswere flowing down his cheeks)
T : mamaji aap to doctor ke paas the na kya keh rahe the vo kya huva mom ko...
Mamaji(was not able to answer..he hugged her tightly and said) : plz Taani control...doctors are there na to take care of ur mom nothing will happen...

After half an hour doctor came of the ward with sad face and all three run to him and started asking

T : Dr mom kaisi hai? kya huva unko bataiye na?
Sw : ji Dr bataiye kaisi hai vo? kaisi condition hai unki?
Mamaji : Dr aap kuch bool kyu nai rahe hai bataiye meri behen kaisi hai?
Dr : Sorry unki condition bahut critical hai aur vo...vo... ka...kabhi bhi... unki jaan ...ja sakti hai(in low voice)

After hearing this all were shocked.Taani was really shocked and started crying very badly... No1 were able to control themselves.

Dr : aap log ja ke unse mil sakte hai aur vo mainly apni beti se milna cahti hai...
Saying this he left from there...

All three brought a little courage in them and went inside and saw the scene inside and tears flow from their eyes. They cant stop themselves.Then they went and sat beside her.Taani sat on bed holdin her mothers hand.She slowly opens her eyes and see all three their and small smile crept on her face...She firstly asked that how is Abhimanyu as he was also there in accident.
But they very difficultily told her that he died.Hearing this tears started flowing from her eyes.Now she knew that her husband would have left Taani in such a bad condition. And she also knew that she can die anytime.So seeing her daughter she take her hand and give it to her brother and said

D : Bhai mujhe pata hai unho ne Taani ko hamesha ke liye akela chod diya hai aur ab main bhi jyada der nahi jeene vali hun toh main aapko meri keemti cheez meri beti ko aapki jimedari dti hun...abhi uski puri jindagi baaki hai aur use apne sapne bhi pure karne hai toh plz bhai aap uske sapne pure kijiye main toh jeete jee nai kar pai lekin ab aap use uska goal dijiye...plz bhai mere liye ye meri aakhri wish samajh ke kijiye...
Mamaji : Plz behen aise mat kaho tumne aaj tak aapne bacho ke liye kya kuch nai kiya...apne pati se ladi aur unhe jo cahiye vo diya...aur rahi baat Taani ki toh vo main kushi kushi uski jimedari leta hun aur use puri tarah nibhaunga...use apni beti ki tarah rakhunga aur uske sapne pure karunga...
Hearing this she had small smile on her face and then to Taani...

D : Taani...meri barbie doll...pata hai ki tum ab apni life waste samajh rahi hogi par plzzz beta dont think so...agar aisa sochogi toh mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagega...maine apne life me kuch bhi hasil nahi kiya hai sirf dard saha hai hamesha maar jaane ka maan kiya paar tumhare liye jeeya maine(and she tells her how she suffered in her life what what her husband did and all...hearing all this Taani sobs badly and was very angry on her father and grandmother and all who had made her mother's life hell) itna sab kuch sehne ke baad bhi main sirf tumhare liye jee hun beta taki tumhare sapne pure hote dekh sakun aur use dekh kar ek baar apni life me smile kar sakun par vo toh ab nahi ho sakta...lekin tum mujhe promise karo ki jo sapna tumne dekha hai vo tum pura korogi aapne maama aur bhai Swayam ke saath rehke, St. Louis me padh ke aur aaj se kabhi bhi sad nahi hogi...promise me beta u'll be successfull in ur life and make me and them proud...plzz promise me dear u'll never hurt them n u'll never cry for me again...

Hearing to whole Taani was not able to control but cry and cry so Swayam came to her and stood beside her hugging her and controlling her...then after few min Taani wipes her tears off and says...

T : I promise u mom I'll become a successful person and make u proud n I cant promise but i'll try that I 'll stop crying for u...I love u mom...
D : I love u too barbie doll...(to Swayam)...Swayam beta tum meri Taani ka pura dhyan rakhna plzz uska saath dena aur dekhna ki ye kisi ko pareshan na karen...

Saying this all hugged her and after some time she stoppe breathing and she was no more. All three were shattered but Taani tried to control herself but was not able to...

When they came out of ward crying suddenly Taani starts coughing badly(actually from childhood only she had this problem) and in this process she was not able to breath properly.Swayam and his father got tensed and took her to the doctor .They did her treatment so she came to normal. Doctor suggested them for some tests so they did and waited for reports...




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Part 3

After 2-3 hours reports came doctor called them in. Till now they dint came out of one shock that they got another shock...Doctor called them and showed them the reports and told them that..

Dr : Taani has ASTHAMA...But fortunately its not in a too bad condition but it can be if she dont care about herself and dont take medicine and food on time...

Hearing to this all three were shocked that now only her mother has died and now this...how could she handle it. Bringing all three out of their thoughts doctor said...

Dr : But Taani how much possible u have to try to avoid physical activities or else ur condition can be worst...
T : but Dr how can I leave my dream I have promised my mother I'll get my dreams fulfil and till now I dint took first step also...
Dr : But ur health if u r not in good condition then how can u fulfil it in future...
Sw : But Dr there should be some wy na so that she can continue her dream...
Dr : Listen her condition is not that bad but if she dont take care of herself then it will create a seviour problem. And if she takes more and more stress then it will affect her so I am asking her to be away from physical activities...

Taani then understands what doctor want to say so she interupts by saing...

T : Dr dance and singing is my passion and they are the oonly way how i can loosen my stress so there wont be any problem. I'll take care of myself coz I have to fulfil my promise given to my mom nd I cant back off so u dont worry nothing bad will happen...
Dr : Ok if u r so confident then u carry on but plz take care of urself and take medicines on time and and here is ur pump which u have to use it when you get attack and also before doing any physical activity...now I wish u good luck for ur health and for ur future...

After finishing All there formalities they leave hospital...

Sw : Taani it has been 3 days u dint ate anything plz lets go to restaurnt and eat something so that u can have ur medicines...
T(smiles on his concern) :Ok bhai lets go...chalo mamaji kuch kha lete hain aap logo ne bhi to kuch nai khaya aur yaad hai na mom ne kaha hai ki meri puri jimedari aapki toh uske liye aapko strong rehna padega na...

Listeing to her he gets tears in his eyes and thinks that how strong she is trying to be but inside how torn she is...

Mamaji : Taani beta tum bahut strong ho agar tumhari jagah koi aur hota to jee hi nai pata...
T : after all apni mom ki beti hun to itna strong to hona banta hai...ab chalen mujhe bhook lagi hai...

they all went to one restaurnt and had some food...after completing it Swayam gave Taani her medicines and ask her...

Sw : Taani are u sure u sonna do this...agar iss process me tumhari health ko kuch ho gaya to...
T : Bhai aap chinta maat karo main apne health ko kuch nahi hone dungi kyunki maine mom ko promise kiya hai ki main apne dreams fulfil karungitoh main karungi apne liye aur aapne mom ke liye aur jab tak aap ho toh mujhe kya hoga bhai...

Swayam's eyes get wet and he hugs her tightly...Taani also hugs him back...then they all leave to airport n next day they were in jodhpur...all her cousins and relative came to know about it and every1 was sad and they came to know about her asthma and still how she want to fulfil her dreams...every1 there encourages her...

She and Swayam were there in jodhpur for atleast 6-7 day...in mean time Taani talks to her best friend friend Sharon and tell her everything and tells her that she is coming to mumbai and study in St. Louis...after knowing this she cheers Taani...

After few days leaving in jodhpur Taani and Swayam leave to mumbai when Taani's admission was confirmed...




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Phewww...😕 at last 3 parts are over hoe u all guyzzz lyk it...
plzz guyzzz like it and comment it so that i can continue...
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It was amazing feelin bad for taani plz upload soon cant wait too read abt taareys first meeting plz upload soon n pm me
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Wow, I just read all your updates and they were amazing. I just feel really bad for Tani, I hope she finds happiness.
Plz continue soon

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