Taarey FF:love began unwantedly(Part 18 Pg 34 UPD) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
nice update
after a long time..
do cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
loved the updates they were amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guyzzz I'm back with the next update of my FF….first of sorry for late update…..hope u all liking my FF and enjoying it like other stories……I know that I'm not that best then the other writers but still I'm trying my best to write best story…..thanxx for all the likes and comments given by u but still I think these are less….i'm not getting that response which others get…..so I request u all to like it so that I can give nice updates further…..so now here u all go with the update…..do enjoy it…

Part 10

Next day morning Taani woke up early coz she have to do practice with Rey and she is always punctual of time……never gets late nor let anyone who are with her get late coz she always believes that punctuality is always necessary for getting success in life…she got up from her bed and went to washroom to get freshen up…..after 30 minutes she got ready and left from home informing her brother that she is going for rehersals with Rey……she reached to college after 10 minutes and directly went to rehersal hall…….she thought that Rey would be on time on rehersals but when she went to rehersal hall she dint found anyone there……it was empty…..so she thought that she will do lil bit warm up till Rey comes….so she went inside RH kept her bag at a side and started doing warm up…..after 15 minutes Rey reached college and directly went to RH as he have to train Taani….when he reached RH he saw that already Taani have started doing her warm ups……he watched her from the door….unknowingly a smile crept on his face seeing her…..he thought how punctual she is and how hard working she is…..Taani saw him from the mirror and broke his chain of thoughts by saying….

Taani : U r late Rey….

Rey(coming to his sense): hmmm…..ya sorry actually I thought u would be late so….

Taani : Sorry for disappointing u but I can never be late….I'm always punctual and sometimes cant tolerate others being late like u today……u r now training me so u should be on time…..

Rey : woohoo……sorry yaar never thought that someone who is going to be trained by me will be giving lecture to me……..ok from tomorrow I'll be on time……anyways lets start now…

Taani : Ya of course…..by the way want to say that don't waste ur most time by making me traing daily coz I only need training for a week or less than I'll be perfect…

Rey : ok…..but don't think I'm wasting time on u coz training u will also make me improve if its needed….

Taani : Ok…..so lets start then..

Rey : Ya sure…..(in a lil worried tone)wait a sec before starting I have to ask have u taken ur morning doze of pump and medicines…..

Taani (smilingly): Ya I have taken….now lets start….

Rey : Ya sure…..

Now they have started doing their warm ups….in between they had a few sec LLHH...after completing their warm ups Rey had given her traing for dance steps and he was totally shocked and mesmerized by seeing that Taani was learning it very fastly and doing each and every step smoothly like she is a professional dancer and it seemed like she doesn't need any more further training……after doing their rehersals they had taken a break for 10 min…..both went and sat beside mirror taking their bottles and sipping water from it….

Rey : Hmm….I must say Taani I'm totally impressed by u……..u know what tumne itne smoothly apne steps perform kiye hai ki lag hi nai raha tum abhi training le rahi ho……actually u know what u really don't need any training coz u r perfect…

Taani(smiling) : thanx for the compliment but u don't know ki jab tak main satisfied nahi hoti tab tak na toh main normal rehti hun na toh kisi aur ko……iska bahut hi acha experience Sharoon aur bhai ko hai(and laughed a bit)……bichare mere isi behavior se vo log hamesha tang aa jate hai….

Rey(in a mocking tone) : Haa ye toh hai ab agar tum itni punctual aur itne saare rules rakhi rahogi toh it natural…..(now he saw that Taani glared him so he said)wooh it was a joke….waise must say haa tum jaisi ladki ab tak nai dekhi…..u r total different…..

Taani : thanx……sab yehi kehte hai toh mujhe ye nai pata ki tum iss list me kitne number me aaoge…(they both laughed for it)

While laughing her coughing got lil more but it was not that serious……seeing this Rey got worried and firstly gave her water to drink…..while giving it he thought that it wont be enough so he took out the pump but it was not necessary coz it was controlled after drinking water(waise guyzz Rey bhi extra pump rakhne laga hai jab se use pata chala that Taani have asthama……don't think ki itni jaldi use apne pyaar ka realization huva hai balki ye toh Swayam ke kehne pe rakh raha hai)….seeing her fine he took a breath of relief…..seeing him like this Taani smiled that like her brother he is also worried about her……

Taani : waise aap bhi mere bhai jaise hi ho……

Rey(confused) : aise kyun kaha tumne????

Taani : arey aap bhi mere bhai ki tarah worried ho jate ho jab meri coughing badh jaye toh……bhale hi ham kal hi mile the….

Rey : ha toh worried hona hi padega na ab toh hum friends hai aur friends toh ek dusre ki choti si problem pe bhi react hote hai aur tumhara toh bada problem hai……

Taani(shocked) : FRIENDS???

Rey(looking at her) : Haan kyun nahi hai hum friends????

Taani : nai aisi baat nai hai…….but aisa hai ki kabhi kisi ladke ko aapna friend nai banaya……aur main baat aisa lagta hai like saare boys mere bhai ke jaise hi hote honge….

Rey :matlab????

Taani : I told u about my brother Abhimanyu right(Rey noded his head in yes)….so vo jis tarah se mere se behave karta hai use dekh ke aisa hi lagta hai sab boys shayad aise hi ho……sorry agar bura laga ho toh but its my point of view…

Rey : hey mujhe bura nai laga cozz sabki apni point of view hoti hai………but trust me main vaisa nai hun…..aur vaise bhi tumne toh apne bare me mujhe pura bataya to than a toh phir kyun daarna(said in a lil mocking tone)

Taani : Ya uss samay mujhe laga like I should trust u…firstly so u r bhai's best friend and secondly mere inner soul ne mujhe ye kaha that I should trust u……Hey one thing plzzz mere bare me maine aur bhai ne tumhe job hi bataya plzz kabhi uska faida maat uthana vaise I trust u that u wont but stil jab kisiko bataya hai toh apni safty toh dekhni hogi right….

Rey : Ya right…….Hey kya hum abhi bhi friends nahi hai????

Taani(smiling): hum ab friends hai….so chalo officially friends ban jate hai..

Rey : means???

Taani : means (streching her hand for shake hand) FRIENDS???

Rey (smilingly shook his hand with hers) : Ya FRIENDS….

They sat there for few minutes talking and laughing…..they were talking like they were best friends or maybe they became best friends….meanwhile Taani remembered something and said…

Taani : Hey yesterday gang said that u are an impromptu dancer……so I think I should have rights to see ur dance as now we are friends

Rey : Ya sure….

Taani : wait lets dance together means like couple dance so that it would be done by both of us so I'll know that u r really an impromptu dancer….

Rey : Ya for sure I'm ready for it but I think u wont be able to..

Taani : excuse me I'm also an impromptu dancer…..mere school me jab face off hoti thi toh hamesha main aur Sharon hi jeet te the….

Rey : Oh really…..(smirking)Ok then lets see

Taani : Ya lets see…

Now both were in a total mood of competition….they started music and took their positions now and as the song started they too started their dance….

(Here is the song on which they both danced and sorry guyzz I don't know how to describe dance steps so I just kept the lyrics….)

Ladkon ki ungli pe naache hai zamana
Oh Ladkon ki ungli pe naache hai zamana
Simple yeh funda hai ladkiyon ko batana
Lute nahi lut jaaye, Jeete nahi pat jaaye
Kudiyaan hai jebon mein rakh le
Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le
Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le
Thag le thag le thug le
Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le
Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le
Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le
Thug le, thag le, thug le

Ladkon ko lagta hai easy jeet jaana
Hey
Ladkon ko lagta hai easy jeet jaana
Iss baar unko hara ke hai dikhana
Badi badi haanke hai
Yunhi hawa phaanke hai
Jebe bhari khali hai aqle
Mundeya nu thug le, thug le
Mundeya nu thug le, thug le
Thag le thag le thug le
Mundeya nu thug le, thug le
Mundeya nu thug le, thug le
Mundeya nu thug le, thug le
Thug le, thag le, thug le

Thug le ...
Na na na...

Jitni ghaas daalo, taarife nikaalo
Utne hai inke bhaav badhte hain

Mauka taadte hain chauka maarte hain
Haath pajda do sar pe chdhte hain

Tode inke chaale shey maat de daale
Yeh maza maza le ke chak le
Mundeya nu thug le, thug le
Mundeya nu thug le, thug le
Mundeya nu thug le, thug le
Thag le thag le thug le

Ho Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le
Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le
Kudiyaan nu thug le, thug le
Thug le, thag le, thug le

Kudiyaa nu thug le (Hey...)
Mundeya nu thug le (Hey... )
Ho Kudiyaan nu thug le (Hey...)
Mundeya nu Mundeya nu thug le (Hey...)
Kudiyaa nu
Mundeya nu
Kudiyaa nu
Mundeya nu
Thug le..

They completed their dance by Rey handling Taani in his arms and were lost in each others eyes…..They danced unknown that they were seen by someone standing at the entrance…..

So Part 10 over…..

Do like and comment plzzz…..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
hey luvd the update... it was really nyc
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Taarey are officially friends now, so sweet of Rey to carry a extra pump with him. Awesome song
Wonderful update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Hey dear
This ff is mindblowing
Really I luved it
I want PMs of this story
Plz PM me if possible
Waiting for ur update n PM too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
nice update.
loved rey's concern for taani.
do cotn. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
pls pm me for ur all updates i like ur both stories so pls send a buddy request and i will accept so that u can pm me all ur updates . pls pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Awesome update!!! I loved the pure taarey update, yayy they r friends!!!

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