SS (ArHi): 'Myths' ON HOLD!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Honestly there is too much of Meera / Arnav interaction for my liking 😛 . If it was any other person writing this, I'd have dropped this story after the first paragraph itself but I am going to continue to follow it because you write so well. 👍🏼

I like how both Khushi and Shay , towards the latter half of the story, showed that they aren't dull/demure dooormat type people who are easily pushed around. Khushi is just a calm and generally nice person by nature and Shay ... just couldn't care any less 😆. I like how Shay is a chivalrous gentleman, dropping both the girls home. And the driver-front-seat passenger dilemma 😆. Will be loooking forward to Meera pushing his buttons in the future and bringing him out of his indifferent turtle-shell.

Great writing, will wait for the plot to unravel ! =)

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catrina100

@catrina100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

It was really good, but I didn't get the setting, could you explain that in the future chapters

Congratz! And please keep notifying 😛😛😛

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s s nair

@..SSNAIR..

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Interesting! ;)
but I really wish there's lot of ArShi in there :D

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aashna

@ablazedmelody

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

I liked it I have to say your writing is very impressive ! I liked this piece a lot. The characters' introduction went well. Waiting eagerly for the next chapters. 😎

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

very interesting

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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bunnylovessunny

@bunnylovessunny

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

when is the next update?? I'm waiting!! :D :D :D

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khoslakadhokla

@khoslakadhokla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: bunnylovessunny
thanks a ton for the pm!!! :D :D :D
I just loved this chapter, you've brilliantly explained their characters as they worked through the project and Meera actually reminds me of myself :P Khushi on the other hand is quite the quite on here eh? Ironic! haha! :D

Shyam is useless and is a gadget freak, I LOVE IT! Arnav oh my my, he's kinda the same. Doesn't like to be lead, is always brooding and is always sexy! I get it :D

I like where this is going! :D Please update faster, you have a knack with words and I'm super excited to read further :D

ps: Is it alright if i asked for just a little more of Khushi and Arnav? I know how they just met and are getting used to eachother, but hey, this is an Arhi FF afterall! :D

Aww! Thank you so much for such a lovely comment! 😳

Yes, I see shades of myself in Meera too, especially her work habits 😆

Khushi is the quiet one, however, she does speak up for herself when its crucial :) or, if she is feels very annoyed :P You'll get to know more about her side of the story soon enough :D

Right now, both Shyam and Khushi are on the same page in terms of their actions, both keep a low front.

Whereas, I see more similarities in Arnav and Meera, especially their quick tempers. I'm also in the process of developing the characters so I guess I'll see new traits to them to as they come. 😛

Yes, next chapter will be satisfying in terms of attention to the pairings...that's all I'll say for now :D

And, I'll be updating soon...by today or tomorrow.

Edited by khoslakadhokla - 12 years ago