SS (ArHi): 'Myths' ON HOLD!

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khoslakadhokla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: moelove

I've been asked to give this one a shot by bunnylovessunny because we're both suckers for horror/thriller stuff and I must say you have me intrigued!

This is one hell of a story and I'm gonna stick to it :D Bring it on and you write really well :)

I'm very pleased to find that you liked it so far...thank you! Hope that you like the other chapters even more.

And a big shout out to bunnylovessunny! Thank you so much for sharing the link of the story!🤗The addition of a reader is always a delight for the author! :)

Edited by khoslakadhokla - 12 years ago

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bunnylovessunny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

oye when is the next update?? :(

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Sasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Hey its a very intresting concept, is the story about wrrewolves or shapelifters or my favourite Vampires!!

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khoslakadhokla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: TanHa911
Honestly there is too much of Meera / Arnav interaction for my liking 😛 . If it was any other person writing this, I'd have dropped this story after the first paragraph itself but I am going to continue to follow it because you write so well. 👍🏼

I like how both Khushi and Shay , towards the latter half of the story, showed that they aren't dull/demure dooormat type people who are easily pushed around. Khushi is just a calm and generally nice person by nature and Shay ... just couldn't care any less 😆. I like how Shay is a chivalrous gentleman, dropping both the girls home. And the driver-front-seat passenger dilemma 😆. Will be loooking forward to Meera pushing his buttons in the future and bringing him out of his indifferent turtle-shell.

Great writing, will wait for the plot to unravel ! =)

Aww, sorry if Arnav-Meera interactions weren't enjoyable They are very similar in their characteristics, so the possibility of clashes increases. They are both like balls of fire, whereas, Shay and Khushi are calm on the outside but quite shaky on the inside. Ok, taping my mouth before I let out more... 😆

@bold: You described it perfectly!

Thank you so much for giving it a read and continuing even though some parts didn't appeal as much 😳

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khoslakadhokla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: bunnylovessunny
oye when is the next update?? :(

Apologies, apologies!

I was lacking inspiration to write so this one is taking some time to write...

I'll PM you as the very first person when I update, Pakka Promise! 😳

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khoslakadhokla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: catrina100
It was really good, but I didn't get the setting, could you explain that in the future chapters
Congratz! And please keep notifying 😛😛😛

Thank you for liking it, Catrina! 😳

And yes, your confusion is a good reminder that I should post a synopsis-like thing in the beginning to make the concept more understandable. 😃

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khoslakadhokla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: fire_whisky
Interesting! ;)
but I really wish there's lot of ArShi in there :D

Thanks!

Yes, lots of ArShi and Shyam-Meera moments coming up in the following chaps!

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khoslakadhokla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ablazedmelody
I liked it I have to say your writing is very impressive ! I liked this piece a lot. The characters' introduction went well. Waiting eagerly for the next chapters. 😎

Yay! Thank you so much!

Hopefully I'm able to make things more thrilling in the next chap! 😃