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Posted: 12 years ago
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Friends here is the story prolouge..i hope you all liked it...



Story Prolouge :


Train ki ek compartment main ek ladki soyi huyi hain..aur ek ladki apne book main khoyii huyiii..aur ek ladki apne bak bak khatam hi nehi kar rahi hain..aur uski bak bak se pereshan hain book wali.. paar jo ladki soyi huye hain use toh koyi khabar hi nehi'Abb Book wali ladki bak bak wali se pereshan hoke bolta hain chutki tu apna baak bak band kar na mujey apni book parne de naa'

Chutki[bakbakwali]: Kiya di itne saal parhai karne ke baad abb puri din ladke ladkiyo parhate rehte hoo phirbhi itna parne ka maan kyun hota hain tumhara..just boring..itna koyi kaise par sakte hain'thora baat karo na..main bore hoo raha hooo'chotdi bhi na itni garmi main train main so gayiii..abb main kiya karoon...

Book wali: tu bore ho raha hain ya mujhey bore kar raha hain???

Bak bak wali: main aapko bore kar raha hoo??!!! Kaise??

Book wali : bak bak karke'.

Baak bak wali: shockingly haan!!!

Book wali: Confidently haan..

Bakbak wali[chillake]: di eye bilkul thik nehi hain'

Abb sone wali bakbakwali ki chillane se uth jate hain..aur bolta hain kiya huya ehape..koun mar gaya!!!?? Itna chilla kyun raha hain tu chutki???tujhey pata hain na kal raat meri night duty thi..

Bakbak wali: aab aap bhi shuru kardiya mere saath..ap so rahe hoo..aur eye apna book par raha hain..aur main bore hoo raha hoo..

Book wali: Dekh Riya isse jhelna mushkil ho raha hain..ek toh main bohot tensed hoo..aur eye hain ki'

Bakbakwali: Aiesha di aap temsion main ho isliye baat nehi kar sakti'paar book parsakti hooo..

Aiesha: dekha Riya eye kuch samajhti hii nehi'

Bakbakwali: dekha chotdi.. Bardi app tensed kyun ho rahi hoo hum dono hain na ap ke saath..ghabrao maat'

Aiesha: tu chup kar'mujhey book parne de'

Bakbakwali: nehi tum book nehi paroge..mujhse baate karogii..main bore hoo raha hoon yrrr..

Aiesha[To sonewali]: dekha Riya eye'

Riya: baas karo tum dono..kuch bhi karo paar jhagra maat kaaro...Aur Sakshi tu apna mu nehi band kar sakta??Abhi mujhey sone de..bad main bohot sare baate karenge'

Sakshi: chotdi..aap mujhse baate karo na'

Riya: aab main nind se uth ke tujhse baate karoo!!!

Aiesha: dekha tune iska pagalpan??!!!

Sakshi: toh main kiya karoon..main aise chup nehi baith sakti'

Riya: di aap isse baate karoo naa..Mujhey sone do'

Aiesha: main iski baton ki speed nehi pakar sakti..wo sirf tuhi pakar sakti hain''.

Sakshi: ChotDi app Gao jakar so lena'Abhi mujhse baate karoon'

Riya: di app ek kaam kariye iske saath kuch khel lije..iske saath bate karneki jarurat nehi..aur khelne se aapdono bore nehi honge..Kyun Sakshi??

Sakshi: haan..

Aiesha: paar iss train main hum khele kiya??

Riya: ludo!! Wo aapke paas jo shoping bag hain usme hain..aap log kheliye'

Sakshi: par chotdi'.

Riya: dekh aab koyii paar waaar nehi..abhi agar nehi soyii na toh gao jakar aakhe nehi khol payungii'aur pher mom ko bhi nehi samhal payungi..ek toh eye nehi pata eyelog achanak gao kyun chale aye..aur aye toh aye humain bhi bulaliya'Main bol rahi hoo di kuch na kuch toh garbar jaur hain'

Aiesha: Mujhey bhi ehii lagta hain...isiliye toh tensed hoo'

Sakshi: ismain itna chinta karne wali koun si baat hain..ya toh mamma ko apko koyi ladka dekhale wale hain ya pher kisi ladke ko apko'.

Aiesha: tu apna mu band rakh..

Sakshi: kyun!!! Aap tention maat lije hum dono apki behen hain na aapke saath'

Riya: tum log chup karo na..mujhey sone doo...warna di main...

Aiesha: thik hain tu so jaa..abhi koyi baat nehi hogi..

Sakshi: have a sweet sleep Chotdi...

Riya[with a sad face]: itni garm main sweet sleep!!! paar thik hain koshish karti hoon...


To Be Continued...


Waiting for you most adorable comments..i will update it's chapter soon dear😳😳

Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
brilliant prologue :) loved it
the banner for this FF is superb
love sister's bonding with each other
sakshi kitna bolti hai 😆
sakshi wasn't letting poor riya sleep and aisha to read the book
sisters are just too adorable
so they are going to gao
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: fatima15

brilliant prologue :) loved it

the banner for this FF is superb
love sister's bonding with each other
sakshi kitna bolti hai 😆
sakshi wasn't letting poor riya sleep and aisha to read the book
sisters are just too adorable
so they are going to gao
can't wait to read more
continue soon


Thanks for liking banner and Story prologue...i was really sceared ki kisiko pasad ayega bhi ya nehi..thanks to you my dear friends for a lovely comment...and i will continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Ohh thank you so much for liking it..i will continue it soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
nice update.

bondng btwn th sistrs is awesome.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
nice prologue
aww poor riya she couldn't sleep😆
omg this shakshi😲 poor ayesha🤣
waiting for rawtes entry
abt arjun, my vote is for ariya
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved sister's bonding nice concept, loved it,
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
baap re...

"nahi baat karenge" bol k bhi Aisha aur Riya kitna bolti hain!!! Loved the sister Trio!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: akanksha1371986

nice update.


bondng btwn th sistrs is awesome.

continue soon.

ohh thank you..ya will continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: madmadona

nice prologue
aww poor riya she couldn't sleep😆
omg this shakshi😲 poor ayesha🤣
waiting for rawtes entry
abt arjun, my vote is for ariya
cont soon

ohh thank you so much..Rawte's ki entry bhi bohot jaldi hi hone wale hain...😳

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