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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5

Kya golmal hai dr

I love Ariya nok-jhok
Awesome update
Thanx 4 pm me
Update soon

Saab golmal hain😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jorja

Amez part loveit please update soon

will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

awesome update

riiya ko lady dabaang bana diya...
bechara arjun dar gaya...
der first meet ws awesome...
update soon

thanks for liking it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arjunkibehen

Haye... SO cute Ariya!!!


Riya na aakhir chup karva hi diya!!! of course... Girl power!!!

Go riya!!!

Superb Update!!

will update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: srividhya68

Love arjun riya nok jhok.

😳...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks dear..will continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
when you will get time read it...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prava55663

umm i just loved the entire ped wali scene...I was rofling at sakshi...
she was so cute...Riya was still stuck on the tree..

Sakshi continusly thinking she was dead...koi usse narak mein le jaa raha hai...

Sameer and Aisha eye lock and fight was awesome!

bapre Riya is so khatarnak...
Ranjana is so sweet...

Sakshi ne Riya ko phasa diya...
but Ria cleaverly managed everything...

infact she asked do days of freedom...loved that kasam wali part..
Roshni and kajol were just amazing...

Arjun ke liye Riya is always perfect!!

Arjun and Riya's first meet...i loved the way you wrote how all of them wanted to see her
loved the bonding of three sisters...they were so worried for riya...

cont soon!!


Originally posted by: prava55663

res for part 5


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it was so funny update...finally she knows all those are guests in their house..
Riya and Arjun kitna jagra karte hai yaar...

Arjun was hurt too, and loved the first aid wala scene...
mitali stopping Ranjana..😆😆

Arjun and Ria's tu tu mein mein...is going superb...

Thanks dear for liking it...will continue soon..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Friends i am back with update..and sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry for being so late...

Paar kiya kare exam main phaas gayii thi...hope you all liked this update...😳

Chapter 5b


Riya gusse se uhase jane ke baad Arjun bhi gusse se uha se chale jane lagte hain'Paar Mitali Arjun ko pichese bulane laagtiii hain paar Arjun koyiii jawab nehi deta'

Mitali: Arjun..Arjun tum thik hooo'

Arjun mudke ek baar uske maa ko dekhta hain paar pher gusse se chale jate hain'

Pichese Sameer jake uske maa ki kandho pe apna haath rakhke kehta hain'don't worry wo thik hain'

Abb pichese Anirudh ake kehta hain haa ma Sam vai thik keh raha hain..wo thik hain..thora gussa hain paar thik hoo jayega'humlog jate hain uske piche'

Mitalii in a sad voice: thik hain'

Mitali ki kehne paar Sameer Yash Aur Anirudh Arjun ki piche jate hain'Aur unke jate hii Mitali sad mood se bahar aa jate hain'

Mitali: ohh..

Ranjana: kiya huya..sorry bhabi ji wo'

Mitali: Kiya bhabi kitni baar sorry bolengii aap..waise bhi kyun sorry bol rahi hain'apko pata hain mere Arjun kisika koyii baat nehi sunta'Use kuchh sunane ke liye mujhey koyii chahiye'..aaj usne pehli baar kisika suna..aur jab Riya ne use dhamkaya tab toh ekdaam chup hii hogayaa'waise bhabi appki beti main toh bohot dam hain'.

Pratima: haan didi eye apne bilkul thik kahi'ladkiyon main to daam hain'

Kajol: To abb ehase humain kitni devrani milne walii hain??

Roshni: Bhabi eye koyii puchne walii baat huyii'mujhey toh ek mil hii jayengii'

Kajol : baas ek'mujhey toh laga teen hain'

Roshni: Are bhabi wo apki teen devrani hogii na..mera toh ek hii hoga..baki dono bhabi hogi'arjun wali devrani..baki dono toh bhabi hi banegi'

Lina: Roshni bhabi main kiya kehti hoo Abb bari bhabi ki tarha appkii itni sari devrani toh ho nehi sakti'to kyun na app kuch devar adopt karle'.

Roshni lina ki kaan pakarte huye: assa'

Kajol: waise idea bura nehi hain Roshni'.

Roshni: Bhabi app bhi!!!!!

Baaki saab Kajol aur Roshni ki baate sun has deta hain'

Abb Pratima: Jitni bhi mile wo mil gaye eye soch ke baith jayoge toh kuch nehi hoga'hamin apne kaam asse se karna padega..tabhi baat banegi'.Abb hamara asli mission shuru hota hain'You all are ready na!!!

Saab ek saath we all are ready'.

Ranjana: mujhey kuch samajh nehi aa rahi'

Mr Rawte: apko chinta karne jaisa kuch bhi nehi hain bhabi...

Mr Mukharjee: paar eye saab kiya hain..main bhi'

Mr Sen: saabkuch samajhne ki kiya jarurat'

Mukharjee: jarurat nehi!!..mujhey bata eha kiya ho raha hain'.

Mitali: vai sahab eha hum aapki ek beti ki haat mangne aye the'paar aab hum ek ki jagah teeeno ki haat mangna chahte hain'

Aur Mitali se eye sun Rajana chillake: kiya?!!!

Saab Ranjana ki chillate huye dekh uski taraf dekhte hain'

Pratima: Kyun apko koyii prolem hain..agar hain toh app bol sakte hain'

Daya: haan Anty agar apko hamare vai pasand nehi toh aap bolsakte hain..jo bhi hain app boliye'apki izajat ke bina eye nehi hoga'kiya problem hain!!!

Mitali: haa bhabi ji!!!

Ranjana: Mujhey kiya prolem hogii..problem toh aaplogoko hogi'meri betiya tornedo hain tornedo'jaha bhi jate hain'musibaatoo ko khud bulavya de rahi hain app..ek toh samhal jaati..paar teeno!!!!!!!!!

Rawte: baas baas bhabi aur burayii nehi hamare hone wale bahu ke naam'

Mukharjee: haa wo toh samjha..paar ek baat batao..hamne abhi taak Aiesha se hii baat nehi ki Sameer ko leke..himmatii nehi ho raha'pher eye Riya aur Sakshi'Aur aapko nehi pata mere betiyon ko agar eye pata chal jayega toh teen to kiya ek bhi shadi nehi hogii'

Mitali: toh pher hum use batayenge kyun!!

Ranjana: matlab??nehi batayenge toh kaise hogi'Shadi main kitni sare raasmain..pher..

Pratima: bhabi..app aise kyun bol rahe hain'hum sidhe shadi taak thori jayenge'Shadi se pehle toh kuch aur hoga!!

Mukharjee: Shadi se pehle kiya hoga..jo bhi hoga shadi ke baad hii hoga'

Ranjana to mukharjee: Unki matlab Pyar se tha..

Kajol: haan wo log khud ake hamse shadi ki baat karengi''.

Ranjana: wo kaise hoga beta???

Nilima: Kajol aisa kabhi nehi hoga'mere jo nanad hain na kuch bhi karega paar pyar main phasega nehi'

Ranjana: haan..

Roshni: wo nehi pasega toh kiya huya hum uneh phasaenge'

Nilima: paar wo kaise'

Roshni: hamare paas kuch plans ahin aur kuch karna padega'pehle app hamin innteeno ke bare main details main bataiye..inke sawvaab..ineh kiya pasand..kiya nehi'aur ham aplogoko inn teeno ke bare main bolte hain..pher plans fixed karte hain'

Nilima: haan!!

Kajol: haa..

Roshni: eye thik hain..pehle thikse plan karte hain'paar ek baat plans karne ke baat eye plan hum saabko milke kameyaab karna padega'

Kajol: saab saath denge..Aur shree tere mu se kuch bhi bahar nehi ani chahiye'

Shree: bhabi app baar baar eye saab mujhey kyun kehte hain..abhi taak kuch bola maine uneh!!

Lisa: bola nehi paar bolne ke liye pet main dard ho raha hoga..

Shree: tu bohot jaante hain mere pet ke bare main!!!

Lisa: tere raag raag ko jaanti hoon'

Shree: Assa!!aur main tujhey bohot assise janti hoo eye saab bakwass tune hii bhabi ki kaan main bhari hain..hain naa'

Lisa: kyun?? Mera koyii aur kaam nehi'

Shree: tujhey dekhke toh nehi lagta hain'.

Lisa : Specky

Shree: firse tune Specky pe gayii..abb toh main tujhe'.

Lisa: kiya karegiii..!!!

Pher Shree kuch keh paye use pehle Roshni: Kiya shuru kiya tumlogone'hum eha kuch soch rahi hoon..tum dono kuch madad toh kar nehi rahe..uparse jhagra karke humain kuch soch nebhi nehi de rahi'

Shree: Di..eye hain hii aisii'

Lisa: Main'

Kajol Lisa ko bich main rokhke kehta hain..kiya hain lisa..laro maat'.Shree chup..ek aur baar main tum dono ko jhagarte dekhi toh sidha ehase Mumbai bhej dungii..eha tumlogoko rehneki jaruraat nehi'

Shree: bhabi..app bhi'

Roshni: Bhabi sirf tumeh nehi bhejegii..lisa ko bhi..abb tum dono chup'

Kajol: koyiii jhagra nehi'hamin iss mission main tum dono ka saaath chahiye naa yrr..help us naa'

Lisa: okey bhabi..aur nehi larungi isse'

Shree: main toh isse baat bhi nehi karungiii'

Daya mohol shant karne ke liye: Paaar humain karna kiya hoga'Acting toh nehi karna padega na!!!???

Kajol: karna padega na'Aur Daya app over acting maat kijega'main jaanti hoo appse acting nehi hota..kisise bhi nehi hota..paar humsaab karenge na'dekhiye kuch garbar maat kijega'

Daya: paar main Acting!!!

Chand: Aur mujhse bhi nehi hoga..maine kabhi aisa kuch kiya nehi..aur main un teenose kuch chupa nehi paati'..

Nilima: Agar app chahte hain ki apki behno ki saadi ho toh appko eye karna padega'

Chand: pehle dadi se baat karte hain..unke paas koyii assa idea ho to'

Kajol: hum saab ek saath milke hii toh plan banaenge aur dadi bhi rahenge uha'paar jo bhi plan ho Acting toh karna hi padega'

Kajol se ye baat sun..Mukharjee: rawte mujhse eye saab nehi hoga..

Ranjana: haan eye acting abb appse kaise hoga..jaab mujhse chupane ke liye acting hoti hain apne betiyon ke saath taab thikse hota hain'

Mukharjee: maine kiya chupaya tumse??wo bhi apne betiyoon ke saath milke!!!!

Rawte: Mukharjee dekh eye toh karna hi padega'larke kiya fyda'.

Sen: haan Larke kiya fyda'

Mitali: pher planning shuru karte hain'

Sen: bhabi paar use pehle Agar kuch chaye hoo jatiii'

Ranjana: wo sorry bate karte karte mere dinmag se nikal gaya'

Rawte: bhabi no more formality'we are one family'

Ranjana give him a smile and Said: okey..

Mukharjee: toh ek kaam karte hain hum garden main baith jate hain'App chaye nashta leke aiye..

Ranjana: thik hain..Nilima chalo'

Kajol: Anty main chalti hoo Nilima ke saath..app ehi rukiye'

Ranjana: nehi beta aap kyun..main aur Nilima'.

Roshni: beta bhi keh rahi aur'app baithiye..main bhi chalti hoon'

Ranjana: paar beta'

Mitali: jane dije na bhabi..app baithiye'

Pratima: hum jaabse aye hain..app idharse udhar vaag hii rahi hain'

Ranjana: Nilima jate waqt dadi ko dekhlena..wo thik hainna'aur ate waqt uneh saath lekar ana'

Nilima: jii maa''

To be continued''..

Precap:

Yash : bhuk lagi hain?

Sakshi: nehi bhukh kyun lage gi hum insaan thori na hain...😡

Yash : tum insaan nehi ho!!! toh phir kiya hoo!!!? aise baichain kyun ho rahi ho?

Sashi: Insan nehi drakula hoo..khun chahiye mujhey...tumhara khun piyungii na toh shant ho jaunga...😡


So today's update is complete..i hope you all liked this...Waiting for your comments dear..😳
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