Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II THREAD 3

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stories.1408

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

she talks so much...poor arnav.now d cupid is ready to strike

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

LOVED the update! :) I just love Khushi's characterization :) She is just awesome!! I am looking forward to their new found "friendship" :D Lets see how this goes :)

Do update soon :)

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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

I just loved this update!!

The fact that Arnav realized that he will cherish that hour for his whole life says a lot! Also it's great that Khushi is the one who initiated the birthday surprise, even though they are in the midst of a "cold war." I'm glad they were able to mend fences as well and have become friends. It will be interesting to see how their relationship progresses from this stage!

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

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Posted: 12 years ago

#764

YOYO...DOSthi!!!!

PEHLA GREEN SIGNAL...

AB JALDI LADOO AUR SADOO KA FRNDSHIP BAD JAAYE...I LOVED THE ALMOST BDAY PARTY...TOOK ME TO THE MEMORIES OF MY LAST ONE...

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Such a light & heart warming update.

Khushi & Karan are a riot!! Just loved the two of them together.

The one thing I love about your stories is you lead us to believe one thing & then something else happens.

Just as we see Khushi preparing for the midnight surprise, Arnav shows up and she has to wish him a few minutes early!! Which I loved.

My favorite part of the update was Arnav's thoughts when he was in bed. This birthday meant so much to him! It was so heartwarming.

Wonderful job!

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Bavari

@Bavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Awesome. Thanks for the PM.

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shivani_bv

@shivani_bv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Was missing the updates for MKM 😊 . And this was again a great one. I loved khushi's surprise. Nothing over the top. A simple family 12 pm cake cutting. I feel a little bad for Arnav as all he has missed such simple pleasures of enjoying his birthday when growing up. I am sure from now on, none of the birthdays or festivities are going to be missed by him, now that he has agreed to be friends with khushi, she is going to ensure that the new member in her life is not spared 😊 . I am really looking forward to their story with the cold war being called off now .
Arnav's noticing of her beautiful smile has started now and this reminds of ur prologue of his camera captures 😊 .
Hope u update sooner.

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#768

aww so cute, loved the surprise and the bickering, 30 years old really, she arranged the B'day surprise for him, and everyone present to wish him, and she was the first to wish him in advance, he is thoroughly surprised that they remember and wanted to celebrate it, the warmth makes a place in his heart, so nice, all long such a nice update. And to top it all you end it with Khushi's smiling face in his thoughts, thx