Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II THREAD 3

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smra134

@smra134

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Posted: 12 years ago

#781

wow that's cute how she celebrated his birthday and he do like it hmm interesting

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#782

*gleefully claps hands*

That's right Arnavji. Khushi has a BEAUTIFUL smile and an even lovelier heart. Just you wait. You've already taken the first step today.

Hahahahahaha! Khushi's ramblings are so much fun to read.

Brother? o.O NO WAY K! You'll be glad that you discounted him as a brother in the not-so-distant-future, believe you me!

I always get a subtle sense of how lonely and painful Arnav's adolescence and childhood must have been from the little hints that you drop here and there. Very well done! Despite being 30, he is the same love-starved little boy he was all those years ago. And Khushi despite her childishness recognizes that to some extent.

Chalo, Mission Initiated. =D

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#783

mindblowing update dear
finally their fight sort out
thanx 4 pm
continue very soon

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mehak

@mehak06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#784

Omg...you nailed it yar..!
Dat was amazing..i loved d bond khushi n karan chachu share...they r realy cute more like frnds...n aww arnav genuinly accepted khushi's offer for friendship...

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#785

It was a great update...Arnav really had a very complex childhood...he needs a Khushi in his like, she is so nice and simple and full of life, I really like your positivity you bring out in your story...

To be forgiving is a very big quality and I want Arnav to realize what he is missing in his life...

Thx and so looking forward to next update...

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mem1

@mem1

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#786

AAAWWW! What a beautiful chapter. I loved it.It was so cute. I really liked how Arnav thinks of Khushi as a kid. And Khushi actually considered treating him like a brother before the whole marriage fiasco happened. That is a very natural assumption, actually.

My favorite of course was "Sadu 'My Dad' Singh Raizada". 😆 his name just keeps getting better everyday

Really loved how she was teasing him about the lack of a nickname. Her Chachu coming just for Arnav's birthday proves what a close knit family they are and how much Khushi and her Chacha are a part of the family. I really liked the fact that he will probably be good friends with Arnav soon. Arnav really needs friends.

The birthday party was so heartwarming. Everyone working together to give him a really cute birthday surprise. not a fancy party, but a really "from the heart" birthday celebration.

KHushi trying to make up with Arnav was super cute.

His thoughts as he went to sleep show how happy he was with the whole celebration. Not to mention 'Khushi's beautiful face' ...😉. Finally he is seeing some light!

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sravya

@mssravya

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#787

it was a really nice update, i loved the scene between khushi and her chachu, and i love the talk between arnav and khushi...can't wait till they become really good friends😊

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pree2605

@pree2605

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Posted: 12 years ago

#788

amazing...
finally arnav and khushi r movin towards friendship...
thnxx fr pm..
waitng fr ur next update

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ArSh23

@ArSh23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#789

aww awesome update! I loved it! I love how Khushi and Arnav's relationship is slowly progressing. I'm glad they are finally going to try to become friends. I'm sure Arnav will start learning a lot about Khushi, which will just make him fall for her in the future. I can't wait! That was really sweet of Khushi to organize a midnight surprise for Arnav and it looks like it meant a lot to him too. Can't wait to read the next update!

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#790

😃😃😃 tht hw i luked whn i saw the update :) :)

too gd again :)

the conversation between arnav n khushi... ,n khushi n karan were tooo gd... at times i wonder.. hw can u think n write such beautiful conversations... such simple words.. usual day to day realistic dialogues...

they by all means always mk me smile... unless they r meant to mk me feel otherwise :)

the human offering for arnav's bday line was too gd :)

n arnav's realisation of wht he signed up fr... was also very cute

i m sure it wud b more fun nw tht he has started being frnds with khushi, n has also realised tht she has a beautiful smile :)

hw i wud love to see all .. sumer, buaji n karan too, helping arnav in wooing khushi :) :)

waiting fr the next one...