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Posted: 12 years ago



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Edited by Anony_mous - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first!!!!!
and still celebrating...
coming to the update...brilliant!!!
I loved the relationship between Khushi and her uncle and how comfortable she is in telling him off.
Loved that she thought of planning a surprise for a guy who does not give two hoots about her. Actually I really admire people like that...having the ability to move forwards despite what may have gone on.
loved arnav's entry as well and as I was reading..i thought oh bummer..he is going to ruin it and of course thats what happened...but at least he thought about it later.
I am loving this FF!!!!
Edited by shreyasonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww, you nailed it again. What a lovely, lovely birthday surprise that was almost not a surprise for Sadu Singh Raizada. 😉 Khushi & her chachu bickering over the candles was absolutely adorable. Am so glad that Arnav got to see how much pains they were taking to make his surprise a memorable one. Loved the way they sang the birthday song bellowing at the top of their lungs... I had a huge grin pasted to my face just imagining the whole scene. Khushi's enthusiasm is so infectious that one cannot help but not get sucked into its cheerfulness. 😃

I loved the little monologue in the beginning that Khushi was having with her herself about her being God's chosen child... She is such a warm, charming, down-to-earth & thankful person, one cannot help but like her immensely. No, she is not vain, not one tiny bit even with all the good things in her life, not sure if she would have been, had she not been afflicted with a physical challenge...

Arnav's resolve to bury the hatchet & move on with the "kid" got trumped by the not-so-kid herself 😃 I loved the way she beat him to it... At least, this way Arnav won't have any doubts regarding her intentions. Arnav's reaction to the beautiful surprise birthday celebration showed how troubled his whole life has been so far. I just hope this 30th year & onwards life showers on him all the good things that there are in this world. He has suffered immensely so far, it's high time he sees that life can be very pleasurable also, especially, with the right partner in one's life. Hope he starts realizing soon, who it is that can bring him that happiness in abundance in his life... 😉

Lovely, lovely update. Hope we can expect quicker updates from now on, as you've wrapped up your other wonderful story now. 😃
Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update!
loved the fail midnight surprise b'day 😆 it was hilarious.
i am quite liking Karan's character. he seems funny & joyful like almost the male version of khushi's character but without the childishness 😊
Now am glad that these two are going to be 'Friends' and will be talking👍🏼

Edited by GoldenEyes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT LOVED HOW KARAN AND KHUSHI WAS BICKERING OVER THE CAKE AND THE CANDLES SO CUTE LOVED THE BAND AND FINALLY ASR DECIDE TO GIVE UP THE COLD WAR AND GROW UPDATE AND HE FINALLY REALIZED SHE HAS A NICE SMILE THANKS FOR THE PM LOVED THE UPDATE
Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved Khushi and Karan bickering - aww so cute niece and chachu
Arnav had to ruin his surprise😆but he still got a surprise by Khushi that she arranged everything and that she genuinely wants to become friends and isn't doing it for the sake of his dad

Edited by ayshaomar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww that's so sweet of khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww so sweet of khushi to extend the olive branch so to speak and organize this "surprise" for Arnav! Nd I like khusis chachu! He seems like such a loving person expecially in his acceptance and immediate importance for Arnav as he is linked to khushi and her bade papa :) lol khushi sure does know how to talk and Arnav will soon get to know exactly how much loll
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome! I loved this chapter!

Karan seems like a character! I love that guy! His bickering with Khushi was hilarious, reminds me of my relationship with my moms brother! He's 36 while I'm 20 but we always joke around! Sometimes it's hard for me to believe that he has two toddlers and is married because he's such a character!

Screw Arnav's mom, seriously poor guy can't even enjoy the good birthdays he and because of his moms intentions. I'm looking forward to the birthday dinner!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant and amazing update, written beautifully. Awww loved the surprise Khushi had planned for Arnav's birthday but Arnav arrived early and spoilt there plan. Loving the relationship between khushi and her chachu it's so sweet, tender and heart warming, loved his thought about how Arnav will cope in the house with motor mouth Khushi. I just loved the following line Arnav thought;

"In the hindsight, that was probably the first time, in the glow of his birthday candles from the cake she was holding, that Arnav had noticed how beautiful Khushi's smile was."

So finally Khushi spoke to Arnav and made the effort to offer Arnav an olive branch and wanted them to become friends, Arnav at first thought she was only doing it too show her bade papa, but was genuinely surprised that she had offered a peace offering hand. So glad Arnav agreed to be friends and bless Khushi she does talk a lot. So Arnav has decided that he will cherish the memories forever which he spent in the one hour celebrating his birthday and also khushi's beautiful smile. Please continue soon, eager to read how the birthday meal goes. I've actually read this before I got your PM, it just shows how much I've been stalking your story for an update, lol.

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