PYGMALION:- Part Six up. pg 31 (On Hold)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

was recommended hy Nids...wow I love it love the sexy Arnav continue soon and please pm me

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dershika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Hey dear loved reading ur ff would u plz add me in ur pm list

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lighttheworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

good language, and interesting story. Liked it very much.

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shijinareneesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Just find out...this is amazing...u r a well talented writer,no doubt about it... So Akash well played...looking forward to read more...

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Moumita Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

loved it..
continue soon
please do pm me when you update

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aleezay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

wooowww im waiting for the next part desp
plz try to update soon plz plz plz
dat was such a good part

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amri123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

hey

i just read this and its very interesting

could you please PM me when you update

thanks😊

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

hi, ive just started reading ur ff, n i super loving the concept and how u r writting every update:)

it was recommended by one of my favorite writter - nidsubh007 on this if and im happy she did so because this is totally worth reading!

very eagerly waiting for the next update:)

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Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Finally got around to reading ur story... A lottt of people recommended it and now I know for good reason...😃

First things first, I have read about Khushi tripping/falling and Arnav catching her when they meet for the first time... but Khushi falling on his lap with her face on his crotch... thts a first😆

Love this version of a confident, spunky, not feeling sorry for herself Khushi... and Arnav, well whats there not to Love... ?!

Aakash is simply brilliant... There is no better way to get Arnav singh Raizada to do something than by challenging him...

How Arnav is going to convince Khushi should be interesting...

Loved it!!!

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shona-li

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Interesting. That last scene reminded me of a scene in the musical My Fair Lady. The story looks exciting. I came here by Nidsubh007's recommendation and glad I did. Looking forward to.your next update to see how the story unfolds!