Kuch Kahi Ankahi : Virika SS (Part 7 Page 30)

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Shicksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awesome one

loll south indian beta

ani is truly a mommy's boy

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sushmakryan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

it is tuesday update soon cant wait

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Surbhi Jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

viren stil caling her danno 😆

amma appa😆

loved d part

it ws awesome

continue soon

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Fari_15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Amazing!!! Loved it!!
It was soo cute! I was actually imagining viren behaving like this!
How i wish,we get to see something similar in the show as well!
Nevertheless,the os was superb!

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Shaza (Atma My LifeHeart)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Superb updates plz continue soon

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ammyaashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

finally jeevika's duggu ...

i wonder when it will be shown in real ...

but this piece is cute ...very cute

the south indian son ..lol😆

and anuu ...🤣...

and mannu's commenting ...too good

and kangaroo ...loved it

awesome writing once again ...👍🏼 there is no 2 way about it 👏

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urmil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

its amazing...loved it especially the dialogues of ani...continue soon ...thnx for pm

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Marzii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

wow this was just brilliant

waiting for the next part :D

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NEHA KASHYAP

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Posted: 12 years ago

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EEE... 66 Likes and beautiful comments :D
you guys are so sweet.. thanku so much.. Thanksss a lot for the appreciation.. Here u go with next part... :)

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Part II

Reminding her honeymoon memories, Jeevika was sitting in one corner looking at everyone, especially Viren who was seated on a huge rock chatting with Virat. Ani was on roll with Manvi, making her sit on his big bubble toy and then pushing her in water, putting sand on her, fighting with her and sometimes hugging her, kissing her, in short he was having fun at his Parents favourite place Goa. Rest of the family was just strolling on the beach..

Manvi saw Jeevika sitting alone in the corner.. She signalled Virat to keep an eye on Ani who was playing beside him and went towards Jeevika. Settling herself beside her she whispered:

"Kuch hua hai??"

Jeevika who was staring sea continously "hmmm..."

"Kya?"

"Zindagi dekhne mein chahe kitni khoobsurat lagti ho, par phir bhi kisi ek kone mein woh khoobsurat dikhne ki koshish kar rahi hoti hai..Pata hai Mannu, kabhi kabhi jo door se dekhne mein acha lagta hai, zaroori nahin hai woh acha hi ho..."

Mannu kept quiet as she knew her sister was upset and finally she was speaking her heart out, so she let her speak without any interruption..

"Ab iss samundar ko hi dekh lo.. kitna pyara dikhta hai, shaant hai bilkul, par iske andar bhi lehron ka toofan chalta hai har waqt... Rishte bhi aise hi ho jaate hain.. dekhne mein chahe kitne hi ache lage, pyare lage, par jo uss rishte mein bandha hota hai sirf wohi jaanta hota hai ki kaise woh uss rishte ko baandhe rakhne ki koshish kar raha hota hai.. Aur kabhi kabhi use yeh bhi pata nahin lagta hai kas ke pakde ya dheela chod de.. kaske pakad kar uske toot jaane ka dar hota hai aur dheela chodne par uske haath se nikal jaane ka... issi kashmkash mein itni dooriyan aa jaati hain ki humein samajh nahin aata ki kahan galti kar di humne.."

Listening her, Manvi somewhere managed to understand that there was something wrong between her di and jiju as she herself watched them no behaving normally.. So Manvi herself put the whole idea of outing in front of her family so that things could get normal between her di and jiju..

She took hold of Jeevika's hand, consoled her and said , '' Galti humse wahan ho jaati hai jab hum apne dil ki baatein dil mein hi rakhe rakhte hain."

Jeevika's chain of thoughts broke when she heard Manvi's voice. She looked at her with teary eyes.

" aur woh galti gunaah ban jaati hai jab hum baatein apno se chupaane lagte hain.. unse share nai karte.. har rishte ki apni demand hoti hai Di.. balance karna padta hai humein rishton mein bhi.. naye rishte bante hain toh purano ko choda nahin jaata, bas zara sa manage karna padta hai jisse na purane wale ko takleef aur naa hi naye wale ko... Par agar na kar paao toh saamne wale ko batao, taaki woh samajh paaye ki aap sachi mein pareshani mein ho, aap neglect nahin kar rahe ho jaan boojh ke, bas apne aap aisa ho raha hai.."

Manvi's words somewhere made Jeevika's heart ache but she knew she was actually right.. But still she was confused regarding somethings happening or we can say NOT happening between her and Viren.. Lying in Manvi's lap she closed her eyes to make her mind and heart stable...

"Achu chuuu" Ani said pulling Virat's leg who was suggesting some interesting places in Goa where they should visit.

"Aachu toh thik hai oye, yeh chuuu kya extra laga diya" Virat asked picking him and making him sit in his lap.

"Achuuu chu" He shouted again placing his both hand on his shorts.

Confused Virat looked at Viren, " Bhai aapko samajh aayi iski chineese?"

Viren looked at him and then at Ani and heard carefully what he was saying and at once took him from Virat and got up saying, ''Abe bathroom aaya hai use..''

"Ohhh toh jaa kahan rahe ho, waise bhi geela hai hi hai, yeh bhi aur paani bhi, ise kaho yahin kar le pe kar le.. koi ni dekh raha" Virat said giggling when he saw Viren going towards the cottages where they were living.

Viren ignored him and took Ani to make him pee.. While returning, Ani asked Viren for Jeevika. Viren looked here and there to check where Jeevika was and then he saw her lying with her head in Manvi's lap.. He thought to go and ask if she was alright.. But he let it be.. This is how their relationship was these days.. Kuch kaha hua bhi itna seriously le lena aur jo na kaha gaya ho use aur bhi seriously leke uska galat matlab nikal lena..

He put Ani on his feet who rushed towards his Mumma and Maasi...

He looked at his Mumma...He was going to sit on her when Manvi stopped him..

"Oye piddi, hat jaa.. tang mat kar apni mumma ko"

"kuuun"?

"Kyun ke bache.. kaha na tang mat kar.. jaa woh dekh chachu baithe hain.. unke paas jaa ke khel aur unhe tang kar"

"Nooo" Ani shaked his head and again tried to sit on Jeevika when Mannu held him from his arm and stopped him.

Now this was the limit for Ani. He put his arms around Manvi's neck and started pulling her from back.

"Ani main maarungi.. chod de.. Mumma ko bhi uyi ho jayegi" Manvi said trying getting out of angry Ani's hold.

Ani at once left Manvi and came in front of her.

"Maashi..amma uyi?" Ani asked in low voice looking at Manvi and then at Jeevika..

Manvi looked at him surprisingly and thought how his naughty nature suddenly changed into caring one when it comes to his Mumma.. She knew Ani called her Maasi when hez scared or not well otherwise he called him Mannu. Manvi took him in side hug and soothed him , ' Nai baby, mumma thak gayi hai, abhi aap tang mat karna, mumma neeni kar le ache se, phir woh uth ke apni Ani ke sath kheli kheli karegi?''

Ani looked up at Manvi, "Ani pup, ani ni boleda"

"Mera acha bacha", Manvi smiled hugging him nd kissed him on his head.

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PRECAP : ''Tumhari problem pata kya Jeevika.. tum wahi sochti ho jo tumhe sochna hota hai aur wahi dekhti ho jo tum dekhna chahti ho.. aur iss problem ko to tum apne upar itnaa haavi kar leti ho ki na khud enjoy kar paati ho aur naa hi tumhare aas paas ke log..'' He said shouting on her

She was in daze when he said all that.. she was not sure if she was scared, uncomfortable or angry..
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Thats it for today..
Next update: Thursday
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Edited by Neha.K. - 12 years ago