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congrats on your new thread...

This was amazing..

congratulations on new thread.

congrats on the new thread n amazzzing update

😭 i miss the precaps too! wonderful writing as usual!

Very unexpected turn of events. I knew there will be a situation where Khushi will be openly insulted by one of those narrow minded people, but the out come of it was quite unexpected and remarkable to say the least. First and foremost Arnav messing Khushi's hands with mehendi out of pure jealousy was so damn cute! And then he coming to the rescue of his lady love when that woman was verbally abusing Khushi showed the possessiveness and the protectiveness he feels towards her. And finally when that good for nothing woman left after insulting both protagonists it's amazing how Khushi was thinking how she is clueless about his past that even though he knows about her past, then and there she came to a conclusion that she will be Arnav's Khushi and make sure that his past agony is been cured, that was really nicely written down! I hope with out further delaying Arnav will confess his love to Khushi so Khushi can openly admit her feelings for him😊

awesome update..really very well written..continue soon..😊

At last,I've found the time to catch up with the last 5 updates that I'd missed! The story gets better and better!
You;re not the only one who's missing the pre-caps, iun fact I was meaning to comment on how terrifc they were, they are the best, the most clever pre-caps I've read in any FF.

They were wonderfully tantalising, giving us a short glimpse of some event in the next update! They came with just the right amount of information to whet our appetites while setting us up to imagine all the sorts of things that could happen next.

Many a time, your precap led me up along one path only for me to find the update was quite different and the precap now had a whole, new different meaning. Everything fit together so well!

That was the amazing thing - how perfect the precaps were for the story- telling. it is only later I realised that they were only a glimpse of an event that would come up in the next update, but were not really to tell us much about the plot itself, That is why I think they were perfect!😊

Though the precaps are not absolutely essential, they add a tremendous pizzaaz and va-va-voom to the story telling!

In short, I loved them and I miss them.

I love how you've kept ASR and Khushi true to their chracters despite their love and lust for each other. What a madcap couple they are, and so, so loveable for all their silly foibles.😃

Beautiful update. Last line was brilliant..Yes it is time to become Arnav's Khushi