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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Beautiful part ..

Loved it ..

Waiting for more ..

Continue soon ..

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smileysmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya
Koi demand hai tho batao complete kar dunga mai but update

koi demand nahi mera...😊

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Ramya sree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

pls update this and kyun hogaya na story too

plsss

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chandrima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: smileysmi

after diwali..pakka...

pakkawala pakka na

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Ramya sree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

diwali bi hagaya ab to update do plsss

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Part 13:

By 4 pm rey completed all the meeting and discussions...then he did some office work till 5pm because he knows that all his friends will be busy till 5pm..he didn't want to disturb them...at 5pm he left the office and directly went to Neil n vicky's dance Institute...he had informed others to gather there itself..vicky was very happy to see his friend after 3 days (lol)..by 5.15 everyone were there...

Vicky (to rey) : so...

Rey: so..? (Knew exactly what will his friends enquire about now)

Bharat : bata na kaisa raha bangalore trip?

Rey :it was good ... bataya tho hai.. (says casually)

Neil: sirf 'good'? Accha chod ye bata bhabi kaisi lagi..? (now they came to the point)

All were waiting for rey's response eagerly...

Rey takes deep breath smilingly.. " bhabhi..? haha...(looks at all eager eyes waiting for his response) acchi lagi (smiles widely)"

Vicky seeing rey's twinkling eyes with happiness " that means..." looks at his friends...

All in unison " wicket giri rey ki"...swayam and rey laughs at their crazy friends.

Vishaka : dude tell us in detail na.. kuch tho kaho...itna bhav kyun kha rahe ho yar...

Amar : haan bata na kya kya hua in detail. ?.

" what do you mean kya kya hua? I went there on new project work tho we did discussion and meeting..that's it...anddd...yeah they gave a party because I went there 1st time so..."

Vicky : "damaad ke aane ke kushi mein party and all haan? "

Neil : sahi hai sahi hai..both vicky n neil gives hifi n laughs...

"Shut up guys ...itz nothing like that...we all had a good family time that's it..." says rey just to stop his friends continue teasing him...

"Abey family time chod, ye bata bhabhi ke sath tera kuch jama ki nahi? I mean baat karne ka mauka mila ki nahi teek se? Kaisi lagi tumhe bhabhi. " asks bharat when rey started giving one line answers...bharat is the most impatient person in their group..

Neil : haan dude...tell us more...

Rey got it now his friends will not wait so he has to tell everything..so he starts "okay okay...will tell you in detail...huh...yeah everything went well...I got very less opportunities to talk to kriya...(neil vicky bharat n amar : arrey yaar (felt bad for their friend )) but...but we spent some time alone as well... (again neil bh vi am : accha ? Bata na bata bata (eagerly))...yeah I am telling...so yes we get to know about each other a lot...not exactly...but still...(takes deep breath) and yeah...she is good... (by now all were eagerly looking at him without blinking their eyes as rey would tell his final decision) (looking at all his friends...whispers) I like her"

For a second or two all looks at each other and then shouts "yayyy...yesss yess" neil and vicky starts giving shake hands to all their friends saying " badhai ho...bhadhai" in excitement...swayam rey n Vishaka smile at their mad friends reaction shaking their head...

At that time swayam's cell rings and fortunately or unfortunately it was kriya who called him...swayam shows his cell to everyone and says " guys guys...shhh...its kriya..." ...

Everyone(except rey) : speakers pe rakh...rey tries to object but all ignore him...swayam keeps the phone on speaker...

Before swayam could say anything, kriya starts

Kriya : swayam muje tumse baat karni hai...abhi...please (in a low tone)

All understand something is wrong by her voice...swayam thinks it's better to remove the speaker mode but rey stops him n signals him to speak...

Swayam : haan kriya..bo bolo..

Kriya : you all were right swayam...you all were right...I was an idiot...who ...who believed that gerk...

Rey gets shocked listening to kriya's words...her words and she was sounding very low...he couldn't understand what's going on...

Swayam n vicky got about whom kriya is talking..this time swayam removed speaker mode without caring about what others or rey will think and goes away to talk to her...all went to have some coffee, near vending machine..rey doesn't go so vicky sits with him...he understands rey's confusion in that moment..rey was in deep thought sitting there..he was looking at the swayam again n again who was busy on phone at another end of the room ..

Vicky : kya soch raha hai?

"Nothing" says rey giving a faint smile...

"She was not talking about you...and she didn't have anyone special in her life till now...it's totally a different matter" says vicky who is very concerned about rey's emotions..he doesn't want any misunderstandings between rey n kriya in this stage...

"(Giving confused look) okhayyy...but why are you telling me all this? I mean i really don't have such questions about her in my mind" says rey as he was confused by vicky's behavior.

"Oh..okay...I thought by kriya's words you might have misunderstood her so..." says vicky slightly scratching his head..

Rey :(shakes his head) it's nothing like that dude...I was just thinking she shouldn't indulge in any problems...you know she is very soft hearted person...it will be easy for people to use her or take advantage of her nature...specially boys...I just hope everything is okay with her...

Vicky couldn't believe his ears...I mean rey just had been to bangalore for 2 days and met kriya for the first time, understood kriya so well..though kriya is a tough and determined girl for the society but only her closed ones know how soft hearted and emotional girl she is...rey was absolutely right...

Rey : oye (shaking hand in front of vicky's eyes)...what happened? ? Where you lost?

Vicky coming to his senses : ahh..ha..nothing. ..I was just wondering how well you have understood kriya in just these 2 days... (giving warm smile) I am happy for you both rey...

Rey : oh hello tu kabse emotional hone laga idiot...come here..he hugs vicky...

Swayam comes and sits with them..."kya scene hai!! Wah wah!! Hugs and all han!!" Comments swayam at rey and vicky...they both break their hug and smiles...by that time others too join them with coffees..amar gives vicky rey swayam their coffees...

Vishaka : swayam everything alright'? I mean (looks at rey for a moment and then looking back at swayam) kriya was little tensed..(completes her question hesitantly)

Swayam : yeah yeah...nothing serious...it's just that ...you know...the male followers issue..like rey she too has a huge fan followers...off course boys..so ab unka chances katham hogaya tho ...obviously aise reactions tho expected hai..

All (except rey n vicky) : "ohhh"

Rey didn't ask anything and also didn't buy whatever swayam said...may be swayam was right but rey got it by kriya's tone that she was upset...and that is what bothering him..

Vicky : shivam.?

Swayam : yeah... (taking deep breath) she went to meet him and tell about rey to him...

Vicky: what? Has she lost it (agressively)? (Looks at rey who looked at vicky immediately when the words came out from his mouth..and by rey's look it was clear that he was not happy with vicky's tone so vicky softening his tone) I mean...we all warned her always but she still belives that he has changed...

Swayam : ab we know that how stubborn she becomes at times...kaun samjaye usse...but good to know that she slapped him today...

Vicky : lolz really? Then she should be happy...why was she sounding low?

Swayam : rey mahashaya (looking at rey with teasing smile)... (all give confused look to swayam) she wants to share the whole matter with rey and she got it that he (looking at rey) is not gonna spare her like we all pamper her end of the day, no matter whatever mistake she does..so she is nervous... (all smile at this new information)(swayam continues after few seconds of pause) rey kya baat hai? 2 days mein she understood you and your nature so well..you know what she said? "Swayam I am afraid how will rey react when I tell him the matter..he will definitely become aggressive and will scold me...his anger is very intense yar...I am really worried..but batana tho hai muje.."

All starts laughing...

Neil : that means she is afraid of rey's anger..

Vishaka : no dude...that means rey has already shown his anger to her... (all became serious when they register Vishakaz words and looks at rey)

Bharat : are yaar...sirf 2 din ke lie tho gaye the...acche se nahi reh sakta tha sale...2 hi din mein apne angry young man ka avtar dikha ke aya tu usse..dara diya na tu usse...

Swayam : rey!! (Rey avoids eye contact with them..because everyone know how aggressively rey reacts when he becomes angry...though he gets angry on closed ones only but still his anger scares others) is it true? Did you fight with kriya in 2 days?

Rey : no...huh..guys calm down..ap log jaise soch rahe ho waisa kuch nahi hai...wo bas..huh..oh as you all know before going to bangalore I and kriya had small clash..or misunderstanding...tho when I saw her first time,

Vicky : you fought with her? I mean... 1st meet mein hi ladai kia tune uske sath?

Rey felt guilty : maine koi jagada nahi kia (he gets up..unable to take all those questions)

Swayam : tho usse kaise pata how will you react when you are angry?

Rey being a stubborn person : I dont know

Vicky : rey (in a warning tone)

Swayam : rey we are asking you something...what did you do to her when you saw her after reaching there (in a serious tone)

Rey could not take all the questions and shouts : HUG KIA...I HUGGED HER...

All stood there spellbound for few seconds then burst out laughing..

Neil : wow dude...gussa tha tu uspe tho hug kia usse..wah wah

Amar : haan yar ...humpe gussa hota hai tho chilla tha hai aur kriya pe gussa aya tho hug kia usse?

Vishaka : wo bhi 1st meet mein...

All laugh again.

Rey : hogaya? And for your kind information, uspe bhi chillaya maine okay? (Got irritated with their teasing)

Vicky : hug karne ke bad?

Rey : haan

Again all starts smiling..

Swayam : this is good haan...1st hug her nicely then shout at her...so that iske anger ka jo intensity hota hai wo thoda control mein aaye... (teases rey further)

Rey : oh hello...kuch bhi kya? And kriya is a strong person, she will handle my "intensity".. (all raise their browse at his last word) (rey cloes his eyes as he realizes he used wrong word) I meant my "anger"...she can handle my anger...wo aap logo ki tarah darti nahi hai..

Swayam : yeah I understood it few minutes back...When I was talking to her on phone...

Neil : guys guys ye sab chodo (excited)...listen listen...rey ne kriya ko dekhte hi 1st time kaise react kia hoga... (neil stands with smiley face and then slowly opens his arms with a romantic hero look)(all burst out laughing...neil continues) rey in new SRK style...

Bharat : angry young man se romantic look mein...

Rey recalls the scene actually happened between him and kriya and thought " yes it was indeed the way neil acted...gosh did I really reacted in a filmy way...in SRK style?..god rey...I hope kriya is not laughing like these people..nooo...what I am thinking?. It was the most precious moment for me when I hugged her..for the first time...yeah..kriya wont think like these idiots (looks at his friends who were still enacting srk style and laughing madly)...I am sure kriya be felt something special in that moment.. (and smiles)"

hey..sorry for the delay..I am really not getting time these days..what to do I dont get a single stretch time to write an update..I am sorry..I may discontinue my works at anytime..sorry but its true...:(

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-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

reserve

unreserve

okay first of all I don't have any problem with you updating late but please don't discontinue your works...

they are really beautiful

now coming to the update

i just loved the boys wala scene..

everyone teasing rey 😳 maza aa gaya.. 😉

on the other hand shivam is irritating kriya 😆

this was a really beautiful update..

all the scenes were running in front of my eyes.

i actually enjoyed reading this part 👍🏼

thanks for the PM

please do continue *baby face*

PS. me first 😃

victory dance

let's party 🥳

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

nooo...jitna time lena hai lo...bt no discontinuation of works...apse baad me baat krti hun...i liked the excitement shown by rey's friends...nd specially...bhabhi...bahot acha laga ye padh ke...so m confused whether shivam ka role itna hi hai ya aur bi hoga...let it be...rey ka gussa..kria ke liye to acha hi hai...i loved the update overall...great work

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

awesomeupdate

itna late kiya apne

phir se aisa mat karo k

coming to the update

its amazing totally loved it

poor rey

sare boys use tease kar raha hai

yaha pe bhi shivam kria ko tang kar raha hai

oh god i just hate him

next time thoda lamba update dho

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#530

Awesome update..
Rey ke frds ka excitment was so good to read.
I really liked d way gang reacted whn got to know dat fought with kriya in her first meeting.
Such a cute part