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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smileysmi



You will get to know in the update 😉
Till then keep guessing...




aur hmein update kab milega??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_luvkreya




aur hmein update kab milega??



very soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum teaser just luved
I was expecting the update but teaser bhi chale ga
I guess kahin woh Swayam toh nahi
Thank u sooo much for the teaser and plzzz do update the next part sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hellooo people..how are you all? Liked the teaser? got it... okay without wasting time I will update the next part...enjoy reading...and please eee read my another post on pg 28...which i posted before the teaser...here we go now...


PART. 6:

Rey tries kriya's number continuously but it sayz switched off...he couldn't understand what to do...he reads her msgs again and again where she said what happened actually last night when she went for dinner with her friends...and sadly it was not his fault also for the whole situation because he was exhausted due to continuous 5 hrs of meeting and presentation...but still he managed to make time to talk to kriya at any cost by coming home early...

He gets ready for the office...tried kriya's number every 10 mins...finally when he was in his car to leave for the office, calls Smriti, kriya's mom and he comes to know that kriya left for the office already...

It was 12.30 pm, still kriya had not switched on her phone...rey felt restless...he calls Smriti once again...

Smriti : hello...haan rey bolo

Rey : hello Smriti mom..(in low tone)

Smriti : she is in meeting beta...actually she handles 4 small scale clients..2 are Bangalore clients and 2, Mumbai based clients...so she is swiping 2 Bangalore clients with the other Mumbai clients of our company so that she can work with her clients when she will be in Mumbai...

Rey : oh...that's a good idea...(still sad)

Smriti : beta can I tell you something about her if you are free?

Rey :(instantly sits straight) yeah aunty...bolie...I am not that busy

Smriti : (smiles) rey sorry to say this but for kriya, her friends Sharon neha simmi and rinni are very very important...she will never disappoint them...because after prathik's death(kriya's father) I used to cry always ...beta for you and payal, nanu was there atleast but for us no one was there to give moral support...kriya also used to be sad always...after some days when kriya became silent in her school also, these friends of her asked her the reason behind her continuous sadness and she expressed them how I always cry remembering prathik...morning till night each of our daily routine, each and every things in the house used to remind me of prathik...and during night his memories used to haunt me...so kriya's friends went home that day and discussed the matter with their parents..their parents next day came to our house..you dont believe rey Sharon also called out her dad from his Dubai business trip saying its very emergency...and all kriya'z friends parents made me understand that I need to move on for my daughter...she is still a kid..she needs me...and moving on in life was not that easy in our house so they suggested to change the house and start life freshly...infact they forced me to shift into their apartment so that all kids will grow together...and I will also get company there...and trust me rey it was the best decision I took to agreeing on their suggestion...I moved here where kriya's friends Sharon neha simmi rinni stays...till date they supported me and kriya in each and every stage of life.. Sharon's and neha's papas always treated kriya as their second daughter...gautham bayya, Sharon's papa, never missed kriya's birthdays...he always makes sure on her birthday he will be in India like how he does on Sharon's birthday...itz endless story rey if I tell you how much they supported us to come out of that stage...today if I am running prathik's bussiness successfully, it is because of their all support and love...so the main base for all this support was kriya's these crazy friends and their concern for kriya so how will she say no to anything they want to do? And since we moved in this apartment, kriya or any of her friends never stayed away from each other...now for the first time kriya is going to stay away from them for a week till they will join her in Mumbai again so they want to spend as much time as they can with kriya...and han you know that it was mine and payal's idea to send kriya to Mumbai for her MBA to give chance to both of you to understand each other...otherwise there are very good colleges in Bangalore itself...but still all the parents are ready to send their daughters to Mumbai with kriya so that till their marriage they can be with each other...there is no need for others to do MBA in Mumbai...they can do it here only but because of their friend kriya they are all comming to Mumbai...thats why beta they hold the special place in kriya's life...so please forgive her...

Rey : mom(shaking his head)

Smriti : no rey...she will give equal importance to you also but it will take some time to adjust new member in her already existed small family...you are not going to be just another friend in her life rey...you will be more than her friends, more than me and more than the families over here who supported her till date always...so it will take some time for her to make such a special place in her life for you...she has to manage other relations without hurting any of them to make you acceptable in her family so please give her some time rey...she is very very sensitive girl...for the world she is a bold girl but we know how soft hearted she is...please rey..

Rey : no ...no Smriti mom...why are you saying sorry...I am not angry on her...infact last night I was hurt not angry and trust me mom I never had an idea that my msgs will affect kriya to this extent..I was exhausted so I slept after waiting for long time...I didn't do it purposely mom...believe me mom my condition is not any better than kriya...its new for me also Smriti mom...even I am not getting how to proceed with this new twist in my life...I am happy obviously with the new change in my life...no doubt...but I am still blank about how do I start off with this new development in my life ..I am..am ...really really sorry...

Smriti : smiles with moist eyes...

Rey : Smriti mom dont force kriya to talk to me...I will try to reach her...let her be herself for some time...and please dont worry we both will patch up soon...

Smriti : I know rey...we trust you and kriya...

Rey : thanks...chalo mom bye and thanks for talking to me...I really needed some one to discuss on it...and as always Smriti mom you only helped me...thanks...

Smriti : laughs...stop buttering me...chalo bye tc...

Disconnects the call...

Now its been 3 days kriya kept her cell switched off...she went to office regularly.. kept herself busy...at home she just spent her time in her room...she was sad...her gang tried to cheer her up indirectly and she laughed also with them but not wholeheartedly...

Reys situation was no different...Vicky and swayam supported him a lot...

It was 3rd day night since that incident, Smriti's cell rings...she spoke for 20 mins and it was worth talking...

Next day afternoon 4pm...kriya in her room...

Kriya : ye mom bhi na...I mean itz height universe ji...dad ke koi old best buddy's company wants to work with us on such an high profile project...and that too they demand me to represent this project on behalf of our company...I mean papa(looking up) does it really make any sense ki since unka beta ye project start karna chahta hai , who started working since just 2 years, so main hummari company ke taraf se uske sath work karu...wo sab tho chodie papa they didn't even sent any details about the project...I mean I just know what is all about this project thats it...no other information provided...huh...aur tho aur papa ek aur interesting baat, mom ko aapke dost ki naam hi yaad nahi aarahi hai...(laughs loudly) I mean ...oh god ...naam tak nahi pata...? But seriously papa if your this friend was really close to you then I wont disappoint you or your friend...I will put my 100% on this project...

Smriti : beta kriya ajao wo agaya hai...he is in office room...(in their house only)

Kriya : okay mom...I will go...save me universe ji(looking at ceiling)...

kriya enters the office room of her house to meet the client who is ready to give kriya a chance on new deal which has really a bright future as well as kriya will get to learn a lot in this project...but as soon as she enters the office room and see a person standing infront of her, she stops in her track..shocked...

the person gives satisfied smile opening his arm inviting her for the hug..kriya who had already tears in her eyes, without wasting a sec directly runs into his arms...both close their eyes absorbing the moment..the completeness they are feeling at that moment...

After some time they free themselves...kriya who had tears in her eyes was about to say something but

The person : dont you dare kriya...don't you dare switch off your phone again...gussa ho.? Felt bad? Shout at me, scream at me or fight with me but dont give me this silent treatment again...I am warning you kriya...

The hurt and pain was clearly visible in his voice...

Kriya : wiping her tears from back of her hand, I am sorry...muje samajme nai aaraha tha kya karu...I was frustrated...I am sorry REY...really sorry...


😆 so who all hated me after reading the teaser? 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oye Hoye! 1st one to comment..Yepppii.. :-D :-D :-D
Coming 2 d updt.. OMG! Itz REYYY!! I'm Super Shocked, actually Pleasantly Shocked! :D
Kriyaansh's 1st meet n that too with a Tight Hug..hayee ^_^
"don't give me this silent treatment again. I'm warning u"-aww Rey said that so cutely.. Luvd this chappy a lottt..
Update soon plz
koyi bhi demand rakhlo, bt pls don't make us wait for 1 week.. Want an update within 2-3 days, baas!!
Edited by --Shukti-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohh !!!!
i wanted to be first 😲 😔
but anyways 2nd hi sahi... 😛😛

now coming to the update

it was amazing

it was shocking 😲😲😲

kriyaansh's first meet that too wit a hug... ☺️

i'm so surprised and pleased

and really happy 😃😃

i loved it

super cute update

loved it

thanks for the PM

update soon

and do PM me

wanna read further son... 😳😳
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
i stil hate u
unres

omggg 🤗
wat an amazing amazing part dear
loved it
so so much
the way smriti explained her past...and their friendship..it was so beautifuly written
sacchi
and the end was a true jhatka for me
haaayyyeee rey yaha agaya usse milne...wah
amazing update
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Read the update and tell me how much you hate me? 😉 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res, will unres aftr 8 pm . I knew it rey/swayam hoga bt jb smriti se baat toh i was sure itz Rey
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Amazing update
As i told this is my fav. Work of ur's
just lovd it,rey fikaring about kriya 😆 muje yaad nhi aying fikar ko kya bolte hai
Wow Wow yha toh sb shane hai
I mean sb ke sb kriyaansh ko milane ke liye lage hue hai
Chalu log😆
Kriyaansh meet was just kya bolu kuch smaj nhi aa rha
Their first hug*still dreaming*
I really like kriyaansh characters in this story
Rey's caring nature for her, so sweet of him
Plz update super soon n a big one plz
Eagerly waiting
From one of pagal reader of this cute story
Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unressed on pg 31..
dekha kitni jaldi unres kar dia maine!! *patting my back*

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