Swaron SS: Two Truths and a Lie(Part 4 on pg. 8!!) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
The Update was Awesum...
Just SuperB :D
Their Emotions were Nicely penned down!!
Continue soon...
Thanks For The Pm...
And Pm Me whn U Update Nxt!!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all you are fantastic writer...👏 it was an amazing update completely filled with suspense.. still i can't guess why is swayam behaving in such a way and what is with police station? now you will have to update fast because i can't handle this type of suspense..😆 so update fast and let this secret out and do pm me...
p.s. thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
wow!!!!
tht's all i can say...
this update was magnificent

both the pov's were so well written 👏👏👏
swayam's as well as of sharon's 😊😊😊
bt plz dono ke beech main sab kuch theek kar do... 😭😭

and why r swaron going to the police station...

thnx for the pm
n plz do pm me whn u update 😃😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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police station? What's this new drama now?? I wanna know the reason why Swayam is angry!!
Please update the next part soon!
The POVs were awesomely penned.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update 😊
But confused
Who is this uncle😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR YOUR COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!! You Guys Are seriously inspiring me to write more and...don't worry...now that i have got your attention im not gonna let you go so easily!!!

I'll try updating as soon as I can...don't believe me on this but i plan to update between Friday and Saturday
SOOO...
watch out for it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey awesome concept... do continue and PM me too
Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1:

A vry intriguing strt.. Sharon z so excited to meet Swayam on the other hand Swayam z so angry on her over somethng... A very well penned chapter...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2:

Another interesting nd suspense filled chapter.. Sharon seems completely clueless so as wat went wrong dat mde Swayam behve lyk dis.. Swayam seems to b deeply hurt by some happenings.. Now y r dey goin to the police station... PoVs were amazingly written.. D update ws vry intriguing.. Suspense remains... Waitin to read wt happens nxt...😊

P.S- Sry fr the lte comment.. Had my xmz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry Guys!!I know I promised to update like a week ago...I've just been really busy...but don't worry I have the next part ready for you guys!!So without further a do...

Part 3 [A]:

Sharon's POV:

I was still watching him through the mirror while he was talking on the phone. I still can't understand why he is doing this…giving me a cold shoulder…everything was fine yesterday… actually yesterday he was being a little too romantic…I came out of my thoughts when I saw Swayam turn back and look at me. His cold gaze sent a chill down my spine even though I was seeing his reflection in the mirror. The next thing he said shocked me. "Don't worry uncle, I'll bring her with me and we will meet you at the police station." I turned back to look at him, my eyes widened. Swayam cut the phone and moved towards the bathroom leaving me filled with confusion and questions. Wait… what just happened?...did he just say…police station? Why? No I must have heard wrong, did I? Is there something I'm missing here? Yesterday… Swayam went to work and at that time he seemed fine… It was our anniversary so obviously everything was fine! But what happened in that span of time that caused Swayam's behavior to change. I continued to ponder until Swayam came out and broke my chain of thought by saying, "After breakfast get ready, we're going to head out." I replied with a question, "What happened yesterday?" He looked at me and then coldly said, "Don't ask questions because I'm not going to answer them." He walked out of the room and I followed him down to the dining room. Kaka had already set out the food and left for the kitchen leaving us alone. As Swayam sat down, I flipped his plate over and began serving him food. I felt his gaze set on me and the heat rushed to my cheeks. I turned to see him still lost in me. I turned to see him still lost in me I placed a spoon in front of him, but didn't move away from his gaze.

Third Person:

The two lovebirds were lost in each other until something caught Swayam's eye. He gently pulled Sharon's arm and stood up. Now they stood in front of each other with Sharon still lost in her Swayam, but Swayam eyes flickered with worry. He gently moved Sharon's hair from her shoulder accidently brushing his finger against her skin. Sharon shivered at his touch and closed her eyes in anticipation. Swayam's gaze fell on a healing wound on Sharon's shoulder. Sharon opened her eyes to see a teary-eyed Swayam with his head facing the ground. Sharon cupped his face and pulled his face up so he was looking in her eyes. She questioned Swayam, with her eyes, for the reason of his tears. Swayam gently touched her wound. Sharon flinched at the slight touch. Sharon's eyes widened in alarm at Swayam's discovery. The sight in front of her brought her back from her thoughts. A silent tear made its way out of Swayam's eye only to be wiped away by Sharon's fingers. Swayam looked at her apologetically, and Sharon just shook her head as if the pain of the wound had never occurred. Swayam rested his forehead against Sharon's for support. His tears had still not stopped; they were still making their way out. And Swayam did not stop them. He let his sorrows pour out. He let the burden on his mind release and let his heart be flooded with his unlimited amount of emotions. Swayam's tears never made their way all the way through path. Sharon wiped and kissed them away, to end Swayam's unknown pain. Sharon closed her own eyes, trying to stop herself from breaking down. She didn't know what else to do, but seeing the love of her life in this condition broke her on the inside. She felt a pair of soft lips on the same wound slowly and gently releasing her from its pain. Sharon took a sharp breath in and slipped her hands in to Swayam's hair and around his neck holding him in the position. Swayam continued to kiss her lightly along her shoulder and up to her neck. They were so lost in the moment that they didn't even notice Kaka came back to the dining room. When Swayam and Sharon heard him clear his throat Swayam jerked away from Sharon. The passion of the moment still hung between them, but now it was mixed with a hint of melancholy and bitterness. The feeling of emptiness filled their hearts, while one showed the pain; the other one hid it skillfully behind a poker face. "Beta…mein kana garam kar doon?" Kaka asked trying not to make the situation more awkward. "Koi zarurat nahi hai Kaka…mujhe bhook nahi hain."Swayam said swiftly ending the matter. He turned on his heels and moved towards his room, but stopped midway. Without turning to Sharon, he addressed her, "Agar tumha kana hai toh khalo…30 minutes mein hum nikal rahe hain." He said in monotone voice showing none of the emotions that poured out a matter of minutes ago. He continued to make his way to their room. "Beta aap toh khalo," Kaka hesitantly said sensing the tensed atmosphere. "Nahi, Kaka mujhe bhi bhook nahi lag rahi hain," Sharon said in a trembling voice trying to hold the tears in. For some reason, her heart felt as if it had been rejected…pushed away…when the moment broke her heart broke with it. She pulled herself away from her grief and dragged herself to their room. They got ready silently, with Swayam avoiding Sharon and Sharon still consoling herself due to the incomplete lost moment-that-could-have-been. The ride to the station was no better. A strange awkwardness filled the confined area and the habitants fidgeted under the pressure of it. Never had they felt this way before because before they shared everything with each other. Now they restrained the multiple emotions inside themselves. One too afraid to let the emotions slip, while the other one was trying to control the uncontrollable. Finally their torturing journey ended and they reached their destination…the police station.

Before you guys kill me for such a short update let me just say I did this only to build some suspense in the story. Now before you start throwing you shoes at me for this let me just tell I will update the rest tomorrow so don't worry its coming really soon...So plz comment and like and seriously tell me if you like how the story is going or not!!!

Lubna:)

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