Swaron SS: Two Truths and a Lie(Part 4 on pg. 8!!) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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What's in the box?? Haha the gift.
Please continue nd update soon!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LUBNA JALDI JALDI UPDT PLZZZ? I DO SO WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's amazing one dear please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its ausum.. beautifully penned down..
pm me wen u update nxt time..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys! I'm Back with my the second part of my SS!!!!And HUGE thank you to all the people that read and commented and also liked the first update!!!Seriously Guys I got a lot of encouragement from your comments!!A whole lot appreciation from my side!!Know without further a do the next part ENJOY!!

Part 2:

Sharon's POV:

The coldness in his eyes sent chills down my spine. I was shocked by his behavior. By his sluggish movements and drooping eyelids, I could tell he had been drinking for a long time and, by now, was completely drunk. His unblinking eyes bore into me not moving for a second. Those dark eyes held so many emotions at once. While they oozed hatred and burned with anger, they also held tears that were filled with grief and care. I turned my face not being able to handle his intense gaze. What could have happened...? This can't be just because I'm late… because I know Swayam… He wouldn't be angry he would more likely to be worried… I glanced at him to see if I can catch a glimpse of the love that I am so used to seeing in his eyes, but it was all hidden by the other emotions. He sat silently and gripped his, again, filled glass. He picked it up to finish the content of the glass and then he pushed it away. He then turned to me again and opened his mouth to speak, but was interrupted by the bartender. "I think you should take him home… that was his 11th glass… just an opinion," the bartender cautiously suggested. Swayam turned to the bartender holding out a finger and got out of his seat to tell the bartender off. As soon as he got up, gravity did its magic. Before he hit the ground, I caught his arm and took his weight on to my shoulders. I paid the bill and grabbed the gift. I passed a grateful look at the bartender… but in return he gave me a pitiful and sympathetic one and mouthed a good luck. I was surprised by his action, but I didn't have time to ponder over it as Swayam tried to move by himself again. Again, before he fell, I grabbed and pulled his arm around my shoulders and locked my arm around his waist. I turned my face away again before his eyes locked on to mine. I was already shaken by how our night had tuned out and couldn't take any more pressure from his piercing gaze. I silently led him out of the restaurant and to the car. The ride home was filled with a dark silence, but I didn't dare to break it and neither did Swayam. By the time we entered our home, Swayam had gained enough consciousness to walk by himself. So without saying a single word or even sparing me a glance, he walked into our room, stripped himself down to his boxers, fell in to the bed, and knocked out as soon as his head hit the pillow. I stood by our door watching all this. In all the time we have been together Swayam has never acted this way. He is the one that usually stops people from drinking too much and today he drowned himself in the alcoholic beverage that he usually despises. I made my way to the bathroom, but what I saw in the mirror surprised me. I was surprised by the tear-stained face that stood opposite of me. The reflection left me, again, wondering what could have ruined one of the most important days of my life…? What could have upset Swayam to the point of drinking…? I tried to find my answers in the mirror but it was only confused me more. Ignoring my aching heart, I decided to talk to Swayam in the morning and settle the matter so I never have to see this side of Swayam again. I stepped out of the bathroom to find Swayam still sleeping and he didn't even stir when I laid down next to him. I wrapped the blanket tightly around myself hoping to substitute it for Swayam's arms that usually do the job of taking me to my sweet dreams at night. It did not help and I was left silently crying myself to sleep. As sleep crept up on me, I only wished that the morning sun's rays bring a new beginning for us and a ending for this dark time…

Swayam's POV:

The rays of the sun hit my face waking me from my sleep. I rubbed my eyes and turned over to find Sharon's side of the bed empty. I opened my eyes and let them wonder until my heart saw what it wanted to see. I propped myself up on my elbows to get a clear view of the most beautiful sight and let a small grin spread across my lips. My Sharon in front of the mirror with her wet hair over her…but there was something missing… the glow in her pools of green were lost somewhere. The tired look on her face told me she had not slept well at all. Slowly her gaze fell on me through the mirror. As soon as we locked eyes, her eyes began asking my numerous questions. That's when it all came back… all those memories flashed in front of my eyes… the ones from last night that I tried to drown out with alcohol…but failed miserably…and along with them came the emotions… anger, hatred, frustration, pain and… I felt my heart break again… I turned away from the questioning gaze and flashing memories when my phone rang. I looked at the phone and it flashed "Uncle". I picked it up and walked towards the window. "Good morning beta," he said. "Morning uncle," I replied back because there was nothing good about this morning. I concentrated on the conversation in an attempt to keep the tears, burning with anger, from falling. "Beta, I know it's early, but tumhe aur use yaha ana hoga for…" I swiftly cut him off and turned towards Sharon who was secretly listening to my conversation and replied, "Don't worry uncle, I'll bring her with me and we will meet you at the police station."

Sooo..How waz it?? Plz don't kill me for not explaining the reason of Swayam's anger you'll definitely find out in the next update..but until that happens your going to have to deal with the suspense!!hehe...yup i'm evil like that...so do leave your comments and do like and also tell me if i should continue or not...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's interesting one and u penned Sharon POV beautifully
Please update next one . Thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a nice chappy lubna. Sharon confused with all of sudden change behaviour of swayam. She not able to read his eyes nd saw love for her. She gave her support to him, so they can go back upto their home. Sharon saw him sleeping silently nd she confused why swayam behaving this way. Why swayam taking her to police station. Lubna u killing us by suspense.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Hey Dear...

Loved both the chapters...u have some serious skills as a writer...lovely flow and the expression u chose was just fab...loved the chapter...swayam's anger...sharon's pain and confusion amazingly written...can't wait for the next part 😳

Luv
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lubna..I really love ur style of writing..its intrigueing with suspence and emotive at the same time without much of haste!!read the two updates and could feel the swaRon-ish connect to it..do update soon..I am curious to know what had made swayam this angry on Sharon when his love for her is so very reflective..!!its too early to wish but I really hope this be's a longer SS..enjoying the updates..thankx for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update :-) can't wait to find out why Swayam was angry

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