ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Murder mystery still continous...
I think khushi will help atnav solve dis mystery..
Nice update..

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Wow loving it
Cant wait for more...
Thanks for the pm...

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

This mature Arnav and Khushi are very refreshing.

Expecting more sparks when they work together .

The story is really exciting what with Khushi saying"have we met before?" to most people😆

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Perspectives.

@Perspectives.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Liked the easy flow of conversation in the get-together and I like Bharadwaj..making sure his friend allocates enough time for himself while Arnav is going to dig deeper in his case now! The banter between them is a treat to read!

Why do I get Talaash vibes from those murders? Or is it because I just saw it on TV?

Edited by deereyedgal504 - 12 years ago

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

i loved d easiness btwn them...
nd she seems to know him too uh????
wats happening here...!!! plz update sooon

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

You know what I loved about this chapter?

Arnav and Khushi as normal people having a normal conversation with a bit of leg pulling thrown in,
It was a normal party scene, with casual conversations, teasing, catching up with each other. Payal is one spunky person!

Khushi making a simple, casual offer to help Arnav with his case was brilliant touch of narrative technique to bring the two characters into closer contact, setting up the future of the story, with the last question that you got Khushi to throw at Arnav and us, the readers - have they met before??

This update was like an oasis of calm in the midst of Khushi's health problems and Arnav's proffessional ones. It was a real pleasure to read it.

Now I look forward to two bright brains being made to work together to solve the mystery of the horrific crimes by their brillaint creator!😃

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

I love this odd Khushi - she is like a perfect mix of Sybill Trelawney, Phoebe Buffay, Richard Castle, Kate Beckett, that psychic from Talaash - all of whom I think are SPLENDID characters.

I think Arnav Singh Raizada needs the "The Aquarius Woman" chapter from Linda Goodman's Sunsigns pronto

PS: Filter coffee...YUMMY

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Eagerly waited ...thanks for pm. This update was light ...or is there any hint hidden...can i take the points Khushi used to write a thriller be your's too...they have met ...their conversation over coffee smells good...so Khushi is going to help ...looks interesting...