ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Sooo the doc that khushi went to c knows her...but why is he lying to her? Maybe he knows what is actually her reason behind these visions she gets...nd the visions r connected to what she writes about? Interesting...it's so suspensfull to know what is up with khushi nd her visions!
Ooo so Arnav nd khushi r gonna meet again! Yeaaa! Lol hopefully their meeting will be more impactfull...maybe khushi can help Arnav solve the murder haha partners in fighting crime!! :D

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lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Yet another interesting update RB! Cannot wait for them to meet! Thanks for the pm.

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Superb update, wow khushi hallucinations are quite extreme and vivid as she explained to the doctor that she could smell the perfume the lady had on. I wonder if khushi actually does know the doctor or has she seen him when she hallucinates. So finally Arnav and khushi are going to meet at the dinner arranged by his friend and Arnav has already decided that because she is a writer she must be a nerd, brilliant. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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kristin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Ahhahaha looking forward to the arshi meet!

This is sooo trippy! I mean Khushi's illness and the murders going on!

Can't wait for the next chapter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Chapter 4

Though the pace of the story is slow, yet every chapter is unveiling something about the characters or the plot.

Khushi character is definitely captivating me and its very intimidating!!!

Oh! Boy I knew Arnav will give up his job but not his passion and I guess what he did as part of his job was his profession.

"It was simple dinner affair with a writer who was probably half nerd. What could possibly go wrong?"

I am guessing everything will go wrong!!

PS: Thank you for making the updates regularly, for these kind of stories its important to maintain the flow and continuity.

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Wow super interesting...loving where the story is heading...continue soon...

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

I guess the blind date is with Khushi? Nerd? I think not!

So Khushi's doctor knows her from before...what is the doctor hiding? Do they know about Khushi's abilities??

Who is this killer targeting successful women? Is he collecting body parts; skin from one, and other organs from another?

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suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

catching up now.. sorry was a little busy. thank you for the PMs :)

the first thing i want to say is... ehehheheheheheh... you mentioned "Rushabhavathi" in your story... hehehehe... we always make fun of that area when we travel to Mysore. My father sometimes tells that he will dunk us in it too :D man that place stinks!!!

and the ayurvedic massage- have not got one of those, but would totally love one. it will be extremely relaxing I am sure.

Mysore Palace looks beautiful in the evening. I have such fond memories of that place. Eating cotton candy, the horse ride and the people. I have eaten the most softest idlis there too. They were called Mallige idllis. Fat and fluffy- absolutely delicious. :) :) :) made me all nostalgic.

Reading so much details about the place I am guessing you have visited it too :) Nice nice

So this is Khushi- was she the girl in the flashback? Or was she a witness?

Also I know this doesn't reflect well on my G.K, but I don't know what an A.C.P badge looks like! Must google today.

Almost forgot - Even though I like Mysore Palace, I have a soft spot for Jaganmohan Palace. I think it is not given enough importance.

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suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Khushi has hallucinations with epileptic attacks. I did not know that could happen actually.. interesting.. I have this gut feeling that she has some suppressed memories of something.

the temple, M.S. Subbalakshmi singing Vishnu Sahasranama, Bhaja Govindam in the morning, the smell of the water on the temple stones, the smell of the camphor is awesome.. I love the taste of the "theertha" with little tulsi and camphor :) Would ask my mom if I could get more when I was a kid :D :D :D

heheh.. apparently my cousins and sister used to go to temple exactly when they used to do that aarti so that they can get the prasad - this was during the summer holidays. I just remember standing in the queue twice and smiling cheekily to get prasad :D :D : D

nice one..

PS: If you feel the story is going to involve violent crime scenes then you can put a NC-17 warning. I recently came to know that there are members on the forum who are as young as 11-12. Would make sense to warn such members against the violent content.

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suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Does Khushi have a multiple personality disorder?

what did they do to her?

what is that old doc hiding?

why should payal call him for advice?

she should so get the hypnotherapy thing. she should.

she was adopted when she was 12? what happened to her parents? Especially her mom. How did she die? Was she murdered? Is that what Khushi doesn't remember?

I could so be Arnav's side-kick. Asking all the right questions and all that. :D :D

oooh so now Arnav and Khushi will meet formally.

Hmpf.. nerdy writer it seems 😉