ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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aysh05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1041

Mine

Do you know the feeling of being the first one to post a response? I learnt the thrill after I started following your work :)

Thank you for such an amazing story... Truely exceptional and I feel like such a grownup when I undersatnd the emotions you penned. I could hug you if i could.

Thank you :)

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1042

😃

Time is a big healer ...

though their scars will remain as a ghastly reminder of their past ...

but even scars start fading with time ... 😃

Life was much more than past. They had a future which they could decide, dictate and design for themselves.

Thanks RB for a thrilling and captivating story ... you had us all glued to our screens chewing on our lip and biting our nails ...

Hope to get more in future from you after your exams ...

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Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1043

Fab story!!

I loved each & every update of it. It was one hell of a ride!! You kept the suspense & thrill intact in each update.. I felt sorry for all the victims of this experiment. They had to go through so much. It was a cruel study.

Akash did all that just to get Arnav's attention?? Those were some gruesome murders. Akash's & Khushi's connection was very creepy.

You are one of the few talented writers who can master every genre of writing - romance, political, thriller etc..

Waiting for the epilogue to get a hint of Arhi's future!

Thanks for the pm.

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Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1044

Just read the Epilogue.

Must say - a perfect end to the story. All the mysteries are resolved & all the qns are answered now.

Arnav chose a very nice spot for their new journey together.

Eagerly waiting for the Arhi's next meeting in 'Love, Inc' !!

Thanks for the pm.

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dis_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1045

wow..👏

thank u for such a thrilling story..i really enjoyed it..

loved it :)

take care!!!

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1046

Ah the sweet feeling of closure! =)

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RockBarbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1047

Originally posted by: aysh05
Madam you are the queen of twists & turns... What a fantastic update/ending. I aplaud you!! Ok so after your sabatical from IF, dare I hope for how the two go about tracking the rest of the children...

I am not going on sabbatical, per se. It's just that I wont be writing in the maniacal speed I have been currently maintaining. I have two unfinished FFs on Geet and Madhubala respectively - an odd tale of two people and a thriller along with we, the people. I will be working on those and see it to completion :=)

Give the Geet and Madhubala one a chance :=) They aren't too bad, I think!

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1048

Wow amazing ending
loved it
will miss this story
awesome update
thanx for this beautiful story
thanx for the pm
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Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

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And so they finally put a sad chapter behind them to make a future or themselves. Badly bruised emotionally, it seems only fit that they end up together as it would be really hard to trust or talk about what they went through. Hope the monotonous lifestyle brings them the peace they deserve and that they get a chance to recapture the joys they missed as kids through their kids.

I loved this story for the intelligence you infused in it, the credibility you brought to your characters, the settings of the story but most of all for the pace of the story. You did warn that it was not going to appeal to all but anyone who read the beginning, got hooked on y our daily updates to check wether their guesses were right or wrong. I liked that you dropped some clues and answered some questions along the way as this type of writing is not very common on the forum. You have an amazing way with words and can easily get this story published. Good luck with the studies and if I may request, please come back to write some,more as I have truly enjoyed Gravity and Velocity. I will start reading We the people soon and expect to,be just as hooked on it as I have been on these 2. I am absolutely loving Love Inc and hope to see an update as today is Saturday, the day he is supposed to go back to the bookstore . . . .