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Hey Guyzzz...This is my very first OS for D3...Sooo excited to share it with u people!! đ
i m wrtng this os on d current track of d3 nd swaron equation. As u all know that tani is handling her responsibily in a very wrong way nd is getting too hyper with everyone. also bcoz of the Hot or Not poll (lolzz!) she feels insecure so wo sabko neecha dikhana chahti hai, esp. Sharon. So going by the ongoing track her insecurity is on the peak right now...
i m wrtng this os on d current track of d3 nd swaron equation. As u all know that tani is handling her responsibily in a very wrong way nd is getting too hyper with everyone. also bcoz of the Hot or Not poll (lolzz!) she feels insecure so wo sabko neecha dikhana chahti hai, esp. Sharon. So going by the ongoing track her insecurity is on the peak right now...
This OS is my version of the rehearsal hall scene and Tani's verbal spat with the D3 gang...
First scene: In Rehersal Hall.
The D3 gang is present nd this is the break time for them after the hectic schedule nd routine. They are having fun.
Swayam: come on guys chalo jaldi break over ho gaya hai humme reherse bhi toh karna hai.
Nil: are yaar swayam abhi ruk jaa na kya zhayada captancy dikha raha hai.
Vicky: haan swayam abhi 5 min hi to huye hai.
Bharat: haan aur agar zhayada reherse kiya na meine toh meri sarak jayegi.. Bheja kaam karna band kar dega.
Amar: haan mera bi.
Ashi: haan swayam hum sab bohot tiered types ho gaye hai.
Neha: haan neha is also feeling tired.
Then sharon enters with some files this is the rountine files of their professional dance team. She enters nd asks swayam about how d r rehersals going nd kitna routine follow kiya.
Swayam: well, its almost done but sab tired ho gaye the so...
[Sab ki taraf dekh kar kehta h] sharon: kkk no problem but as humme dono kaam manage karne hai so humme abhi rehersals continue karni padhegi... But as tum sab kafi tired sound kar rahe ho so hum pehele prof. Team ka routine follow kar lete hai nd isse tum sab ko break bhi mil jayega nd thodha change bhi ho jayega.. So what say!!
Swayam: yaa.. I think u r right sharon.. So come on guys.
Bharat: haan tu toh manega hi na iski baat..
All gang in chorus: akhir ye best assisstent ever jo hai.. lol!!
[ then swayam sharon's hawa hawa look look , sharon blushes a l'll bit.. After noticing that sharon's blushing swayam brushes his hand through his hair nd flashes his cutieee pie wali smile!!]
The gang looks at them nd all boys r dng chemistry step.
Vikky: guys aaj kal ye dono kuch zhayada hi lovey dovey nhi ho rahe hai..
Nil: akhir chakkar kya hai
Neha: neha is feeling same babu sryy vickyyy!!
{Then tani came to the rehersal hall nd she looks at SwaRon still gazing lovingly at eachother and the whole gang looking at them, confused. Tani seeing this gets hyper again and starts yelling.}
Taani: ye sab kya ho rha hai yaha.. What r u guys upto... Ese karoge waha par perform...!
[ swaron's lovey dovey moment is interrupted and they look at Taani.. Nd d gang starts making wierd faces bcoz they are all upset by tani's behaviour]
Bharat: aa gayi fir se dimag kharab karne.
[Swayam gaze him nd ask him to shut up!!]
Tani: meine kuch pucha hai aap sab se ki ye sab kya ho raha hai!! What is this?
Swayam: actually tani wo hum...
[ tani intrupt him nd say..]
tani: oh plzz.. Bhai mujhe excuses dene ki koi zharoorat nhi hai.. Ki hum ye kar rahe the ya wo kar rahe the.. Plzzz stop all this.
Sharon: listen babes, pehele ek baar baat sun toh lo.. Hum reherse hi kar rahe the nd humme apni responsibilty ke bare mein pata hai..
Tani: ohh! Accha agar itna hi responsibility ka khayal hai toh ab tak apni cs ki responsibilties kyo nhi ki.
Sharon: you!
[Swayam uska haat pakadh leta hai and asks her to calm down by lookng in her eyes .]
Simmi: what d hell.. How dare u to talk to sharon like this.
Tani: this is none of ur business.
[ everyone shocked by her behaviour but as she is swayam's sister nd rey's gf!! So they control their tempor]
Vicky: tani humne itne competitions jeete hai nd we know ki humme kya karna hai.
Tani: oh seriously esa lag toh nahi raha.. (She raises her eyebrows and smirks in an insulting way)
Swayam: dekho tani tum galat sense mein le rahi ho.. Wo by chance esa ho gaya that jab tum ayi toh we r not rehearsing and hum break le rah the.. Bas and sab apni responsibilties acche se jaante hai.
Tani: ok well so agar esa hai toh ab tak toh aap logo ka routine pura ho gaya hoga na.. So, show me the routine...
Swayam: yaa almost ho hi gaya hai pura but...
Tani: but! What do u mean by but.. And almost? oh so yeh responsibilty fulfil kar rahe hai aap sab.
Simmi: listen humme apne professional team ki bhi reherse karni hoti hai.
Tani: wat do u mean by this.. I don't care i want my ans. ki ab tak aapka routine kyo pura nhi hua...
Swayam: tani i know tum hyper ho but plzzz stop over reacting
tani: overreacting, wow.. Khud ko toh apni responsibilities ka khyal hai nahi pata nahi captain kese ban gaye...
Sharon: hey u!! [ in a very loud voice, sun nahi sakti na humari sahron apne swayam k bare mein kuch bhi! chahe wo koi bhi ho uski behen hi kyo na ho]. What do you mean to say Taani?.. That swayam apni responsibilities acche se fulfil nahi karta.. How dare u!! Tum esa kehe bhi kese skti ho.. 'swayam' ne aaj tak apni har ek responsibilty fulfill ki hai chahe wo as a student ho, as a frnd ho, as a captain ho, as a brother ho..aur as a boyfr...!! [ sharon stops at that moment bcoz she realizes ki yaha par koi unke relationship k bare mein nhi janta nd after a pause she continues] yaa as ACS ho nd rahi baat responsibility ki toh shayad tum[pointing towards tani in a full on diva look] tum apni responsibilities bhool rahi ho... So plzzz next time bolne se pehele soch lena ki kiske bare mein bol rahi ho aur wo bhi kiske samne[ she is in her full on diva mode but this time a care,love, emotion nd a pain for swayam is reflected in her eyes bcoz use pata hai that iss time swayam ko kesa lag raha hoga bcozz he loves his sis. Alot]
{tani and the whole gang stunned by sharon's drastic change and unexpected behavior and concern fr swayam.}
( swayam remains silent and his eyes become visibly moist bcoz of the unpredictable reactions by both his sister nd by his 'Diva' who became 'siren' once again for him)
[ray enters in a fun mood nd stunned by seeing a wierd reaction on everyone's face.. At that time sharon was also pointing her finger towards tani... he gets confused]
ray: what happened guys is everything okkk?? [He looks at swayam who is looking at his siren with tears in his eyes!!]
vicky:: tu hi pooch na apni tanni se uff sryyy my mistake iss college ki gs se.
Ray: vicky saaf saaf bata hua kya hai?? (He tries to make eye contact with swayam nd ask him whats d matter but isnt able to get swayam's attention).
Simmi: ray its better ki tum khud tani se hi puch lo.
Ray: guys!! Swayam tu toh bata ki hua kya hai nd sharon tum ese tani ki taraf kyo point out kar rahi ho.. What's d matter?
Sharon: leave it ray! I don't want ki yaha fir se ki tamasha ho..
[rey interrupts her..]
rey: but sharon!!
Sharon:[ looks at him in a warning wala look nd tell him that pllzzz... No more discussions]
rey: tani plzz.. Tum toh batao ki hua kya hai!
[ tani was not in her senses but suddenly she remember that poll.. Nd fir se her hyperrr!! Wala attitude nd rudeness starts]
tani: oh so Miss. Sharon aap koi tamasha nhi chahti right nd aap mujhe itna kya suna rahi hain.. Apne konsa aaj tak bhai ki respect ki aaj tak unhe apna pet hi mana hai na so why 'now'?
[sharon stunned at her statement nd remember all those scenes whenever she insulted swayam.. she is left speechless. The word ' pet' echos in her ear again and again... ]
tani: kya hua haan?Aap bhul gayi?.. Nd sharon aapko yaad dilwa du that aap mere under kaam karti hain so don't even try to dominate me... Understood.. [ she points her finger at sharon nd tells her that u have only 1 hr left complete ur routine nd this is ur responsibility to show me all the work.. Understood]
{ everyone shocked including ray nd the whole gang but swayam is silent.. He didn't utter a single word bcoz his only focuss is sharon his 'siren nd the precious tears in her eyes, he only wanted to know that why uski sharon uske khilaf kuch sun nahi payi.. He feels the same pain in her eyes same as reflected in his eyes.}
ray: tanii! [shouting at her..] ye kya kar rahi ho tum kya ho gaya hai tumhe nd ye kese baat kar rahi ho tum sharon se!!
Tani: plzzz ray pehele mujhe kuch nahi samajh ata tha but now i know each nd everything very clearly.. So plzzz mujhe lecture dene ki bajaye aap apni team pe focuss karo..[ wo apna haath rey se chudhwa kar jane lagti hai nd jate time she turns back nd reminds to sharon that 1 hr nd raises one eyebrow in a warning way]
ray: what the helll!![ ray jese hi sharon ki taraf usse console krne nd tani ki taraf se sryy kehene ata hai]
ray: sharon... Plzzz sharon look at me plzzz..
[All the gang gets hurt nd vicky nd nil made the face as they want to kill tani]
simmi: rey! That's enough ya toh tum apni gf ko samjha lo wrna bohot bura hoga..
[ sharon leaves wiping her tears.. Swayam goes behind her]
gang: God knows ab kya hoga!!
[ ray stands in a hopeless pose]
sharon ran hrough the corridor by remembring all her moments nd tani's words, they seem like a thunderclap to her.
Swayam goes behind her nd he knows that sharon must be on the terrace.
Swayam moves towards her nd looks at her when she wipes her tears and says that mein bohot buri hoon swayam.. Meine hamesha tumhe hurt kiya hai.. Swayam came to her nd wiped her tears nd says...
Swayam: kisne kaha tumse ki tum buri ho? ki tumne mujhe hurt kiya hai ... No u don't hurt me tumne kabhi bhi mujhe hurt nhi kiya hai sharon nd meri sharon toh buri ho hi nhi skti..
By listening that sharon hugs swayam tightlyy nd breaks into tears in his arms..
The end
This is d first part of my story.
I really hope u people enjoyed my OS...If u people like it I'll be more than happy to post the second part of my SwaRon OS...
First scene: In Rehersal Hall.
The D3 gang is present nd this is the break time for them after the hectic schedule nd routine. They are having fun.
Swayam: come on guys chalo jaldi break over ho gaya hai humme reherse bhi toh karna hai.
Nil: are yaar swayam abhi ruk jaa na kya zhayada captancy dikha raha hai.
Vicky: haan swayam abhi 5 min hi to huye hai.
Bharat: haan aur agar zhayada reherse kiya na meine toh meri sarak jayegi.. Bheja kaam karna band kar dega.
Amar: haan mera bi.
Ashi: haan swayam hum sab bohot tiered types ho gaye hai.
Neha: haan neha is also feeling tired.
Then sharon enters with some files this is the rountine files of their professional dance team. She enters nd asks swayam about how d r rehersals going nd kitna routine follow kiya.
Swayam: well, its almost done but sab tired ho gaye the so...
[Sab ki taraf dekh kar kehta h] sharon: kkk no problem but as humme dono kaam manage karne hai so humme abhi rehersals continue karni padhegi... But as tum sab kafi tired sound kar rahe ho so hum pehele prof. Team ka routine follow kar lete hai nd isse tum sab ko break bhi mil jayega nd thodha change bhi ho jayega.. So what say!!
Swayam: yaa.. I think u r right sharon.. So come on guys.
Bharat: haan tu toh manega hi na iski baat..
All gang in chorus: akhir ye best assisstent ever jo hai.. lol!!
[ then swayam sharon's hawa hawa look look , sharon blushes a l'll bit.. After noticing that sharon's blushing swayam brushes his hand through his hair nd flashes his cutieee pie wali smile!!]
The gang looks at them nd all boys r dng chemistry step.
Vikky: guys aaj kal ye dono kuch zhayada hi lovey dovey nhi ho rahe hai..
Nil: akhir chakkar kya hai
Neha: neha is feeling same babu sryy vickyyy!!
{Then tani came to the rehersal hall nd she looks at SwaRon still gazing lovingly at eachother and the whole gang looking at them, confused. Tani seeing this gets hyper again and starts yelling.}
Taani: ye sab kya ho rha hai yaha.. What r u guys upto... Ese karoge waha par perform...!
[ swaron's lovey dovey moment is interrupted and they look at Taani.. Nd d gang starts making wierd faces bcoz they are all upset by tani's behaviour]
Bharat: aa gayi fir se dimag kharab karne.
[Swayam gaze him nd ask him to shut up!!]
Tani: meine kuch pucha hai aap sab se ki ye sab kya ho raha hai!! What is this?
Swayam: actually tani wo hum...
[ tani intrupt him nd say..]
tani: oh plzz.. Bhai mujhe excuses dene ki koi zharoorat nhi hai.. Ki hum ye kar rahe the ya wo kar rahe the.. Plzzz stop all this.
Sharon: listen babes, pehele ek baar baat sun toh lo.. Hum reherse hi kar rahe the nd humme apni responsibilty ke bare mein pata hai..
Tani: ohh! Accha agar itna hi responsibility ka khayal hai toh ab tak apni cs ki responsibilties kyo nhi ki.
Sharon: you!
[Swayam uska haat pakadh leta hai and asks her to calm down by lookng in her eyes .]
Simmi: what d hell.. How dare u to talk to sharon like this.
Tani: this is none of ur business.
[ everyone shocked by her behaviour but as she is swayam's sister nd rey's gf!! So they control their tempor]
Vicky: tani humne itne competitions jeete hai nd we know ki humme kya karna hai.
Tani: oh seriously esa lag toh nahi raha.. (She raises her eyebrows and smirks in an insulting way)
Swayam: dekho tani tum galat sense mein le rahi ho.. Wo by chance esa ho gaya that jab tum ayi toh we r not rehearsing and hum break le rah the.. Bas and sab apni responsibilties acche se jaante hai.
Tani: ok well so agar esa hai toh ab tak toh aap logo ka routine pura ho gaya hoga na.. So, show me the routine...
Swayam: yaa almost ho hi gaya hai pura but...
Tani: but! What do u mean by but.. And almost? oh so yeh responsibilty fulfil kar rahe hai aap sab.
Simmi: listen humme apne professional team ki bhi reherse karni hoti hai.
Tani: wat do u mean by this.. I don't care i want my ans. ki ab tak aapka routine kyo pura nhi hua...
Swayam: tani i know tum hyper ho but plzzz stop over reacting
tani: overreacting, wow.. Khud ko toh apni responsibilities ka khyal hai nahi pata nahi captain kese ban gaye...
Sharon: hey u!! [ in a very loud voice, sun nahi sakti na humari sahron apne swayam k bare mein kuch bhi! chahe wo koi bhi ho uski behen hi kyo na ho]. What do you mean to say Taani?.. That swayam apni responsibilities acche se fulfil nahi karta.. How dare u!! Tum esa kehe bhi kese skti ho.. 'swayam' ne aaj tak apni har ek responsibilty fulfill ki hai chahe wo as a student ho, as a frnd ho, as a captain ho, as a brother ho..aur as a boyfr...!! [ sharon stops at that moment bcoz she realizes ki yaha par koi unke relationship k bare mein nhi janta nd after a pause she continues] yaa as ACS ho nd rahi baat responsibility ki toh shayad tum[pointing towards tani in a full on diva look] tum apni responsibilities bhool rahi ho... So plzzz next time bolne se pehele soch lena ki kiske bare mein bol rahi ho aur wo bhi kiske samne[ she is in her full on diva mode but this time a care,love, emotion nd a pain for swayam is reflected in her eyes bcoz use pata hai that iss time swayam ko kesa lag raha hoga bcozz he loves his sis. Alot]
{tani and the whole gang stunned by sharon's drastic change and unexpected behavior and concern fr swayam.}
( swayam remains silent and his eyes become visibly moist bcoz of the unpredictable reactions by both his sister nd by his 'Diva' who became 'siren' once again for him)
[ray enters in a fun mood nd stunned by seeing a wierd reaction on everyone's face.. At that time sharon was also pointing her finger towards tani... he gets confused]
ray: what happened guys is everything okkk?? [He looks at swayam who is looking at his siren with tears in his eyes!!]
vicky:: tu hi pooch na apni tanni se uff sryyy my mistake iss college ki gs se.
Ray: vicky saaf saaf bata hua kya hai?? (He tries to make eye contact with swayam nd ask him whats d matter but isnt able to get swayam's attention).
Simmi: ray its better ki tum khud tani se hi puch lo.
Ray: guys!! Swayam tu toh bata ki hua kya hai nd sharon tum ese tani ki taraf kyo point out kar rahi ho.. What's d matter?
Sharon: leave it ray! I don't want ki yaha fir se ki tamasha ho..
[rey interrupts her..]
rey: but sharon!!
Sharon:[ looks at him in a warning wala look nd tell him that pllzzz... No more discussions]
rey: tani plzz.. Tum toh batao ki hua kya hai!
[ tani was not in her senses but suddenly she remember that poll.. Nd fir se her hyperrr!! Wala attitude nd rudeness starts]
tani: oh so Miss. Sharon aap koi tamasha nhi chahti right nd aap mujhe itna kya suna rahi hain.. Apne konsa aaj tak bhai ki respect ki aaj tak unhe apna pet hi mana hai na so why 'now'?
[sharon stunned at her statement nd remember all those scenes whenever she insulted swayam.. she is left speechless. The word ' pet' echos in her ear again and again... ]
tani: kya hua haan?Aap bhul gayi?.. Nd sharon aapko yaad dilwa du that aap mere under kaam karti hain so don't even try to dominate me... Understood.. [ she points her finger at sharon nd tells her that u have only 1 hr left complete ur routine nd this is ur responsibility to show me all the work.. Understood]
{ everyone shocked including ray nd the whole gang but swayam is silent.. He didn't utter a single word bcoz his only focuss is sharon his 'siren nd the precious tears in her eyes, he only wanted to know that why uski sharon uske khilaf kuch sun nahi payi.. He feels the same pain in her eyes same as reflected in his eyes.}
ray: tanii! [shouting at her..] ye kya kar rahi ho tum kya ho gaya hai tumhe nd ye kese baat kar rahi ho tum sharon se!!
Tani: plzzz ray pehele mujhe kuch nahi samajh ata tha but now i know each nd everything very clearly.. So plzzz mujhe lecture dene ki bajaye aap apni team pe focuss karo..[ wo apna haath rey se chudhwa kar jane lagti hai nd jate time she turns back nd reminds to sharon that 1 hr nd raises one eyebrow in a warning way]
ray: what the helll!![ ray jese hi sharon ki taraf usse console krne nd tani ki taraf se sryy kehene ata hai]
ray: sharon... Plzzz sharon look at me plzzz..
[All the gang gets hurt nd vicky nd nil made the face as they want to kill tani]
simmi: rey! That's enough ya toh tum apni gf ko samjha lo wrna bohot bura hoga..
[ sharon leaves wiping her tears.. Swayam goes behind her]
gang: God knows ab kya hoga!!
[ ray stands in a hopeless pose]
sharon ran hrough the corridor by remembring all her moments nd tani's words, they seem like a thunderclap to her.
Swayam goes behind her nd he knows that sharon must be on the terrace.
Swayam moves towards her nd looks at her when she wipes her tears and says that mein bohot buri hoon swayam.. Meine hamesha tumhe hurt kiya hai.. Swayam came to her nd wiped her tears nd says...
Swayam: kisne kaha tumse ki tum buri ho? ki tumne mujhe hurt kiya hai ... No u don't hurt me tumne kabhi bhi mujhe hurt nhi kiya hai sharon nd meri sharon toh buri ho hi nhi skti..
By listening that sharon hugs swayam tightlyy nd breaks into tears in his arms..
The end
This is d first part of my story.
I really hope u people enjoyed my OS...If u people like it I'll be more than happy to post the second part of my SwaRon OS...
Thanks for reading! do leave your reviews...đ
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