Arshi FF:Over The Coffee chap10 pg41 6/7

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tamanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Fleur_de_Lis

hmm...

18+ is okay...

but a request...

that is not a CRITICISM

don't write over Sex as it is in "50 shades"

please give more importance to the souls and the feelings !!!

telling these lines cause you are inspired from 50 shades...

please don't take it other wise...

and this is a risky take...

let's wait and watch how you do it...

expectations are high !!!

and please give a longer update if possible

andwaitingfor your comments in Rusted Relations

offcourse i wont b writing the s*x scenes d way dey are in 50 shades bcoz dey r written frm d novel point of view nd writing an ff is way more different and as i said my uts r cuming up so dats why it ws a shorter one hope u'll like d nxt one

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Tithi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

superb update...
OMG...i wanna nkow more and more..
Plz update soon
Thanks for PM

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tamanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

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gmsk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

AWWW such a cute update... i love this arnie😳

& ya i think u should add arnav's POV too..it'll b more fun to knw wht's he thinkng.. 😆

n thank u soo much 4 d pm... 😊

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saba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Awesome update both are very cute
Arnav is very naughty ;)
continue soon please

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AdventureAwaits

@AdventureAwaits

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

WOW GREAT IDEA.

SIMPLY LOVE IT. PLEASE PM ME!

WANT TO READ MORE.

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Neen

@nnsunn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Awesome update.
The date was wonderful. Arnav made her dance and he loves that trouble, so sweet. Would love to read arnav's pov.
Thanks 4 pm

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nataliya

@nataliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

👏

sex boosters😳

arvav pov😆

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hariniroshini

@hariniroshini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

sizzling update...:P

i loved when at the last arnav commented on khushi's dress

and exactly the lift door shuts...

awesome writing yaar...:)

arshi couldnot see each other for few days owing to xamz...😡

damn that xamz...

and i think u should add arnav's naughty and flirty pov definitely...

update soon...:)

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damon fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

First thanx for the pm. Loved the update as always! You should add Arnav's POV also! This was longer than the previous!...:-) Arnav 17 girlfriends!!! I was like OMG!!!!!...:-} Update soon!!

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